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Can you please explain to me from an artistic perspective why you chose to write this?
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not the worst backstory I've read for Trixie, that one grimdark one was far worst.
Ignore the haters. This was well written and hot!
Cause this has so much potential as a non-rape fic.
Daddy comes home, gives Trixie a few spanks with his belt for making a mess then post-spanking hugs. Then he realizes he's been neglecting teaching her magic and gives her some lessons.
OR he goes too far, breaks down and Trixie has to reassure him for a cute role reversal.
To my mind, both those things are better than a rapefic.
But y'know what? Write what ye like. I don't have ta like it.
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Thanks :) I knew I'd get backlash for this story and I'm just letting the hate slide. People love Trixie and will defend her to the death, I don't blame them for hating on it :)
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Yeah, I can 100% see where your coming from for this, it's absolutely possible that the story could have gone in that direction and it's not a bad one at all. I knew this story would get a lot of hate and well, I wrote it anyway. The idea was given to me and I just allowed my imagination to run wild. Sad Trixie backstories were all the rage back in the day and I was asked to make one like this. Not my first, won't be my last. Tho I will be doing consensual stories too for those who like a happier story ending with their clop. I'm not a one trick pony ;)
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ummm i dont think it has to do as much with people wanting to defend trixie but rather the whole father raping their child..... like had you chose Cozyglow instead, it'd still be f'd up but at least it could be the reason why she ended up the way she did in the show.....and maybe she killed her parents afterwords or whatever..... that would make it least somewhat of a justifiable reason to read/''not hate'' something like this for many people.
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I can't disagree with what you're saying, but I have to say that I've seen quite a few foalcon non-con fics that didn't receive nearly this level of hate and some of those the filly doesn't getaway. However, we could argue the mistake I made was the release time. Releasing at a primetime when casual fans are in high numbers rather than later at night when fewer are on means it's on the front page and more people who don't wanna see this type of thing would see it. You could be right, tho. And hey, there's one way to find out ;)
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Well, I think the verbal abuse might have gone too far. That whole "you're the reason your mom left" thing was a kick in the stomach on top of an already unpleasant subject. Even if it had just been a spanking, the verbal abuse would have left me unable to enjoy it.
However, that part where Trixie responds with defiance to her adverse circumstances was very good.
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I was trying to make him as deplorable as possible. His words were supposed to cut deep. But as we saw in Trixie's dream, her mother loved her. it wasn't her fault she's not with them anymore, but yet the fathers still blames Trixie for it.
I know you didn't enjoy the story, and you have every right to that opinion, but we all have different tastes. Some people like the messed up stuff and that's okay too. We're all different and free to enjoy ourselves. :) As long as no one actually gets hurt.
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Certainly-and I do love Trixie's endurance.
that's the kind of rape story I like, hot and cloppy and with some kind of happy end? I really liked that :)
this makes an awesome backstory for trixie, liked it
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The rape is taking things a little too far. If he just gave Trixie a few bruises people would hate him but accept the story. However you pushed it so far that it's downright painful to read.
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It's a rapefic, you dummy. What did you think it was for?
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Well most don't quite make it that dark and vivid.
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Well these things aren't for everyone. I myself was just bringing to life an idea. testing the boundaries if you will. I'm seeing ppl like the rape, but not the belting part, and I see ppl who are the opposite. I guess I made a peanut butter sandwich, and a jelly sandwich. Both are nice, but not everybody likes a PB&J sandwich. But I always try to warn people, they can always see what's inside the sandwich, before they take a bite.
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If you think this is bad, try "Spikey Wikey"
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I'm not so fond of that because it just doens't seem like Spike. In a clop fic you have to change the characters but you should bend them rather than break them. Try and keep the core of that character intact. With Spike that core is his desire to be useful to others. Even as a harem master his main priority would still be the comfort and content of his mates.
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Hm.....try Corrupted then. That's Twilight
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I don't know. I feel she maintains her charisma, desire to be recognized and desire for improvement for it's own sake.
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Comfort
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What?
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Comfort. Dubcon-fic featuring Miss Mash (Button's mom has got it goin on~ 🎶🎸)
This was ouch. And ouch = excellent. I tried to knock one off but I just couldn't. Sorry.
Most people want "fantasy rape" where the victim doesn't really get hurt and there are no real consequences. It helps them live with themselves. Fuck that, that's not the way the world works.
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We all have our vices, pleasures, desires. Some like it when it goes too far, others don't. With this story, I had the idea in my head and I wanted to push through with it. For what it is, for what it's meant to be, it came out how I liked it. And hey, if it doesn't hit the right marks, that's fair, but I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Hooray Trixie got raped.
man, I don't know what spirit of stupidity posessed me to read this, but I'm glad Trixie got away...
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Thank you very much :) And yeah, mistakes like that will often slip through the cracks, no matter how many times I triple check my work, and others too have looked it over and missed it. But thanks for pointing that one out :)
As for "Whorse" well, that one's subjective to the reader :P We all will have disagreement in what's fine and whats cringe. all we can do is try not to be cringy on purpose and enjoy what we write :)
Wow. Dark but at least she got away. I love Trixie stories and this one was ok. My only question is did her mother die or did she leave them because of her father?
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I think I left that part open to interpretation. But in my head I wanted to go with she passed before her time in an accident or something. It drove her husband to being a more cruel bastard and the loss of his love affected his performances making his shows worse and he blamed it on everyone he could, including his daughter who was worthless in his eyes because she was a unicorn with feeble magic, and he was an elitist. If you're not the best, you're not good enough.
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ok. I see. Thanks
I believe non-cons are worse than any violent story a grimdark writer can come up with. The thought of getting traumatized is far scarier than imminent death.
poor trixie i would hug her 😢
That was pretty dark and sad though at least she got away from him .
He needs a fire work spell to the balls and organs