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Not knowing how to properly comment, I'll write a comment commenting my lack of comment.
100/10 would rape, molest, torture, murder.
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WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU EVEN DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS!!! Nyx is awful and should never be added to a story, EVERRRRR
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upvote simply for the story picture being a woman eating a delicious-looking taco. (I'm hungry, sue me.)
This story is very... strange. Upvote.
2974117 Not knowing how to insult you for your lack of commenting, I'll insult you with an insult insulting your lack of comment.
O MEH GERD WRITE MORE NOW
Ok...I have read the title and the description, so for shits and giggles, I'm going to comment as I go along,
W....What? The first two sentences and...Oh god this was a big mistake.
Well that's rude ;-;
Oh....oh....uh... ;-; Well, it can only get better from here...right?
...I spoke too soon. Twilight, why ya gotta do this, gurl? ;-;
AT LEAST LET HER CRY, DAMMIT.
What. The. Fuck.
What. The. Fuck.
What in the actual fuck.
Say wut?
I am not fond of these OC children either. Jolly good show.
To all Nyx-Lovers and R34Button Mash-Lovers.
No god... no god please no, no, no, noooooooooooooooo...
I would give this a thumbs up because it has few grammar errors and stuff.
But I'm giving it 2 (1) down because of 2 reasons.
1. Snowdrop is alive while Twily is alicorn, and that's unexplained.
2. I don't know why everyone hates them so much, but I can't stand to see them hurt.
looks at title...
can we NOT do that? please? thanks.
On the other hand I always do end up laughing whenever i see ponies just harrass/ harm/ attack Nyx, especially if it is made clear that they know who and what she is. " hey everyone lets go beat the crap out of Nightmare Moon, certainly this will end well for all parties involved!:
no comedy or story like some other things i've read which made them actually good :/ .....
3052170
I'll sue you! Just kitten. Haven't seen you for ages, mang!
I'm gonna read the shit out of this later. Liking now because I already know it'll be good.
3052237
Beautiful.
WHAT THE FUCKING MOTHERCUNTED FUCK???
Please do one for Buttonmash. His voice makes my ears bleed.
In regards to this story...
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COLLECT ALL THE GIFS!
Delete this immediately!!
The end was too good.
In fact, I'd venture to say it was, "WAY PAST COOL!"
3052388 You, Son, are full of Win, Pie, and now have permission to marry Applejack.
3052393
Delete your account immediately, you little litter-coated cat shit.
3052397
Yus! It's been my dream!
3052345
life's been rough man. been in and out of the hospital for the past few weeks with a kidney infection.
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Aye... Well I hope you get better man. Peace.
3052455
thanks man.
Yes...
That is all....
3052388
You mad?
3052499
Not really? I dunno, I just tend to care about characters more than the next guy. Doesn't mean I'm incapable of doing some dark shit to them too.
3052510
Good.
No need to get so angry of a fic.
No. Absolutely not. Foul. Terrible. Deletion-worthy.
3052518
Lol. I just wanted to see how many gifs I could put that were related to people's feels. x3 I mean, understand where they're coming from, but it's a fic! You can write you own and love 'em all you want.
Have a follow. ^^
i'm sorry this was probably the least interesting mutilation fic(not rape or torture) i've ever read, and i've read quite a few
there was no build up, just plain mutilation, and they get this for eating twilight's jerky? this smells more like a bad troll fic than one someone wants to read
this wasn't torture, torture doesn't cause permanent damage where as mutilation does. there's a difference. Or if you call that torture it was just boring, you could do much better, add in mental shock and torture
if a victim can easily see that they are going to die it just becomes a blunt murder with nothing backing it, by smashing their legs to powder, you achieved nothing more than a dull murder of two fillies
also the torture of the characters isn't important, it's the torture of the readers mind, you want the reader to feel helpless when reading making it hard to take, or they just don't care. i lost interest after the second paragraph but read the whole thing either way just to make sure my comment was justified and oh boy is it
okay now one thing that threw me off was when they threw up blood? at what point did you ever cause any damage to their lungs or their stomachs to cause them to throw up blood at any single point? you burned them that doesn't make them throw up blood
also what about nyx's horn? you didn't say twilight cut it off, you should add that at some point, or why didn't she use it to defend herself?
also
what? what was this!? this is possibly the worst line i have ever seen placed in a story, ever! your mixing something of poetry in a story where nowhere else is centered around that type of wording or that type of narration
you get 2/10
but you still get an upvote because you still mutilated them in a great way, you could probably go further because of magic, but over all interesting
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Oh thanks. You should read some of my stories while you're at it.
3052541
So is a Button Mash raping his mother fic, but I don't see a lot of people bashing on it.
Still better than season three finale.
3052572
Gotta work on my own, mang! War fics are my game now. x3
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Thank you for your comment. I appreciate the lengthy critique, as well as the inclusion of areas I could've improved upon. Your review of my story was not only uplifting, but enlightening as well.
Meh, still better that the garbage coookie cutter gamer Luna fics
Oh my sweet lord.
I can't decide of this is the best or worst thing to ever happen. Leaning toward the first
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3052735
What did you fucking expect?
3052588
Oh come on. At least when you have time?
3052579
Strangely, among the folk rooting for it, I do see bashers.
3052237
That. That made me laugh.