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The Mystery Fluttershy Fan
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You've got my favorite, but i think ill wait to read untill i see a clop chapter, ya know read it all at once.
Favorited. Will be waiting for more.
can't wait for more
*edit* go back through this chapter and look for missing punctuations. There are several.
Thanks for many favourites and likes so far. I changed the title of the first chapter, because I finally figured out a consistent theme, I'm going to use for them.
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Clop chapters won't be labelled this time, because most of them will have clop in them, but they will also be longer and contain a lot of storyline too.
Alright, 2 chapters are good enough for my read now!
I'll guess that I NEED to read it, since it's YOUR story... =.='
i mean, when an author which has written a good story uploads another one, I would read it .. but eh, i ALWAYS Feel That I'm FORCED to do so... =.='
Okay, seriously, proofread the chapters. PLEASE
there needs to be a punctuation mark after a character finishes talking, for example:
Chris said, "I want to go to the park" <incorrect.
Chris said, "I want to go to the park." <correct.
There are also missing commas, etc. I want to get into this story so badly, but these mistakes are too numerous to ignore.
please fix them.
Daring Do always escaped, nothing would ever stop her. The pegasus whispered to herself hoping for inspiration. "What would Daring Do, do?"
Heh, do do.
i can't wait to see how this story ends, i'm fuckin hooked already. keep it up bro
very good sir keep it up and i shall have to give you all my spikes
Woo another story
First clopfic.
NEVER. AGAIN.
ummm...strange much? this is probably the one time where i would've appreciated less details, but hey. what are ya gonna do? *tries to forget details* edit: and also, just so i can say it. FIRST!
is it bad i was turned on when she was operating on pinkie?
why did i read this? i hope the rest of this story isn't as violent.
Also I hope Pinkie dies. It would be the greatest mercy to give her at this point.
1604837 Just a Little.
Personally I've seen stranger.
Damn.
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unfortunately the first chapter says otherwise.
(like)
Woah...
= Cupcakes
If Mufiana = Severing
Is she worst or you just ignored Cupcakes and Pinkie's Illogical Madness and her Weird skills about teleporting?
I want a licking toy too D:
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I'm such a sick bastard
that was hot and at the same time , dreadful
... sick, but good. 
My body isn't ready for this story yet, but I rushed myself to read it, and I have to say, not bad.
Kinky shit.
I really like the story so far, but I do see quite a few mistakes. I would love to edit it for you. For free, of course. Only if you want to though.
I LOVE IT!
so pinkie is essentially a torso with a head now... that's demented, slightly confusing with the way the process was worded though i.e.
so did she remove the foreleg or the hind leg first pardon me if I seem ignorant but I always associate hips with back legs
also, I'm assuming that it's her hind leg becuase her vagina is bleeding onto the saw... I think, maybe clariffy a tad more, but hey it's your story I have no direct influence over it and it wasn't anything major, so minor nitpick aside, I'm enjoying the story so far, carry on
p.s. good job so far with the ironic imprisonment, though I'm curious as to how the other ones will be implemented, I have ideas for all but magic...
p.p.s. where does princess Celestia fit into all this, Spike's bound to report Twilight missing so after a day or two, so is it safe to assume the first chapter is just the beginning of the end and the majority of the story will be the week before she gets abducted
p.p.p.s. sorry for the long comment, I'm just more prone to speak my mind late at night, if I had read this during the day I probably would have held my tongue.
This new character is really spooky. But i like the story alot and cant wait for the next ironic
Hearts everpony
it has a romance tag what ships are in this? i really wish i could put pinkie out of her misery ugh i would hate to live with such mutilation
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do more please
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The only romance part is probably the deceitful clop scene between the OC and Rainbow Dash. I should probably remove that tag, since it's not really a big theme.
Also I've written chapter 4, editing time. Any of you wanna wait another week for a proofreader?
I might release this chapter soon, but I'm going to request a editor on a group I joined a little while ago, just for that. Who will hopefully look at everything I've written so far. My Little Slave included.
Anypony wanna volunteer?
Also for those of you interested. Half of My Little Slave had been read on youtube. Here's his channel and he has other great readings like The Scootaloo Diaries check him out. [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/user/TheCaptainSand]
Well at least I can give a new chapter as a new years gift. Enjoy.
Romance tag removed, Daring Do added as a character tag.
How do you come up with these tortures? Is your mind just that f***ed up?
Oh well, I can't really say anything I've been known to be able to create some bloody techniques in my mind... usually designed to kill very slowly, and have the subject be disgusted with themselves as well.
In danger of being called a freak... rip out Fluttershy's feathers one by one, just for the hell of it.
Yaaaaay!!!!!!! A new chapter!
Wait a sec... Oh god what the hell am I doing with my life if a porn story featuring ponies bondage and rape is the pinnacle of my day!?!?
why did i favorite this?
This history is very dark, i like it !
when will be the next chapter?
Mufiana grinned, this grin was very different from her friendly one, it looked way too big and showed way too many teeth. "Very good, Element of Loyalty, you lasted quite a while. I plan to bring all of you here, to be my little slaves and to help me with a very important mission".
That escalated quickly.
Love that second chapter, can't wait to read the rest!
Oh, you have a couple errors here and there, if you have time to fix them, that would be great!
Good stuff and keep up the good work on whatever you're doing
Well?
You enslaved all of them? This story sounds like a nightmare to one such as myself, I can't bear to see/read about Rainbow Dash being in pain... it burns my heart.
Twilight isn't questioning why the others are already at this mysterious mothaf***** castle, why?
Me am scared to read ahead, stuck in a castle with a witch or Princess more powerful than the Princesses! I'd run the hell away!
2252146 It all happens over a week. Let's assume that like most groups of friends they only meet up on weekends, especially Twilight who is the busiest pony of all of them. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie, the two most social ponies are the first to disappear.
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First clopfic? Then why would you start with this one?
I would recommend easing your way into stuff this dark. There are pleasant romantic clopfics I could recommend.
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No, always start with hardcore, extremely kinky, horror clop. Always.
Oh thank god no gore flutter shy is to innocent
Yay !
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Will spike get to inform celestia or he likes his naps so much that he does not care?
Is it one more introductory chapters?
In the sonic rainboom episode rarity did get butterfly wings. Would a limb restoration spell be possible?
No wonder Everypony wants to forget about this place lots of things to forget.
PLease write the next chapter,please
This story thus far is just as lovely as I had hoped
