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thesilentpony


Darkness will always end up out lasting the light.

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Thank you, for this. Mind giving a better description of kitten and jasmin? They deserve to be remembered

8914195
and Jasmine is a tan earth pony filly with a black face, hooves and snout,
Kitten had a dark golden coat and had a rather long sharp horn.
neither had a cutie mark

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Aside from what is in the story. relative height. Marks, hair style and such.

8914422
you know, i've never once described hair styles in anything i've ever written, i never thought about it honestly, as for marks, nothing that was of note, and they didn't have cutie marks or anything like that. They're pretty plain otherwise. Heights were kind of whatever, small, i will need to note such things in the future, i completely overlooked them

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I intend to sketch out those two. I suppose kitten gets a more introvert hairstyle. a mix between AB and SB. Jasmin definetly braided. Since those two belong to you and you only. Do I have your go at drawing them? SFW: A stillframe picture of them both?

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without a doubt, in fact i'd probably use it as the story art if you did

THERE IS NOW A SEA OF TEARS IN MASSACHUSETTS

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I think I’ve made all the salt from every five year old into tears

GOD DAMN FEEELS FROM POORN WHHHYYYY

9047119
Well good to read eather way, looking to see more of this world at somepoint

but... but...

Anyway this felt way more like a tragedy than a clop. It conveyed so many feelings and that is really good. It might be rough around the edges but in the end this story drives the plot and the feels home right into my heart.

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I hope that means you liked it.

said ocean of tears has moved to Wisconsin

Damn, that was depressing.:applecry:
Still a great story though.

Oh my that was so heart wrenching.

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i loved the end the most

10204413
Me too....that Pegasus just reading to Kitten. It was so sweet bc you realize that she is just trying to comfort Kitten and make her last moments peaceful

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