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mrhappyface
Yay! I have a Bio nw! I am a ** year old living in ********** ** ******** I am a communist and when I'm not playing Skyrim or Fapping I'm writing fics on this site. Praise Satan!
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Lol? So slightly strange right now... How do people come up with so strange ideas?
158482 Drugs, alcohol, video games, me I just make it up as I go along.
This makes me laugh. It's so horrible in such a cheap way that it's absolutely ridiculous, and I presume that was your intention.
I'm really not sure how to rate, I want to give it 5 stars because it is such a grotesque jewel of pressed horseapples. Then again, having a 0.5 or 1 rating might give it better advertising (readers will get the 0.5 story of their lifetime).
Humans and quadrupeds, read this if you want a diarrhea version of south park minus the philosophical parts.
Annaversery preasent
srsly?
Srsly?
Seriously?
No I kid, but this is pretty awful, but honestly it does make it funnier.
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....WA----WWHHAAAA-----Wa____-wwwa___-------....::::WA!..................................WHAT!
Ugh, I thought trollfics weren't allowed.
Right, This needs work... A LOT OF WORK ! Actually just burn it and start over.
This fic could be used to teach a class on how not to write Fanfiction.
If this was intentional,
If this was unintentional,
Either way, I enjoyed reading it, in a strange way. Now off to read 'The Room' Fanfiction!!!!!
I'm not going to lie, all these comments just made me want to read this more. Enjoy the 0.5. Not even going to explain why, it's obvious.
As for the whole "tickle fight" thing, did anyone watch that Family Guy episode where Ryan Reynolds does that to him? Was almost going to rate this with 1 star since it reminded me of that, but then I remember that even that part was poorly written.
158582 It wasn't trollfic fudge dick.
158717 and replying to someone with an insault with WITHOUT A DOUBT prevent people from thinking you as a troll,right?
all you had to say was it wasnt a trollfic
but im actually on your side about it cus i have read trollfics before and can tell this isnt one of them
Well that was every bit as bad on all of the levels I expected.... I didn't even have to finish the third paragraph... Trollfic or not, it does need more than a little polish... One thing you should never do is interrupt a story abruptly to offer a complicated method of discovering what a character looks like, rather than simply describing them. It's also generally a bad idea for characters to look alike unless there is a very specific reason for them to, and even so, it's usually not the best idea to describe them as looking similar directly. Slang terms generally have no place in narration unless its a 1st person narrative... Subject matter... well there's no guidelines for that... You missed a few subjects to go with some of your verbs, and you spelled anniversary and present incorrectly...
Honestly I'd like to find something nice to say about it so it doesn't seem like I'm being outright adversarial, but objectively, I can't.
I can say that regardless of whether it was a trollfic, I feel trolled having skimmed the small portion I did. It's an entirely honest and as objective as I could be about it critique.
Welp, if it is not a trollfic, it's bad enough to look like one. This is funny, but also pretty bad, sorry.
"Oh maybe this one might be different, no blood, no shit, no piss, just normal good'ol sex"
I was sooooo bucking wrong....
5/5 as always. Satan was no doubt joyed to see this wonderful addition to the psycho Twilight chronicle, and I have enjoyed this addition very much. Bravo.
Here we see an example of a trollfic. This one take the reader on the premise of a possible filly Twilight-OC babysiter but as soon as it starts it degradetes to a mindless shock-rape.
just plain awful
...that is close to how my friend was raped...
If you conducted this with mastery, it could've been something so powerful...
179331 I know, To bad I sleep through english class. (Yet for some reson i'm passing spanish.)
sick
252106 and arousing!
This is what needs to happen to you:
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Why is the stripper from pinkie pies story here such a bitch, change the character on one of them or else its wierd.
290635 How bout I change the OC from this one with your mother?
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The person who rote this, NEEDS TO GO STAB THEM SELVES 37 TIMES IN THE CHEST AND THEN SHOT THERE DICK OFF.
i was looking for a good ol' filly twilight story
*clap clap clap clap*thank you for ruining my day
lol that ending
Well that was the most worst story i have ever read
268855
PLEASE CAN THIS HAPPEN
WTF!!!!!!
What the actual fuck??
3222516 Ikr.
6671642 AYE!!
Dafuq?? I mean, I know my foalcon rapes, but this is just WAY too far!!
252257 Gross! How could anyone ever find this arousing?! It's disgusting!
You have a problem
I.... Wow. You sir... Have officially earned my dislike. I am crying not because of the story, but the writing. HOW THE ACTUAL FUCK COULD ANYONE LOOK AT THIS AND SAY "YEP> THIS IS GOOD. AND THEN HAVE IT SUBMITTED AND ACCEPTED BY THE SITE ADMINS?!?!
Wow... Good idea... But like needs a lot of work..
Bruh...
Yikes, that's a little too dark, even for me, and I'm into the slapping and stuff real good, but that other stuff, that was a turn off at the end . . . .
Oh my fucking lord...............................................
Not going to lie; I laughed my ass off.
Lol.
well,shit!
6948300 THANK YOU!!!!Every time I try to submit a story,with almost perfect writing,they say it have grammatical errors!
178223 ...
6794346 yeeup
It caused me to cum without orgasm that's how bad it is