From the very beginning, I only knew what I have got from my Father. Yet, through all these years living in Bradley family, I couldn't help but notice many things. Strange things happening around me. Strange things happening within me. The things that are not logical. The things that are hard to understand, for I feel only one emotion. I am Pride, the first Homunculus. And today I have to start my life from the very beginning...
"Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood" crossover.
Inspired by the story "Family" by FleetlordAvatar.
EDIT: Featured? Oh, wow! (19.09.2017)
Chapters (12)
looking forward for more
7068448 Thank you for your comment. I'm really glad that my story is enjoyed by the others.
Good chapter,I will be waiting for more
7085172 Thank you kindly. Though I feel a bit discouraged, 'cause the story has got so little readers...
I like it! I hope you carry on writing this, there's not many good FMA:B crossovers on here and I think you have a winner
Mmmm, slaughter. Regardless, i really like this story. Moar Please? And have my favorite.
Very nice. I was never the biggest fan of Brotherhood Pride, but Dark Side here...I think I could come to enjoy his story. I'm already fond of the Apple Bloom interaction, filly deserves some attention, and am looking forward to watching the relationship progress. Keep up the good work, I'll be Watching for the next update!
WOOT UPDATE!!! It's not DEAD!!
Brains!!!! ty for updating. write more when your inner muse feels acting up.
7383172 Well, I sure hope you have enjoyed the latest chapter then.
Chan chan CHAAAAAAN~
Shit's going down! or not. Maybe he's overthinking things... give him some weed.
P.S. Like the story, it shows potential
First I though it would be very similar to the story this was based off but is different so that is a plus. Hopping for more chapters though 
7488354 I'm happy to hear you liked the story so far. And believe me, I want more chapters just as much as you do... However, inspiration is quite a cranky thing.
Just found this story. Interesting. Surprised that Pride still possess his Ultimate Shadow powers. Then again Homunculi are odd to begin with.
7488499 Indeed, in the FA:B Universe, he had limits to where he could go. In Equestria, however, that limit is completely lifted. You could blame Truth for it.
It's a pleasure to hear you like my story. I'm glad you've found it... I wish more readers would stumble upon it though.
7489212 Thank you! It's a pleasure to hear you liked it.
A little shaky on the grammer, but an enjoyable chapter regardless. Looking forward to more.
well twilight took the whole shadows of infinity eyes rather well.
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♪♫♪All by myse-e-elf~
Proofreading it all by myse-e-elf~♪♫
7490654 Who knows if she spent a single moment sleeping that night...
I imagine that Twilight is gushing over the idea of a Homunculus, artificial beings with extraordinary powers. Either she can't or doesn't sense the Philosopher Stone that is his heart. I imagine that the science of Alchemy would greatly intrigue her as well.
7493852 Oh, but she did sense the Philosopher's Stone, didn't she?
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Then isn't she aware of the thousands of souls trapped in pain that make up the stone?
7496818 She couldn't quite place her hoof on it due to never seeing something like that before.
Loving this story
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Please tell me this story isn't dead.
DAWWWWwwwww
So twilight kinda just shrugs off the scariest thing to hit equestria ever? Still liking the story but kind of a lame reveal
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Who said that she does?... Ah, yes. You did.
As a fellow fan of the Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood series, I am excited to read through this and hope you continue to update! The Homunculus Pride...he always kinda freaked me out the most, he was just pure evil in the anime. On the plus side, his shadow powers are of course AWESOME.
Can't wait for more!
loving this story hope theres more
7798424 Guess what...? It is not~
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YEEEEAAAAAAH!! WHOOO-HOOO!!
8155753 Ah, I'm really glad I've brought you so much glee today. I really hope you enjoy how this story is developing... After all, it's not easy for me to decide which direction to walk in every new chapter that I write.
Huh, I've been meaning to get into this anime, but never had the time. Seems fun
8155832 Heh, that anime can be called an anthology of different tough situations one could come across in their life, and the ways of dealing with them. Watching FMA:B was a really interesting experience for me, to say the least. I would be lying if I said I didn't learn a thing or two from that anime.
Rule #1, do not piss off pride. Rule#2, DO NOT PISS OFF PRIDE!
8155858 Rule #3: If you've pissed off Pride, just relax and DIE!!!
P.S. There's no escape.
8155858 Oh, and it's too bad you're reading this story before actually watching the anime. After all, Pride's true identity is a HUGE spoiler. It's one of the most unexpected turns of events in FMA:B.
I hope for an update, cause this is fun, and can't wait to see how diamond tiara ends up reacting
8155883 Thank you. I'm really glad you have enjoyed the story.. and there will be more. I just don't know when.
8155893 yas! Whenever it is, it will be glorious!
I. Need. MOOOAAAARRR.
Your alive!? Cool dont stop your story is cool.
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Thanks to all of you. I'm really glad you're rejoiced that my story is still alive. I hope you continue reading it whenever the new update comes out. I apologise that I feel like writing a new chapter quite rarely...
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The great thing about FMA is that Twilight has never faced an enemy like Pride before. Everyone she's faced has always been outright evil, Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek. Not a single one of them managed to convince an entire nation that they were nothing more than a harmless child. Not a one of them waited until the perfect moment to strike, they were all just two dimensional villains. Pride's not like those kiddie show villains, he's patient. He can wait as long as he needs to, be it ten years or ten thousand years.
Great chapter. Glad you are back, and you left us a cliffhanger.
8159717 That is so true. I, however, had started to write this story for a different reason: I just really wanted to throw Pride in that completely different and new world to him, where he can start from scratch and no longer has to be evil. Being evil and not being evil is now his choice, as there's no "Father" who would make that choice for him in this world.
Yet, even I don't know how the whole thing is going to turn out... and to me, that is the most exciting thing about writing this story.