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I mean, I enjoyed it. Not into orgy fics normally, but didn't have any issues with it. Well done!
The ending was really cute, wouldn't mind a sequel
Hmm… From the story description, I thought futa would be playing a much larger role in this story, instead of only being a brief mention in the background.
And, especially since a little incest had already happened between a couple of the guards, I was really hoping for a little action between the royal sisters themselves. Maybe not a full-blown scene, but just a kiss or a little lick here and there, or perhaps one of them ‘helping’ the other with their guards.
Oh, and you used the word “till” improperly once!
But still, a hugely enjoyable story, even if it was a little difficult to keep track of what was going on and who was who from time to time. (Keeping it all in Celestia’s POV helped with that.) I especially liked how casual and familiar they all were with each other. And it was really nice to see the harem members having fun with each other as well — a lot of harem fics would ignore that, instead making all of them solely dedicated to the princesses, but having the guards interested in each other as well is a great way to make the whole atmosphere feel more fun and casual.
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Didn't expect to see you hear boss, and thanks for the comment.
The futa and incest tags was part of ain't I had written down most so earlier in the writing process, but when I thought I had a week or so left, I scraped some scene of LunaxCelestia and the twins as well. The other plan of the futalestia on the zebra I had wanted to do also got scrapped. I still felt the incest tag was necessary from the twins being intimate, though I could have dropped the futa tag.
I kinda wanna do a follow up and do more of the other things going on, maybe show off a few other members who weren't present due to responsibilities, but I got lots of other stories on my plate as it I need to finish.
As for the more casual/intimate action of other members of thr harem getting in on with each other, I always found it odd that there wasn't more of that in other orgy/harem fics.
Thanks for enjoying the sorry and I hope to be alittle less messy with the next story.