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Maximus_Reborn


The creator of the Spiders and Magic universe and concept. Yay, I guess??

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This story is a sequel to Ultimate Spiders and Magic: Episode V "Neogenic Nightmare"


While everyone is away for the Camp Everfree trip, Peter decides to stay behind amidst the Man-Spider aftermath. However, Trixie’s father, Jackpot, comes into town for his magical performance tour (and hidden illegal matters) as the Great and Powerful Mysterio. Now, Spider-Man must contend with the magician’s powerful illusions and technology, all while trying to preserve his friendship with Trixie and learning of her family's turmoil.

Life is never simple.

Coverart done by jmkplover and edcom02

Special thanks to this group of editors and proofreaders! Regreme, Azu, Commander Stelios, Titan Commander Sebaste, and Marvelsoldier

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Comments ( 203 )

I know it’s probably not going to happen but with Rainbow getting so riled up with her rivalry with Spider-Man it almost seems like it’s setting up her to get the venom symbiote (more agent venom style than raging evil venom)

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I just hope they put Rainbow in her place. Or Twilight for that matter, she really is getting out of control.

Even the scales my ass, did she forget that she took their magic and got turned into a monster and nearly destroyed the world, all because she couldn't keep her nose out of other people's business?

Also, Maximus_Reborn, when are you going to stop making Peter suffer like that? Don't you think he's already suffered enough?

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Yeah, gonna have to agree with you there Post


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Yeah, all fair points

Hmm... I have mixed feelings about this chapter.

On the one hand, poor Peter didn't get a break (as usual) with the public hating Spider-Man now more than ever, getting shot at by a police officer (which was unprovoked), Twilight, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash's attitude towards him is getting ridiculous (especially Twilight and Rainbow Dash), and Trixie's father, Jackpot, aka Mysterio is coming to visit... which we all know this won't end well. :unsuresweetie:

But on the other hand, Fluttershy became Peter's friend (and possible love interest) from the last story and she just gave him a kiss on his cheek before she gave him her number.

At least there's one good thing coming Peter's way at least. :twilightsmile:

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! :pinkiesmile:

!! Oh no.. I hope Peter can still be friends with Trixie after all this..also.. Jefferson Davis.. Miles dad.. I hope he gets better.

Will Norman Osborn assemble the Sinister Six in this universe?

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I Agree on that so Maximus_Reborn would you please for this story give peter a good ending because he had enough suffering to go through for god sakes!

Oh Yeah you did it again!

The name already out? it is still linked to the villain name, so either jackpot has a plan, or he won't say a villain name

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fuckin' hell I scroll down a bit too much and I see this comment right before I start reading.


good omens

Jefferson Davis? Oh no…

Oh man the only good cop who gave peter a break and permission to do stuff.

It’s probably best he didn’t go…he’s kinda out of his element in a tiny forest.

Also Fluttershy made the first move…good for her…she already way ahead of Sunset

If she plays her cards right she could succeed like Sophia aka Chat

Why’s sunset in the pic? I thought everyone left

Peter can never get a break can he?

well, wonder if he gonna go tom holland ending or classic spider man ending

:coolphoto: Well now, I was not expecting the next story to come out out of nowhere unannounced, but this is a pleasant surprise to end the weekend.


It's only been a few days since Peter's Man-Spider incident and he's still have a hard time with the public opinion mostly against him as usual while having to readjust to his enhanced senses and he has opt out of going on the school field trip to Camp Everfree. On the bright side, at least he'll have won't have to deal with the Rainbooms for a while who are still sore and humbled from their humiliating defeat, with Rainbow taking it the hardest because of her ego, and Peter has another confidant and possible love interest with Fluttershy.
But it looks like things are going to get more complicated for Peter since Trixie will also be sticking around and not joining the field trip (not to mention breaking the canon :twilightoops:) now that her father Jackpot aka "The Great and Powerful Mysterio" is coming into town! I think this will put Peter and Trixie's friendship to the test, whether it will either grow stronger or fall apart.

So Jefferson Davis was the police officer that Man-Spider injured and put in the hospital, and his son Miles Morales is in kindergarten. As much as Spidey feels bad about it, it is probably for the best to leave him be and give it time. Jefferson is one of the few good cops that does warm up to Spidey eventually, so hopefully the next time they encounter each other, it will be in a more professional and civilised manner. Also give his son 7 or 8 more years and one spider bite and you've got another Spider-Man.

