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False Door
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I popped in to say that's some rather good cover art.
Fantastic story. I loved every single thing about this.
I love the... subtle implication of the art
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My other passion. Thank you.
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Thank you! Great to hear.
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Yeah, I figured if I was going to be kind of vague in the description, I should put as many clues in as I can.
I'm not normally a fan of gender swap stories but this one was good
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My first story even approaching something like this. Guess I'm pushing the envelope.
That ending killed me.
May I make some fanart of their kiddos?
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I'd love to see that! In my mind their names are Dusk and Dawn.
The commissioner requests they be identical but one a colt and one a filly.
An interesting premise. Overall, I liked it. The implications with Twilight was a good setup for the tone. The Wishing Star was a new angle for this, though the informal way the star behaved was a little jarring for me, personally, but I get that this is meant to be a comedy.
Celestia having to get drunk put me off a little, though. And the degree to which she drunk-speaks was noticeably inconsistent.
But I'm not trying to prod your ass too hard over it. I'd just recommend going through and making sure that her level of drunk speak is consistent, or at least on a trend of getting steadily worse or better, depending on what you need her to say. Just not have it go up and down like a rollercoaster. That's really my only objective criticism.
As I said, I really enjoyed it overall.
Classic wish-granter, going the path of least effort that tramples the spirit of the wish.
I would like a second chapter, if not a follow up story, with Celestia and Luna realizing that kids are a struggle but also coming to grips with the fact that they both asked for this and they have to live with the decision.
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Well that's an easy fix anyway.
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Absolutely! I'll be sure to let you know when they're done.
Nice story! And they get to have kids? Cool.
One a colt and one a filly...why do I get the feeling that the incest stuff will carry on...
And now I will bore you with a little genetic stuff, even though Celestia became a stallion and temporarily changing appearances is easy, it's hard to imagine how she got a Y chromosome, as the DNA contained in it is drastically different from those from X chromosomes. In other words, she has to get the extra genes from somepony else who is a stallion to get an extra Y. Mares are XX and stallions are XY. Only when one of the partners have a Y will an offspring be a male.
You're doing great, keep on writing!
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Also the twins are identical so I don't know how that works with a colt and a filly but why not? We're already in the neighborhood...
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That's possible, most of the chromosomes are still the same and Celestia is very likely to be a thoroughbred horse so different sperms shouldn't be that different even if they have different sex chromosomes.
And on a side note, all sexual reproduction processes so far require an egg cell but they don't necessarily need a sperm cell. It's just more natural that way, and it doesn't need too much science involved. Cloning and artificial cell fusion already exist...
And happy new year, have a good one!
Very nice. At first, I thought the whole ‘have to get them drunk first’ thing was going to be a terrible cliche to hand-wave away reluctance. But your commitment to the bit — all the way to the hangover — redeemed it and made it good again.
Love the bickering dynamic between the two of them, too!
Just one question remains: who is the father of Twilight’s foal? I demand the answer in the form of a 7000 word clopfic.
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I'd never waste a drunk character!
As for the father. In the original outline it's Shining Armor and if want THAT story it's in The New Normal... Mostly.
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Well, that's a little too obvious, isn't it? We can do better!
(I vote for some futa or R63 self-cest, with Twi getting impregnated by a copy of herself.)
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Asexual reproduction... Or is it?
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I finally finished the art! Apologies for taking so long. I would like to know how you'd like to see it. Email, link to DA/Insta?
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Ooo! Instagram works.
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Awesome! I'll link it here once I get it posted.
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https://www.instagram.com/p/C4_Hbwkgogj/?igsh=bzU3bnQyMjA3aXN1
Done!
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That's so cool! I love the luna moth cutie marks. No one's ever made art based off my stuff before so this is a real treat. I'll make sure to pass this along to the commissioner too.
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Commissioner wants to know if you'll be submitting it to Derpibooru.
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If they'd prefer that, I'm more than happy to put it on there.
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Yes! Thank you!
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3330668t. I dunno if that's how that works. I've never used this site before.
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Nevermind. It's cool. They're on DA.
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Want me to put it there, then?
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Yeah, that works great!
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Awesome! Just gimme a sec. It's been a good year or so since I used the site.
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https://www.deviantart.com/heartsongdrowned/art/Dusk-and-Dawn-1035817322 hopefully this works
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Thanks so much!
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Of course! I'd also like to say that, if you want art of your stories, I'm always happy to provide. Your stories are amazing.