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I like it. Slow burn from reluctance to acceptance is great, and only thing that could've made it hotter if stallions were more rough and dominating.
And this is why the Magna Carta doesn’t actually do anything
This is top tier Celestia content. Only thing we need is MORE!
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You think some random user purposely turned on adult mode, purposely find a clop fic to click, then be shocked that it is rated mature?
Argh! Well written! Wonderful wearing down of her resistance! So juicy! So visceral!
But...But... Why? Why Dusty Scroll? Why some old grandpa?! Never have I struggled so hard to try and mentally erase a detail so I can stay horny! But you keep throwing the fact that he's way past his prime back in our face! It's like trying to jack off in a cold shower and I just. Can't. Do it!
... Are you another Feminist?
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lol, he's a silver fox! He carries his age well! He annoys the hell out of Celestia! Don't begrudge him his moment of glory. (Don't worry, he doesn't have a huge role going forward.)
Great start, it's nice to see another story from you! I love the build up and how they break down Celestia's resistance. Fun stuff!
Very nice. This seems to be quite a common setting to place Celestia in (at least in my depraved mind), yet I don't think I've ever read a story about it. I understand your concerns about the story/plot as well now, as any attempt to justify such a scenario has to be quite unrealistic and/or a bit silly. But for what it's worth, I don't think you could've done much better, and I'm kind of glad you kept it light.
The writing is fantastic again, and at least when it comes to sex and the depth of both mental and physical feelings, I can't think of any author here doing it better. Thanks for sharing.
The key pleasure here is the way you mix things up despite the repetitive nature of the situation. That's what's really needed in something like this, where there is going to be a fast string of partners. Keep that in mind going forward. Don't skimp; make each account unique and richly detailed like you have these first few, and we will be with you all the way.
I do have one small critique regarding situations like this:
She is chock full of cum at that point, yet can still feel Worthy's dribbles as significant. Please do not forget the lingering effects of all the residual... juices. Too many stories seem to easily forget what is already there while pursuing the next orgasm, and I think that they miss out on some key, and very hot opportunities.
Varied and interesting, and so, so hot. This is exactly what I was talking about after the previous chapter. Even if some situations in this mass sexual spectacle are similar, find ways - little or big - to make each "encounter" unique. Good work so far. Keep it up!
One eentsy weentsy little request... Maybe some cum play in the future?
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Yeah, it's a worry trying to make sure things stay fresh, but I do have a few ideas lined up.
cum playHmmm...
Sooo...does anyone know where Chrysalis is in all of this?
Cocks for the cock goddess! Cum for the cum slut!
I'm sorry... I'll go back to my corner now.
Woof. She's got to be gooey through and through by no, no matter how well other ponies might want to clean her off. I hope subsequent partners have some fun with that!
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She would totally bang Celestia in disguise, but she's not the type to wait in line to do it.
9494586 Yeah she'll do it after celestia is unbound and she'll probably be submissive about it.
More love that way.
The descriptions are so fucking good.
I don't know how this isn't more popular.
If all this is going to turn out to be a dream sequence courtesy of Luna, I swear to god I'm going to flip my shit.
Otherwise, great story. Eagerly awaiting another chapter.
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No worries, it's all real! I promise!
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I KNOW, RIGHT?
Mmmm... What a slut.
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I fear she may just be getting started...
I wish my feed wasn't bloated beyond being functional, so I wouldn't have missed this story until now.
Goddamn I just love the way you write, Your three stories are easily in my top favorite smut fics, you keep hitting all the right buttons! Gotta love the "mighty alicorn surrenders to her baser instincts" theme, this story plays really well with it. Luna's readiness to go full sex-maniac is a little surprising, I wonder if there's something there or if it's just her being pouty. I'm really curious about what awaits Celestia for the rest of the day, though I'm guessing from the last chapter there won't be any futa-Luna on the smut forecast? Any chance for a little drizzle of impreg, playful of real?
In any case, top shelf, deserves a LOT more attention!
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Alas, futa-Luna is but the delusion of a lust-crazed mare who imagines the Equestria that should be, rather than the Equestria that is. I feel sorry for her; but then again, she did get to drill Celestia. As for impreg, I'm not really into it (I'm all for consequence-free debauchery), but hmm, maybe there's space to make a nod in that direction next chapter. idk
This has to be the longest running sex scene... ever. Pretty sure it'll soon be the weirdest too.
Good stuff.
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Heh, I don 't know about weirdest, but things will get a bit crazy next chapter. And then I run out of ideas...
...Chapter with the princest delayed due to the author jumping into the princest competition....
Is it just me, or could this story work as a story that isn't a clopfic?
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If there's any cause more worthy, I've not heard of it.
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I, uhh...
...
It'd be a lot shorter....
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Well, what if you replaced the stockade with a naughty stool and the fucking with stern lectures. That'd work!
Edit: this last chapter... It's everything I've ever wanted, 11/10.
That was by far the best use of tentacles in a clopfic I've ever read.
I don't think anyone could read through this entire story in one sitting without dying of dehydration.
Not gonna lie, this last chapter was weird af. Not the content, but the writing; suddenly switching to anime-style English sub descriptions was completely random. Like trying far too hard to articulate a given action with as many adjectives as possible. Mind you I continue to love this story, but still.
