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I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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Well, I must say, you know how to leave us hanging. Dandy Lion is in for one dandy of a surprise.

Amazing work as always, Clop!

I like this, but there are a few things wrong. There are times where you used 'arms' and 'person' instead of 'legs/forlegs' and 'pony'.
Other than that, the story is great!

I was instantly jealous of that story title. I had already made mine (as is) by the time ArmadilloEater posted his story last week. It was a pretty similar title and I tried to think of a better one. Ultimately I just stuck with the one I had.

I'm pleased to see that we all took different routes with our stories.

Trixie: Do we still have some of the Zesper left?
Jackpot: Yes, since you did not finish it, why?
Trixie: The Great and Powerful Trixie has an Idea!!!

Dandy: This is some amazing tasting tea, Trixie!?

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Oh, wow.

Wow.

This. This might actually need to be a sequel.

“THEY’RE GOING TO BREAK MY HORN OFF! THEY”LL PUT ME IN WITH THOSE FUTA-MARES WHO’LL BEND ME OVER AND MAKE ME THEIR BBuuuhh?

That part had me rolling!:rainbowlaugh:
Great job! Would love to see an epilogue with a very likely 3way!

Dang Lion just feels like the free-spirit type that would just go with the moment. Plus it would be hella HOT! :moustache::trixieshiftright:

Silly Clopfics, dads don't wear bras.

Silly Clopfics.

This's really sexy and all, and you have a masterful grasp of timing, plot and characterization, as well as a wonderful grasp of the English language, but... you better not just leave us hanging with what happened to those two beautiful mares! :raritydespair: This story absolutely positively must leave Las Pegasus!

Also legs can be called arms when they're used as arms. And ponies can be called people sometimes.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease do like 50 more in this arc

Well, I can't wait to see where the sequel goes with this.

... is it sad that I don't find this arousing, merely entertaining? Or is it healthy?...

Sweet Luna's dimples, I'm an odd critter.

This is actually three different father/daughter incest stories featured right now. Ultra Omega kek :pinkiehappy:

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That would be the best fucking thing ever.:heart:

FUTA-MARES

I'll just continually wait until you write this so I may judge you heavily for all eternity.

so... no family threesome then?

Or maybe I spoke too soon 🤔

I need to see what happened to our beautiful volunteers. Like, stage magicians drugging their adoring fans to take advantage of is hot, but someone else ending up on the dominant end of that unintentionally, someone who has a differing relationship with both of the victims... mmmm. Leaving that as just an implication is cruel!

Not to underplay the rest of the fic though, good job on it throughout!

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I hear you! I also thought about how sexy that scenario would be and thats why I added it in!

Alas, I have not the time to write about a stallion suddenly finding himself beset with his wife and daughter.

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If I had to guess, I’d say he’s not into incest.

I don’t normally upvote clopfics but I will because of this.

Okay, I already suspected this was good enough for my Extraordinary folder, and I am not disappointed.

This was amazing, so delightfully funny, and sexy as f****! This is probably the best thing between these two I've seen yet! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOOOOOTTT!:heart::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

I particularly liked the part comparing Jack to an Earth pony, unicorns usually are not written to be that big, or if they are the Earth pony size difference isn't a factor, very :rainbowwild:

Comment posted by Lavender_Raindrops deleted Jul 3rd, 2018

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... Ok thanks for your feedback!

I think that characters should have their own desires and tastes. I think most males will find mouth-pounding dentureless grannies a bit strange. I also think that most males will find getting futa prison raped disconcerting.

I don't think either of those has anything to do with phobias.

I agree with you on the chemsex, it is a crutch of mine.

Great, but you need to leave a direct link to your pictures, I went to the site and I can't find any of them.

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Just go to derpi, then up in the bar showing the website address, put a / and then copy the number over. Simple and easy to do.

I wish you had written more about when Trixie got filled to the brim with a buttload of cum.

Oh boy, Trixie fucked her dad and Jackpot fucked his daughter. Jackpot is pretty much a hypocrite now, albeit an indirect one.
Good first chapter.

Overall, this was really good. Hope there is a sequel to this, especially after the ending.

I need a follow up on the family, if it's not in the next chapter then hopefully a spin off where the mother and daughter take the father back to their hotel room and have their way with him. Then he fills them with his potent seed then have an awkward morning. But then come out of it closer and more loving as a three-way couple only because I don't want it to rip the family apart.

I love this and Shakes incest stories but I wish they would continue and show them living their lives together with all the challenges of keeping their relationship secret. Also a question, Dandy said Jackpot left after Trixie was born so how is it that he didn't recognize her or her name?

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(TIME FOR SOME SUPER FAST RETCONNING/CONTINUITY CORRECTION) He thought Trixie's name was a stage name only, not her real one... and he didn't really remember what she looked like as a foal / all foals look alike (it's been over 20 years after all).

Am I busted? :twilightsheepish:

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Ok I'll except that answer.

So actually Trixie is still competing with Twilight, but lately not in regards of magic, but in regards of incest is wincest. :)

Well I was a little miffed at the lack of actual rutting taking place. The descriptions of the morning after made up for it. Just a little.

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I spoke too soon. Thought the second chapter was just going to be all about the awkward meeting with the mom.

"By Celestia's fat ass..."

That needs to be a saying.

hmmmm its almost been a year.....should have some kind of follow up :D

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