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theponycaptorproject


Not much to say. I love to write, and I write just about every kind of story.

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Scootaloo keeps being reminded of what she can't do. Some days, it seems like nopony sees anything else. Apple Bloom however, reminds Scootaloo that there is at least one pony that sees her for what she is, and what she is capable of.

A quick little bit of Scootabloom cuteness.

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Comments ( 23 )

That was really cute. :twilightsmile:


I noticed a couple of typos, but nothing major.

“What is it?” She asked, as Apple Bloom continued to watch a flash of purple move through the trees.”
(extra quotation mark at the end)

A hood snaked around Apple Bloom’s head.
(hoof)

The two of the rose, and walked to the entry of the clubhouse.
(two of them)

“It’s always nice to a member of the family over.”
(nice to have)

8262340
Fixed. Thanks for the feedback!

Wow. A lot different from the other stories you write. Nice job.

8262346
Maybe Tracks should see the Wonderbolts.

JackRipper
Story Approver

Looks like a change of pace from what you normally write. I'll give it a read in the morning. :moustache:

8263126
Yeah, I haven't written anything cute in a long time. I wanted to try my hand at it again.

8263749
Wow, no one has ever done a dramatic reading of a fic of mine before. I gave it a listen, it was a good reading.

8264025
NP, lucky find ^^'
Um, fics? Says this is your first one unless I'm mistaken

8264706
I had another account way back when that had a few stories like this. Also, there are 3 other fics on this account to, but they are all M rated, so if you have that filter, then you won't see them.

It's going to take another land pegasus. Not Fluttershy, but perhaps a male pegasus who was forced to use his wings in other ways. Kind of like Sylvester the Cat being "forced to find thuthtenanth by other means."

This is adorable, and probably the only story of yours I'll read.

8430858
I'm glad you enjoyed it. If the grimdark stuff isn't for you, I do plan on writing some more cute stuff soon.

8431232

I'll keep an eye out for the cuteness, then. :)

That is so adorable

OH man!! That was adorable!! Now I would like to know the story of their first kiss.

Aaawwwwww...:heart:

8265110
What was your other account, if you don't mind me asking?

Oh would you look at that, Free near lethal Cuteness! HURK! *Faints*

I really like this story a lot! Apple Bloom & Scoots make such a cute couple! You might be better known for darker stories, but you tell slice of life stories very well.

I love Apple Bloom and Scootaloo kissing. Scootabloom is a great MLP ship and I know for a fact that the Cutie Mark Crusaders aren’t just friends, but they love each other.

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