“Rainbow Dash has always been too competitive. I wouldn’t worry about it,” Fluttershy simply stated.

:duck: Are you sure about that, Fluttershy?

While on the subject of Rainbow thinking of a way to "even the odds" with Spider-Man, I'm worried that once the Rainbooms, more specifically Twilight and Rainbow, get their geode powers, they may get on a bit of a power trip and paint a bigger target on themselves. Worse yet, they might end up making a mistake that may haunt them for the rest of their lives. I mean shouldn't Twilight have learned her lesson after turning into Midnight Sparkle and nearly breaking the Multiverse?

Before Peter could hope to respond, Fluttershy gently pressed her lips against his cheek. Albeit brief, a sense of warmth enveloped the boy as his entire face burned to a shade of crimson. Fluttershy soon parted, nodding before placing a small piece of paper on the bench mere inches away. Brushing through the haze his mind was lost in, Peter took the slip in hand. It was gently folded, as if it was carefully prepped. He unfolded it just enough to peek at the message within, and the young man’s eyes widened upon spotting a set of numbers, his mind quickly deducing what the girl had given him.

“Um, call me,” Fluttershy whispered, nodding before turning to take her leave.

:derpyderp2:

Okay, on one hand I find this adorable even though I prefer Sunset. On the other hand, I think Fluttershy might be slightly too good for Peter. And knowing his Parker Luck, I'm not expecting it to last very long.

Trixie took her bag and tossed it into Peter’s arms before he could utter a response. “Okay, Parker. Because I’m in such a good mood, you are off the hook. It turns out that I am unable to attend Camp Everfree this year, too!”

:twilightoops: Uh, oh. Miguel is not going to be happy to see the canon branching off course.

Finally, I’ve been looking forward to this one!

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I’m sure it’s fine

Canon Events are mostly associated with tragedy

It’s not like Peter is preventing an important death or replacing someone who died

Though it may happen if he were to prevent officer Jean Dewolffes death

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It was just a joke, man... What I meant was that Trixie in the actual canon was supposed to be on the Camp Everfree trip and that her breaking that canon by staying behind may change how certain events should play out. no matter how insignificant.

Oh yeah, the man is back, let's see how Spidey fares in the capament, and I wish he could participate in the final battle against Gaia Everfree instead of leaving him out like in the friendship games.

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I don't know if either of you know this, but it looks like the whole thing with Rainbow won't be resolved until we get to the Electro arc.

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Its the rule of comic cannon. Peter always suffers.

Don't mean I like it tho

This may sound stupid, but I absolutely would love if at some point you let our boy go ham. Like when in the comics he fought off two Phoenix Force powered people, by himself, and WON.
Or let them have an "oh shit" moment like when Doc Ock realized Peter ALWAYS held back, even when he got serious (aka TAKING THE SCORPION'S JAW RIGHT THE HELL OFF WITH A PUNCH).
Just to show how actually terrifying he could be.

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Technically Peter didn’t beat them he outsmarted them by tricking them into beat each other

Peter is so cool that he didn’t need to waste dirtying his hands just like Loki.

Twilight exhaled, mirroring Rainbow’s glare with one of her own. “She isn’t the only one! He just showed us how dangerous he was if left unchecked!” A dark glint flickered across the girl’s glasses. “Once I’m able to study his biology, I can even the scales in our favor.”

Even the scales? B:yay:ch, have you forgotten what happened the last time you stuck your nose where it didn't belong?! You created a device that sucked up Equestrian magic, de-powered the HuMane 6, endangered students lives, and turned into a magical demon monster girl who began to tear open holes in reality and nearly destroyed the world. And now you want to look at Peter's biology? Did you learn NOTHING from the Friendship Games?! Besides, nothing good EVER comes from people in Marvel studying things they don't understand, especially related to Spider-Man. Just look at the Clone fiasco. I hope Peter reminds her of her screw up as Midnight Sparkle and gives her a reality check.

“Rainbow Dash has always been too competitive. I wouldn’t worry about it,” Fluttershy simply stated.

