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I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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"Ms. Apogee, how exactly do you expect me to grade… this ?" Apogee’s teacher sighed, holding up a drool covered page, covered in the word ’dick’ over and over.

we've all been there.

Well... it just Gets better and better doesn't it? Still surprised this family hasn't torn itself apart more and more. Anyhow, I look forward to reading this

Apojet was taking this semester's final exam for English

Not quite sure how that typo happened.

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Honestly that could have been my auto correct or my tired mind... Either way thanks for the catch!

Nice!

I find myself wanting to write more and more into each story I start to compose on this site

That's one lf the best things a fan can hear from a creator! Inspiration is such a rare event, one can't but appreciate when it decides to manifest. If your last ApoJet works are any indication, future's looking pretty awesome.

With that said, this comment-size fic was enjoyable on its own and makes for a lighter read when one is pressed for time.

Well, Apogee, looks like the ride never ends! :pinkiecrazy:

Also, is it sad I saw this fic coming a mile away when that image went up on Derpi? It was pure Clopfic material.

Wow, that was quick. XDDD

Nice!! Good job

"Ms. Apogee, how exactly do you expect me to grade… this?" Apogee’s teacher sighed, holding up a drool covered page, covered in the word ’dick’ over and over.

no 'Please Mrs. Kindnicker, don't give me an F, I'll take the D any-day'

0/10

u fuking disgust me again

surging into his thickening cock Manning her face sweaty

...Peyton Manning?

his now massively wife and heavy shaft

lol wut

these are some neat typos i tell ya

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Fixed! Thanks for the spots!!

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Ahhh... What!? For some reason when I first read this comment all I saw was 0/10 and below....

This makes much more sense, lol!

Apogee has got to be one of the most adorable, and horny, fillies I’ve seen yet!
She is quickly becoming a favourite.:heart:

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Thanks! You'll be seeing a lot from her, there's a whole gang of great writers and rtists having a blast with her and her family's back story right now!

Wow Apogee. Just, wow. Those last few lines. We all know what she's thinking.

I love those Apogee/Delta Vee/Jet Stream stories.
Are you planning to make more of those btw??

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I am extremely close to finishing the last chapter of Any Landing which is Jet x Apogee

Huh... Neat end :rainbowlaugh:

A short one!

The final question at the top of the page confronted her: ’In the context of Fyodor Dostailovsky’s novel: Crime and Punishment and Friendship, write an essay regarding the duality of ponykind.’ 50% of exam.

They're cute and they're badass.

It's not an essay but then this is a speedfic.

She rolled the small cylindrical pencil around in her jaw.

Kids these days with their cylindrical pencils. Back in my day, our pencils were shaped like bricks!

Add a comma after small.

She rolled the small cylindrical pencil around in her jaw. It was hard and smooth… but so much smaller, and not as warm… as alive.

Still she couldn’t help but trace her tongue up the pencil’s shaft, lovingly, playfully.

Her parents have completely ruined this girl... :fluttershyouch: Add a comma after still.

Apogee slid down the four stairs like the puddle of aroused pegasus she was, not caring that she was rolling right through the puddle of juices if their latest simultaneous climax (what was another coat of love-paint at this point anyway?), before rolling onto her back in a heap at the base of the stairs.

Aaand I'm dead. You not only are the master of the drumfire, but you can also play sniper. This one paragraph — this image of a physically exhausted young girl being fucked by her Dad for god only knows how long until she slides down a staircase covered in their shared love batter before collapsing is the single most fucked up image you have ever put in my head.

Well done sir. Have another upvote. :twilightsmile:

Apogee realised she’d been seeking and wiped her mouth.

Seeping you mean.

"N-no… You’re leaking… Down south."

Just another day living in the South unless you're in late summer. We never get rain in late summer.

Why has this girl not been taking away from her parents yet? Holy hell!

"Time!" Her English teacher, Ms. Kindnicker called.

BUCK!

"Ms. Apogee, how exactly do you expect me to grade… this?" Apogee’s teacher sighed, holding up a drool covered page, covered in the word ’dick’ over and over.

I'll have to ask Dirty Little Secret some time. That poor bastard actually had to do it 165 times! Actually, I wonder how Apogee's essay would be scored by DLS? Hmm...

Notes: Not a single correct sentence.
Quite alluring as I could imagine how all those dicks could be put to good use even if they never were.
Minimalistic but pacing issues kept me from appreciating this fully.
Dicks.

Immersion: 3
Allure: 55
Enticement: 7
Prose: 1
Cloppability: 16

Final score: 83/500

Apogee paused, a look of fear returning to her face… She was so close!

"… I’m afraid I’ll have to send a note to your father about this."

A sultry smirk formed on the teenage filly’s face.

"No problem."

We're all going to die down here...

Good show, old bean. Good show.

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Haha, this was one of the few times I actually copied a fic from the comments of derpibooru that is written and posted it to fimfic.

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