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The Mystery Fluttershy Fan


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Comments ( 27 )

Sequel?

I know she died at the end, but... that might've been just her hopeful imagination. With some CPR I'm sure Pinkie can bring her back (for more). She didn't even get to play with any stallions, after all.

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Ha ha glad you enjoyed it. But I need to get back to the novel, I'm writing. I just did this as a quick change of pace.

Why so many dislikes? Is it because of the content?

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I'm wondering why too. Probably a lot of people disliking based just on the description :(.

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Hm, it's a shame too.

Hey! Someone disliked my comment!

Just read this. Very good writing, I feel bad for her. Also:

little sister's beautiful snatch

6610508 It's possible I have trolls following me. My last story started out with a lot of dislikes but then the likes quickly overtook them.

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Huh, that sucks. If that is happening, hope they give up eventually.


After all, there's no excuse for art. :ajsmug:

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I don't think it's trolls following you around - it's people who camp the New feed and just dislike anything that has a premise they don't like. Your premise alone has a lot of things that will trigger those kinds of users. I long ago decided that dislikes are irrelevant to my decision to read / not read a piece, because I happen to enjoy a lot of 'controversial' content that generates a lot of downvotes.

It's also helped me to ignore the downvotes on my own fic.

:pinkiehappy: I like this dark but satisfying story.

:pinkiecrazy: Poor Marble went through so much. :pinkiesmile:

6610608 it's an amazing fic in my opinion.

Darkly ridiculous humor and fap-worthy.

Pretty neat work, thank you. But I think if Pinkie wasn't so much ooc (especially in regards to this death in end), it will be very impressive masterpiece.:twilightsmile:

Dafuq did I just read? XD :rainbowlaugh:

I came to this

6785529 Best compliment a clopfic author could ask for :)

Oh my god, this was way too dark. Poor Marble :fluttercry:

That was epic. Instant fave!

Well written. Dark but good. Nice job.

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You aren't the only one who asks themself that question.

This should be tagged with Marble Pie, not Pie Sisters.

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When this was written (November 2015), said tag didn't exist. The separate 'Marble Pie' tag only came to be recently (January 2017).

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So, now it should be changed.

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I know, right? Marble didn't suffer nearly as much as that little slut deserved. And they didn't even have an extra bit where Pinkie fucked her corpse with a futa cock! Outrageous. :rainbowwild:

JESUS CHRIST. :rainbowlaugh:

:twilightsmile: I really enjoy the dark humor and how Pinkie is almost entirely in character lol, great story!

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