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Hmm. It doesn't say "complete" yet. Does that mean there are more chapters to come? Since Scootaloo is tagged, I assume that'll be the case.
I would definitely want to see that. The scenes with RD and Fluttershy tied up for training were so short, more of it would be very much appreciated. That, and perhaps a flashback to what the parents did back in the day? Did they also play with tying the girls up?
is there a backstory to what they did? also I hope there's more
A few minor issues:
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Thanks for the feedback. I’ll revise these when I get the chance. That said, there are a couple points you mentioned that I don’t consider errors. The series never mentions Fluttershy and Rainbow’s ages and their body types and the general way that cutie marks are treated makes it seem to me like they are several years older than you mention. This fic was written under that assumption.
The second point is Zephyr, and this one is understandable. You’re right that he is way different than he is in the show. That is intentional, give him time. A lot can change about a pony in a decade.
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Cutie Marks as puberty doesn't line-up agewise, as Twilight apparently got hers at an age of, at most, 7. But anyways, about the max age for Dash in the pegasus race is 10, which would be like right after the events of this fic.
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You are right, it would be not too long after this. The show establishes that the two are childhood friends, but it never says for how long. If you rewatch The Cutie Mark Chronicles, Rainbow stepped in to stop a bully, now necessarily to specifically help a friend. It is left a bit up in the air exactly when the two became friends. My interpretation was that it was Rainbow saving her from those bullies that did it, but there was enough wiggle room for me to say “Oh, they became friends like this, and the reason they seemed to not regard each other much before the race was because they were still somewhat new friends.”
So is Zephyr gonna get a dicking? Lol
Great start so far
It would be cute if you added foal things during the sex. Like giving them a plush for comfort or using childish language.
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yeah cause a toy is gonna calm them during sex
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I didn't say it had to be successful. Just that it would be a cute touch if they tried.
Also I do think it would work. They are still young kids after all.
*insert that's a penis meme but the black guy is now yellow with short pink hair
So will this ever continue?
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It will. In fact, it is what I am working on right now. Unfortunately, I am in a bit of a complicated place irl that is making writing difficult.
Nice to see this story is not canceled.
No doubt that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are going it have Scootaloo involved in these "traditions".
nice to see a little history on this tradition also aww that last part was so sweet!
nice little history/world building lesson
and the part with the aftermath of the race was awesome, so sweat and DAAWW
Okay, but why tie them up? Is that part of tradition too?
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Well, more that the girl's might have resisted the "lesson" like Rainbow tried too. Also, their parents are kinky bastards.
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Glad you you like it!
Sorry, but downvoted for not being warned that this was child rape. Your description can easily be read as if they were of legal age at the time.
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Hm, fair. I’ll add foalcon and rape warnings to the description next time I’m at my computer.
This story should have a chapter by chapter warning list. Yes the story is tagged for Scootaloo and non-con, but that on its own doesn't say child rape. Plus, like the one commenter who explicitly stated he was downvoting for it, there should be specific mention of it in the description. You should also warn for Flutterdash foalcon. I came into this story expecting that because of the story I was reading and from what was said in the description, but I've been told that I'm very perceptive and I have a knack for recognizing patterns early. A lot of people regrettably aren't as quick on the uptake, or maybe aren't always on alert. When your story crosses the kind of lines yours does, you need to be upfront with it.
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Credit where it's due, at least you gave a legitimate reason for your downvote instead of just dropping and running like the vast majority of the white knight filth that roams this site.
great story.
I feel like shit for reading this.
Thanks for that BTW.
canceled? aww!
I so wish that this wasn't cancelled.