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theponycaptorproject


Not much to say. I love to write, and I write just about every kind of story.

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*chuckles* flash forward a couple years and sending Dusk off to Ponyville… and all his first meetings with the rest of the mane six are also meatings ^_^

I like to think that Cadence spell didn't work keeping herself from getting pregnant

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Would certainly make for a fun surprise

“The diagrams didn’t show anything like this.” Twilight muttered

I don't think they showed Twilight breaking reality and swapping places with Dusk either.

So worth it. Definitely can’t wait until I can commission the next part.

“Of course.” Cadence said. She spent the next several minutes quietly watching Dusk Shine work. The quill was a blur as Duck Shine put words to paper. The report was easy enough, he had been writing it in his head even as he was finishing the book. Before long, the report was done, a neat stack of parchment covered in tidy black ink.

Qwack!

“Of course I do. I’m not a child.” Duck straightened his back, his voice going into perfect-student mode. “Sex is the process by which some organisms reproduce. The male of the species inserts his penis into the….”

Quack quack!

Gleaming Shield was understanding about what Cadence did. If anything, she would be happy to hear Cadence had helped her sister out.

Brother

I look forward to more

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There will be at least one more chapter. Anymore is up in the air, I might see if the author is interested in writing more at a later point but I commissioned the story on a more or less self-contained chapter bases because I wasn’t sure how long of a story I could realistically afford and didn’t want to have it just cut off part way through because of costs. Honestly if I could afford it I would have looked into having the story move at a slightly slower pace and end up between 50 and 100,000 words. That story would also be slightly different, here’s an outline for those interested in knowing: The story would have involved Dusk taking to his new studies with enthusiasm and exploring a number of other aspects of sex while slowing realizing he has feelings for Cadance just before canon kicks off. There would be a time skip to the Canterlot invasion where Dusk would confess his feelings for her but is happy she for her, another time skip would happen to the return of the Crystal Empire. After the canon events play out Gleaming would approach Dusk about forming a heard with Cadance, which would eventually lead to him impregnating both mares. Why the addition of incest? I place the blame entirely on Shakespearicles for being a corrupting influence,. That and these are works of fiction dealing with magical talking ponies and not humans.

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This concept is so fun. As soon as life gets less weird, I am really looking forward to doing that second chapter.

Calling the penis a flesh piston that pushes into a hole; sounds just like the dorky mater-of-fact thing Twilight or for that matter Dusk would say
Well said however the lesbian sex Cadence and Gleaming Shield have wouldn't even involve one.

Great Well done, calling the penis a flesh piston that goes into a hole is just the matter-of-fact thing I would expect Twilight or for that matter Dusk to say however the lesbian sex done by Cadence and gleaming Sheild wouldn't even involve one...

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