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I am a self proclaimed horror and dark fantasy fic writer. You want darkness, death, and despair? You've come to the right place. Also an eternal Twilight Sparkle and avid Lovecraft fan.


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Interesting... Very very interesting is this some kind of "The thing" story? In any case good shit right there!

I hope this "Twilight" dont kill everywhere where she go.

Interesting stuff here. :D
I'm definitely going to follow this one.



There was a noticeable spring in my step as

NO! DO NOT MOVE ON LIKE THAT! I REQUIRE AN EXPLANATION! Tho I suppose we will get the anwser due time.

"I'm perfectly fine, Spike, and I'd love to go to the party with you," I replied sweetly, "I'm sure that Moon Dancer would love whatever present you got for her."


Spike froze.

Spike.exe has stopped working

He took a step back and visibly shivered before narrowing his eyes. I frowned in bemusement at his reaction and took a step forward.

... what's wrong?

"Stop," he said suddenly, "Twilight, what's going on here?"

That's what I'd like to know!

"What am I—" he shook his head vigorously and glared at me "—Twilight, why do you sound like Minuette? "

Okay. So. Through my head just ran a lot of scenarios what could have happened, ranging from they just talkin and due to... whatever Twi is or has happened to her, she just copied to voice and (a bit of a gore warning for I understand there is a lot of easily disturbed people out there) Twilight literally skinning and/or eating them... so yeah...

Or maybe I could just find a way to keep him quiet until I figured out how to properly speak.

Twiiiii... what are you planning? :trixieshiftright:
Whatever it is I support it :pinkiecrazy:

What to do...

What to do... what to do...

I am... intrested(?). Will read and track.

Im wondering if this is some kind of eldritch being thats somehow possessed Twilight.

Yeah, and meanwhile Lyra and Amethyst Star are halfway to Ponyville, screaming, "It'll never follow us here!"

Oh! I completely forgot about them! Oh this is gonna be fun... :trollestia:

So uh, glad to help you with er, ideas for writing more. :unsuresweetie:

Please don't feel you need to give me any credit. :fluttershyouch:

It's not so much that I have an idea -- well, not now at any rate, it's more that because you reminded me they were there, a seed has been planted in my brain that will eventually sprout into a full blown idea when the moment's just right. That's how my ideas generally work when I'm writing. Thanks for that, though! :pinkiesmile:

This is creeping me the [BEEP] out in multiple ways.

... Interesting...

*me after reading this*

..... i am think something NOW TEORY WHAT FUCK HELL ITS HERE No!

Intereste to see where this goes.

Kind of a slow start in my opinion, considering were two chapters in.

The Monk

The slow start is somewhat of a staple with most of my stories. I have a habit of drawing things out, sometimes unnecessarily, but usually I have a reason depending on the type of story.

Wow. This is really interesting.

I came over here from one of your other stories (A survivor's guide...) because I really liked it and I wanted to see what your other stories were like.

But the only way I can describe this story is "What the Fuck?".
Sometimes it's a question, sometimes it's an interrobang (!?). But it's always the same sentence.
Every god damn chapter.

Edit: I found a picture that descibes the feeling I have at the end of the chapters.

Yeah, this one is a bit more out there. The main themes are existence, purpose, and something... else. I wrote this story because tbe idea wouldn't let me go, and now you have this. :pinkiesmile:

My questions are as follows: What the buck!? What the BUCK!? The buck is this?! The buck is Twilight?! The buck happened and caused Twilight to steal Minuette's voice?! and, most importantly: The buck is going on!?

Of course Pinkie knows. If she didn't, then it wouldn't really be pinkie, now would it?

Hmmmm, so Twilight can't taste? Interesting.

Oh god she just ate A impossible amount of food... what’s gonna happen?!

I think Twilight Sparkle's soul has been supplanted by a Shoggoth, or some other horrific abomination.

for me its like ??????????WTF TOO GOOD MORE 10/10

Ahhhh was the suspense is killing me.

Nothing is more terrifying than nothing. :fluttercry:

What is a pony, anyway?

This is becoming more sad than scary to me.

That's the idea. Once you get past the initial shock and horror of the situation, sadness is almost always bound to follow.

I don't understand but I like it

Maybe the voice shenanigans are still happening and Minuta is going to suddenly vomit up a metric assload of apple food.

:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: the horror, the horror!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
The Darkness!!! :yay:

My guess is either Twilight died in a world ending event of her own doing (possibly the bold writing hinting at this) and (some of) her soul timelooped (which is why she's pro friendship rather than shut in pre NMM)
NMM recognised the threat that Twilight would become and was able to summon an eldrich horror to posses/replace her, but being in the body of a bearer it's being harmonised.

Comment posted by Loudly Curious deleted Aug 14th, 2018

Well, this is getting interesting.

Oooh, this is getting better. An affliction that affects the very magic and boundaries of the world itself, the past forcing itself on the future, and endless possibilities to be had.

So.... Lovely~ i need more :3

Really have to wonder what caused it to latch onto purple smart.

Earlier I thought it could be Twilight having died before and come back in time to "fix" things, this chapter only strengthens that thought.

Comment posted by Dever999 deleted Aug 14th, 2018

me too
only twilight came from infinity
only she could not taste the food at all and something is wrong
and in any way twilight seems to have two emotions and none at the same time

Now I am more confuse

Don’t you hate it when you’re trying to figure out your existence and you accidentally forget you’re an abomination of nature? Me too! Remember to always check the three Cs: Consciousness, Corruption and Ceaseless screaming. Have a nice day!

Not all planes take off vertically and not all stories need to get right into the action. You should patent this sense of dread!

When you think something is nothing it’s fine... but when you think nothing is something it becomes truly frightening.

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