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Thank you! (And thank yourself for the added dash of impreg, lol.)
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Thanks! I wasn't sure how well I could carry it off.
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Dear readers, please don't tackle this in one sitting!
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One character was deliberately talking with hentai manga dialogue for laughs. It wasn't supposed to bleed into the rest of the chapter, though!
It's becoming more and more obvious that, despite Luna trying to punish her, Celestia has become completely addicted. Next thing you know, she'll be violating the rules every other day just so she can do this again. Or maybe she'll just make it a part of the Summer Sun Celebration. Either way, I could see pony society becoming a whole lot more open towards sex and sexuality in the following years. Good times.
That hentai stallion sure made me chuckle lol
Can't wait for this to finish so the sequel with Luna being in the stockade instead is made. A sequel where Celestia jots down every little infraction to get Luna a longer time, only to have it end with it becoming a free sex society.
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Great stuff. This was like pure, concentrated hotness (if a little weird at times, ha). Thanks for sharing.
What a fantastic fic! That this isn't more popular still blows me away.
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I made it to the end! Yaay!
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Weird? Weird? (But thank you)
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Thanks. I think my story description was maybe a bit too cagey/cutesy to grab people. Once the chapter itself is uploaded and ready to go, the urge to just get it out there makes me kind of rush through all the other stuff. And that pensive Celestia picture that seemed appropriate for the first few chapters doesn't really stand out on Fimfic's front page, or scream "Here be smut!" I probably should have found something sexier.
You really went all out flowery on Celestia's final there. I'll probably have to read it again later to truly appreciate it. Y'know... because reasons.
I'm surprised you didn't go with knotting at the end. I'm okay with that though. You have an interesting theory regarding the origins of Spike's egg though.
Yes, Twilight, punish all of them. All of them.
I was actually curious enough to look this up to see what really happens when jizz goes up the wrong way, and the short answer is no, it wouldn't reach that far up no matter how hard you tried. The long answer, however, is a bit nasty and surprising.
Firstly, when a penis is pushing in a hole that's contracting and resisting rather than expanding, it's very likely to cause the skin to tear (especially without lube like in this scenario). So, if cum goes in the torn skin, it could cause an anal infection (or worse, assuming that the male is carrying with STI or something). Additionally, it could lead to impregnation! Semen can easily fall from one orifice to another, and considering how the anus and vagina are merely a centimeter away it could happen, albeit rarely.
Logic is thrown out the window for this anyway. But as for the vomiting part on the other end? Well, considering how crazy this gets in later chapters that I've skimmed through, I'm surprised you didn't go that far! Or maybe you did and I haven't gotten to that part, in which case, wow. That'd be a strange turn-on 🤨
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Yikes! Yeah, realism probably isn't the greatest ally of clop stories.
No vomit here, although I think I made Celestia get some cum up her nose at one point, which can't be very pleasant. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Favorite chapter so far! The cum abuse is thrilling! You really know all the nastiest ways to fill up a mare.!Cumm choking has also been one of my longtime fetishes too, and that sequence was gold!
Ok, no doubt that if the mule had gone for the ass, she would've been so filled that I think she'd legit vomit cumm out the other side. Like, wow.
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Thank you! I love hearing which parts people like, especially in this story. You, uh, may have reminded me I didn't dig into the misery of cum up Celestia's nose enough, so there's an extra paragraph on that freshly edited in, heh heh.
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OMG! Thanks for that! Every descriptor makes her struggle so tantalizing! 😈
Well, I finally got around to finishing this after putting it off for so long, but I really loved it! It ticked off most of my weird perverted niches and fetishes nicely featuring my favorite Alicorn. Chapter 6 with the tentacles was such an experience, LMAO! The more I kept reading, the more excited to see where it was going. I wasn't exactly turned on, but morbidly curious and amused; you have a rather bizarre imagination, my friend, lol!
I will admit though, I didn't particularly care for the gay stuff, I was more interested in seeing Celestia pounded and demeaned, so I kinda tuned out when the focus was shifted to other characters doing each other or getting distracted with drama. I did however enjoy that interaction she had with the stallion who believed she was a changeling in disguise and the mare she was eating out. Hilarious!
Kinda disappointed the cum accumulating in her gut thing never went anywhere. Celestia sort of teased the idea of the load traveling up to her stomach and vomiting it out the other end, and seeing how bizarre the tentacle chapter was, I didn't put it past the story to go that direction. But, nope, nothing happened. At least a little epilogue of her trying to clean it out or something would've been funny to see, IMO at least.
I felt that the story was beginning to run out of steam after the tentacle chapter, cuz while the smut was still hot and superbly written, nothing ever topped that bizarre incident. Perhaps if the dragon she screwed at the end had been twice her size or something? Maybe explore the idea of her taking a larger than average cock? That would've been an interesting struggle. I dunno, I'm just spitballing. I was still a great smut story regardless.
Anyway, good stuff! Probably my favorite Celestia smut story on this site. Looking forward to any future princess stories you decide to make in the future! 🤗
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Haha, thank you. Yeah, I kind of surprised myself cutting loose on the tentacle chapter, it was hard to match. As for the gay stuff, I just think yaoi fangirls are fun, and I also thought it would be funny to have a set of Celestia's partners actually be more into each other than her--subtly demeaning her a bit, though I pretty much played it for laughs.