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Cloplestia


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You know you gotta submit this to the group for it to count right?

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Had to wait for it to actually show up after submitting. It should be there now.

For those interested in seeing the NSFW version of this story's cover pic, check out 3063368 on Derpi.

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Don't forget 3064495 while you're at it. ^^

11623901 Diaphanous gowns for the win!

I hope she winds up pregnant~

Nobody commenting on the panties??? (I enjoyed the panties.)

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I liked them, it was my favorite part personally.

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Yaaaay, I really wanted to do something like that, but I'm not convinced panties work very well with my usual feral ponies.

Wow, yeah. This was definitely better then my entry, lol. And funny because they both used coupons/passes.

But I’m amazed that you were able to pack so much into less than 10k words without it seeming terribly rushed. Only time it seemed a little rushed was in the gangbang scene at the opera.

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Heh, I didn't consider doing a bestiality story because you mentioned you might do one in the contest comments, and then I went and did the same theme you went with after all. Oops.
Yeah, I was really feeling the word limit by the time I made it to the opera scene. I kept the charm point(?) of Cady leaning over the chair and talking to Shiny while getting railed at the expense of skimping on the gangbang, and even at that I worry the scene was a bit too undercooked. I still had 75 words I could have worked with, lol!

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