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I may just skip this one...

8922738 Understandable. It's foalcon. Fetish foalcon. I don't expect better than a 3:1 Like ratio. I don't expect it to get featured. It shouldn't get featured. If it did, I would just feel worse.

[EDIT]: Oh dear...

Fimfiction, wat r u doing?
Fimfiction... stahp!

I have no idea what I just read, but somehow it makes sense.

Porn sense, but sense all the same.

Warning: Intense levels of What The Fetish ahead.

Seriously. Turn back now.

I'm ready! RUAAGH!

"They mostly just teach us how to harvest fortuitous crops and to never ever disobey Princess Celestia, Praise be unto She," Scootaloo said.

"Praise be unto She!" Dash's parents chanted in reflex.

:rainbowlaugh: I love it.

She would get about halfway us off,

Zecora said to bBow as she took Windy's tail and held it aside.

"One birthing day, take this amount..."

EDIT: That was surprisingly entertaining. Probably helped that I went in expecting weirder than weird. Thank you, author's note! :twilightsmile:

All of my WAT :rainbowderp:

Still gets a like, though.

Wtf ? 😑

I saw shakespearicles and immediately had to read it. And then remembered why there's a weekly limit to how much shakespearicles I can read...
Amazing story, once more fine sir.


Unbirthing is not my fetish.


There's a first time for everything, I suppose?

There's just something special about logging on to Fimfiction and seeing that most of the new stories are about moms, fetishes, and mom fetishes. I'm not sure I can bring myself to read an unbirthing, but thanks anyways for keeping Fimfiction... unique... this Mother's Day.

[EDIT] Aaaaand it appeared in the featured list along with your other Mothers Day clop. Never change Fimfiction, never change.

Is it wrong that my first thought was "for it to be the full tour, it'd have to include cock vore and Scootaloo ending up in Bow's balls"?

Okay, not even half a page in, you had me cracking up :yay:

8923201 As much as I pride myself on writing sex, I can't NOT write comedy.

Comedy or not, despite admittedly uncommon content thjs was fun to read :)

..alright, I read it.


You're a fuckin' weirdo, Shakespearicles.


Just gonna leave this here and touch this story from the safety of a ten-foot pole.

Woah! This is so cool you wrote a story about my drawing. I can't wait to read this!

Wait wait wait, more than one!? Upvote and fave!

you're 100% a weirdo, shakespearicles. But that's what I like about you.

This is the worst, most absolute garbage thing that I have ever put on my favorites.

Scootaloo flying? Disgusting! How do you live with yourself?

No point in just leaving this in UserSub. I'm gonna help keep this on the front page.

Ma fetish.

Not my fetish but I love a happy ending

Happy mother's day y'all

She leaned back on the bed and spread her legs, proudly revealing her pussy. Her wings reached around her thighs to spread it open.

"Yes, this is where our beloved daughter came from," Windy said. Scootaloo just stared in awe at the older mare's gaping vagina.

"Awesome!" Scootaloo exclaimed.

I see somepony discovered #1434665 on Derpibooru. Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if the following comments on that image inspired you to write this story:

northern haste: I kinda want to see windy unbirthing scootaloo because that’s where rainbow dash was made

Alexlayer: @northern haste And then Scoot comes out with a Rainbow Mane.

Eh, it's a nice enough concept, but the execution of it is a little sloppy. Granted, that's the point of this kind of story, but it still feels like a waste of a good idea.

I guess my issue with it is: there's no contrast. All this debauchery happens and it's played straight, and it's treated like it's normal. Nothing in the story gets a response from the characters, aside from maybe at the end, and even then it's annoyance more than anything else. That's not to say it's bad or the punchline wasn't nice, it's just that a good chunk of it could have been better and had more weight or 'oomph' behind it.

Bottom line: when everything in your story is far-out and deviant, nothing is, because it's not deviating from anything in-story. It's a similar problem to the Jimmy ScreamerClauz films. It tries to be so weird it ends up being too tame.

8924509 I agree, but it was intentional. Especially with that "praise Celestia" bit, Scootaloo's parents, her home, and the casual incest in Rainbow Dash's family. It was meant to indicate it being in an absurd, warped version of Equestria, where, as you said, everything is so deviant, it becomes the norm. Granted, this was a story fueled by booze and caffeine in the small hours of the night before posting, so, grain of salt and all that.

Yeah, I figured as much. The Devi-questria bit, not the coffee and booze bit. It's certainly not meant as a high-brow intellectual criticism or anything like that :moustache:, just a thought. Again, it's a nice concept. :scootangel:

"Wot is happening" the guy with 2k+ subs asks as they are immediately featured. "Curiouser and curiouser," answers the crowd. :twilightsmile:

On the actual fic though, sorry, gonna give it a pass. There are some things that just shouldn't be done, and I'm not talking about foalcon fics here. To each their own but this ain't mine.

That was, definitely different..........not gonna lie kinda liked it.

Oh my god XD

This was wild and weird, I have to say. :rainbowlaugh: The ending was really worth it.

You have some typos, and the story in general felt a little rushed, but that ending was really worth it. 180-brazillion/10

"Well, it's about time you cave us a grandfoal," Windy said.

Not sure if pun intended.

8925114 Oh, it absolutely was rushed. An overnight, over-caffeinated blitzed blitz.

The whole RD segment had me bursting out laughing and spattering my phone with my drink. In a good way.

My reaction when I realized what did I just read.

I may be into micro insertion, but I'm NOT into actual unbirthing. This story has no right to be as arousing as it is.

I'm not sure if I want you to spend more time writing while high on caffeine, or quit caffeine altogether.

We've talked about this in PMs before.

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