When Celestia commits an innocent little crime, Luna demands she make public restitution. Little did Celestia realize how much the public would itself be involved!
Argh! Well written! Wonderful wearing down of her resistance! So juicy! So visceral!
But...But... Why? Why Dusty Scroll? Why some old grandpa?! Never have I struggled so hard to try and mentally erase a detail so I can stay horny! But you keep throwing the fact that he's way past his prime back in our face! It's like trying to jack off in a cold shower and I just. Can't. Do it!
9419752 lol, he's a silver fox! He carries his age well! He annoys the hell out of Celestia! Don't begrudge him his moment of glory. (Don't worry, he doesn't have a huge role going forward.)
Very nice. This seems to be quite a common setting to place Celestia in (at least in my depraved mind), yet I don't think I've ever read a story about it. I understand your concerns about the story/plot as well now, as any attempt to justify such a scenario has to be quite unrealistic and/or a bit silly. But for what it's worth, I don't think you could've done much better, and I'm kind of glad you kept it light.
The writing is fantastic again, and at least when it comes to sex and the depth of both mental and physical feelings, I can't think of any author here doing it better. Thanks for sharing.
The key pleasure here is the way you mix things up despite the repetitive nature of the situation. That's what's really needed in something like this, where there is going to be a fast string of partners. Keep that in mind going forward. Don't skimp; make each account unique and richly detailed like you have these first few, and we will be with you all the way.
I do have one small critique regarding situations like this:
She could feel the dribbles and little spurts of warm pre that steadily leaked from him, and were massaged into the walls of her vagina by his flare.
She is chock full of cum at that point, yet can still feel Worthy's dribbles as significant. Please do not forget the lingering effects of all the residual... juices. Too many stories seem to easily forget what is already there while pursuing the next orgasm, and I think that they miss out on some key, and very hot opportunities.
I like it. Slow burn from reluctance to acceptance is great, and only thing that could've made it hotter if stallions were more rough and dominating.
And this is why the Magna Carta doesn’t actually do anything
This is top tier Celestia content. Only thing we need is MORE!
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You think some random user purposely turned on adult mode, purposely find a clop fic to click, then be shocked that it is rated mature?
Argh! Well written! Wonderful wearing down of her resistance! So juicy! So visceral!
But...But... Why? Why Dusty Scroll? Why some old grandpa?! Never have I struggled so hard to try and mentally erase a detail so I can stay horny! But you keep throwing the fact that he's way past his prime back in our face! It's like trying to jack off in a cold shower and I just. Can't. Do it!
... Are you another Feminist?
9419752
lol, he's a silver fox! He carries his age well! He annoys the hell out of Celestia! Don't begrudge him his moment of glory. (Don't worry, he doesn't have a huge role going forward.)
Great start, it's nice to see another story from you! I love the build up and how they break down Celestia's resistance. Fun stuff!
Very nice. This seems to be quite a common setting to place Celestia in (at least in my depraved mind), yet I don't think I've ever read a story about it. I understand your concerns about the story/plot as well now, as any attempt to justify such a scenario has to be quite unrealistic and/or a bit silly. But for what it's worth, I don't think you could've done much better, and I'm kind of glad you kept it light.
The writing is fantastic again, and at least when it comes to sex and the depth of both mental and physical feelings, I can't think of any author here doing it better. Thanks for sharing.
The key pleasure here is the way you mix things up despite the repetitive nature of the situation. That's what's really needed in something like this, where there is going to be a fast string of partners. Keep that in mind going forward. Don't skimp; make each account unique and richly detailed like you have these first few, and we will be with you all the way.
I do have one small critique regarding situations like this:
She is chock full of cum at that point, yet can still feel Worthy's dribbles as significant. Please do not forget the lingering effects of all the residual... juices. Too many stories seem to easily forget what is already there while pursuing the next orgasm, and I think that they miss out on some key, and very hot opportunities.