Yeah, and that's the f:yay:king problem. You SHOULD worry about it Fluttershy, because now I'm getting red flags and thinking Rainbow Dash, and by extension Sci-Twi, is going to do something monumentally stupid with potentially disastrous consequences. Whatever it might be, i hope Peter (either as himself or as Spider-Man) snaps and absolutely rips into Rainbow and gives her a MAJOR reality check, about the lives she put at risk and how this isn't a game.

“Rainbow Dash has always been too competitive. I wouldn’t worry about it,” Fluttershy simply stated.

Yeah, don't worry about it...til she butts in at a critical moment, gets killed/gets sombody else killed, and it all gets blamed on Peter.

“--the Great and Powerful Mysterio!”

...As if Mysterio wasn't egotistical enough without being related to Trixie. This won't end well...

“Oh, g-good,” Fluttershy stammered momentarily. Peter watched as the girl’s face turned as pink as her hair, but she eventually recollected herself, leaning forward. “I can tell that you’re still going through a few things. I just wanted to give you something before I leave.”

Before Peter could hope to respond, Fluttershy gently pressed her lips against his cheek. Albeit brief, a sense of warmth enveloped the boy as his entire face burned to a shade of crimson. Fluttershy soon parted, nodding before placing a small piece of paper on the bench mere inches away. Brushing through the haze his mind was lost in, Peter took the slip in hand. It was gently folded, as if it was carefully prepped. He unfolded it just enough to peek at the message within, and the young man’s eyes widened upon spotting a set of numbers, his mind quickly deducing what the girl had given him.

“Um, call me,” Fluttershy whispered, nodding before turning to take her leave.

Here's a fan art based on this moment. :raritywink:
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How long before the girls get a "Great Power, Great Responsiblity" moment from Peter.

I wonder is mysterio going to pretend to be an alien again?

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You are not wrong

I mean for example if dash picks a fight with screwball…she could risk the whole town blowing up

I played that level in ps4, that event was so not fun…it was really hard

I don’t know why but it popped into my head what if the the geodes they find at Camp Everfree are actually Terrigen Crystals and the powers the girls get are actually latent Inhuman powers? This could add a whole new dynamic to how the girls handle things as well as what comes to the city?

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I'm not sure if that could work, remember in the canon it's magic from equestria that somehow appeared on this world

Okay, episode 6 "Grass and ravings" (Sorry guys, I couldn't help it). They continue the epic of a loser who proves that he is capable of something by receiving portions of cuffs from various anti-heroes. Okay, I'm going to end my bullshit and start the subjective review, and I'll with the Rainbows, who didn't seem to have learned anything from the previous two episodes. Well, two meters underground they are waiting for them if they continue their attempts to “defeat” the spider. Particularly striking is Swi-Twilight, whose transformation into a midnight spark did not destroy both the human world and the multiverse (or the Spiderverse).

But it’s also sad that Peter’s luck still haunts him and doesn’t allow him to live in peace for at least one month, well, at least he got Fluttershy and I was surprised a lot by their progress in relation (She kissed him on the cheek and gave him a phone, kamon !), although I'm more for Sunset/Peter. In general, I look forward to continuing. And yes, for violations of the canon, Miguel will be unhappy ...
https://youtu.be/0bdm0FhLIJY

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If it would be terrigen

Pray it’s not

Because Terrigen mist is very very lethal to mutants. To them it’s a deadly as execution mist from a gas chamber.

Last I checked mutants have appeared a couple of times.

Oh, Peter is invited to see Mysterio's show with Trixie. I'm sure nothing will go wrong! :pinkiesmile:

*Fake Spider-Man shows up to rob the place*

Will Peter ever catch a break!? :facehoof:

I can already foresee the Rainbooms believing even more that Spider-Man IS a bad guy but I know that Fluttershy, Fury, Spitfire and Doc Ock will know that he's innocent.

Calling it now. Mysterio aka Jackpot is going pull a Far From Home, where before he dies will upload a video all over town making people THINK Peter killed him (when he really didn’t) and reveal his identity to the world


Anyone else see that happening Aswell?

