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Why wage wars if you can prevent them in decidedly more enjoyable ways?
Anyway, this was a fine compilation of short, cloppy stories. Have a like!
Oh, and the last sentence at the end of this chapter is cut off.
Decided to check out what was new. Not bad.
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Chestplate
You really should give him a name, and you could definitely write some more in this chapter. It's got promise.
Not bad. You could definitely make a short story out of this. More of Celestia just messing with a bunch of Ponies and protecting the Crystal Empire or something.
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Finish the sentence lol.
what instead of like i imagine.
Was a nice collection of short stories.
Y'know, I'm going to upvote after just this chapter...
Hot...
...silly...
...amazingly lewd...
...even for such a short chapter.
(Needs more focus on the creamy filling though.
)
Oh, yes. Please do fully fill in this chapter!
Yes, please, as 8628010 said. These are good!
Fixed the little errors that were pointed out! Let me give the guy a name in the unfinished second chapter.
When you said "poison", did you mean "potion"?