Oh for goodness sake! What seemed to be just an ordinary phenomenal magic show of tricks and illusions performed by Trixie's Dad turns out to be a set up orchestrated to frame Spider-Man as the villain and make Mysterio out to be the hero when really he's just a crooked phoney craving for fame and attention. So in order to clear his name, Peter has to take down Jackpot and prove that he's a fraud. However it's not going to be that simple. as always in Spidey's line of work, because of Trixie since she clearly idolises her father and there's no telling what will happen when she finds out the truth. She considers Peter her friend, in her own narcissistic way so to speak. But after today, she now likely views Spider-Man as a menace and this will definitely put a strain in their friendship in the long run which he may have to sacrifice, especially if he doesn't take her side in support off her father.

“Nonsense! That sounds like a brilliant idea!” Octavious firmly declared, practically materializing next to Spitfire with a clipboard in hand. His bright visage darkened as an unsettling grin surfaced on his face. “Make certain that you document everything! I’ll supply any devices should you need suggestions. I have a colleague joining our team. He is a brilliant geneticist, and I can have him bring in anything you need.”

“Everything’s an experiment with you, Doc. All we’re missing is a hamster wheel,” Peter groaned, his brow twitching in exasperation. “I’m almost afraid to ask who you’re bringing on board. Twilight’s… a questionable choice. She not only hates me as Peter Parker, but also wants to dissect Spider-Man like a frog in biology. No exaggeration.”

“It’s research and a surprise,” Octavious hastily stated, clumsily straightening his shades with a finger. With a brief nod, the man huffed. “Do not fret. He is a friend I’ve known for years, who wants to use his research to help mankind. Considering the disaster we narrowly avoided, I’d like to exercise extreme caution to ensure your safety and future. Your identity will not be compromised, I assure you.”

If I'm not mistaken, this friend of Octavious' is definitely implied to be Dr. Curt Connors aka The Lizard.

“Did you say Jackpot?” Octavious questioned, stealing a glance at Spitfire from the corner of his eye. Once the woman nodded again, the man’s brow furrowed before he hummed under his breath. “It’s good to see that he’s found a new hobby. I do question the name change, but all things considered…”

“Did you two know each other?” Spitfire asked, tilting her head to the side.

Otto inhaled deeply before sighing. “We worked together. He’s a brilliant mind, but he was a bit… narcissistic. One could only bear so much for so long in his presence.” A bead of sweat fell down the side of the man’s cheek. “Let’s just say that in regards to your friend, Miss Lulamoon, you will learn that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.”

As if a thought came into mind, Spitfire pursed her lips. “Hang on. You said he changed his name. What was it before? Plus, now that you mention it, you also said you two were coworkers.”

“It’s not my place to say. I’m certain Jackpot has his reasons for altering his identity,” Otto whispered, holding a stern expression towards the woman, “I imagine you can understand that sentiment.”

Okay, I'm going to take a wild guess here. Jackpot's real name, in this universe at least, is actually Quentin Beck and he used to work for OsCorp and did some real shady work, possibly the kind that would deem him mentally unstable. By the time he had Trixie, he had already changed his name and likely fabricated a new background history to hide his past from her.

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Hopefully not as I think he will probably live to be part of the sinister six and doing that ending will just give more misery to this verse which will just be overkill

Oh no, it'll be like when Camaleon ruined Spidey's image in Spectacular Spider-Man.

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Thanks

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Mysterio actually did the frame thing in his first comic appearance

“S-Spider-Man! I have a warrant out for your arrest!” the officer yelled, failing to contain his nervousness.

Peter could only stare at the individual for what seemed like an eternity before he leapt to the ground, landing mere inches away. “On what grounds?”

The policeman narrowed his gaze, tightening his grip on the trigger and handle of his firearm. “You know why! For assaulting an officer! My partner!”

All sense of apprehension seemed to have dissipated from Spider-Man as he settled his gaze on the officer’s quivering arms. Inhaling deeply before sighing, Peter raised his hands defensively. “Okay. I understand, and I’m sorry. What was his name?”

“Jefferson Davis! He’s still in the hospital because of you!” he loudly stated, closing the gap between himself and the vigilante.

Shit the officer he attacked was Jefferson!?:twilightoops: and Miles is super young here huh :trixieshiftright:

And surprise surprise Trixie's dad is Mysterio...ok we all saw that coming right?

Oh come on, I was feeling bad since he's Trixie's dad and Peter will stop...whatever he's gonna do, but tarnishing his name more!? you're going down old man :twilightangry2:

If Fluttershy keeps this up she could follow in the footsteps of this best girlfriend

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