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theponycaptorproject
Not much to say. I love to write, and I write just about every kind of story.
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Boy if they don't get enough sleep, there gonna end up like that guy from fight club lol.
Shit........
Now I gotta finish mine AND read this one.
A Sequel to the Alternative Ending where they escaped? Nice!
And i know how difficult it is to get over Trauma, i saw it before and wrote about it
oh this should be good
Oh boy, this is a continuation of the good ending from the last fic hopefully Sweetie is still pregnant I'm SOOOOOO freaking reading this.
I’m still not sure what the “real” ending is.is it this or the bad one, or is it our choice?i really hope it’s this one
i like the start and where this is going. love to read the next chapter
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No, this is a continuation of the terrible ending.
Very interested to see what this story offers.
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It's the "good" ending. But I asked the author about it way back when this was first announced. It's a case of "death of the author". Each of us decides which ending we want to be canon.
I am glad that you are doing a sequel to the "alternate ending" of "The CMC's New Lives". I really like the fact that Twilight is trying to help Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo deal with their ordeal.
But their sisters are trying to help as well. It was sweet that Apple Jack let Bloom sleep with her near the end of the chapter. But Cookie Crumbles (Sweetie and Rarity's mother) didn't help matters when she commented on Sweetie's weight! This is a young filly we're talking about, a filly who went through a very traumatic experience. Also, I felt bad for Rumble. I'm sure he's not aware what had happened to Scoots during her captivity.
Also, it seems that Bloom might have Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) from her ordeal. I don't pretend to be a therapist or anything like that, but perhaps since she got herself and her friends into the situation in the first place, she feels responsible for what happened to her and her friends. So, perhaps the Apple Family (or Twilight) could call in professional help as well. Just a suggestion
I realize that this is only the beginning of the story, and there will be quite a few twists and turns. But I am looking forward to how the CMCs recover and how their sisters (and Twi) intend to help them.
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Wait what? My trope knowledge is weak but doesn’t “death by the author” mean the story died because the author died?
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No, Death of the Author refers to the idea that when looking at stories, the author’s interpretation is no more valid than anyone elses
If this is going off the ending with sweetie belle being pregnant then this immediately gets a like as her daughter needs a happier ending than what was implied was going to happen to her in that ending.
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What you're thinking of is Author Existence Failure.
"Also, it seems that Bloom might have Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) from her ordeal. I don't pretend to be a therapist or anything like that, but perhaps since she got herself and her friends into the situation in the first place, she feels responsible for what happened to her and her friends. So, perhaps the Apple Family (or Twilight) could call in professional help as well. Just a suggestion."
-What do you mean just Bloom has PTSD? All of them show the signs of shell shocked Nam' War Veterans after coming home.
Jeeze now I just feel bad. D:
Your original story killed my soul. Guess I'm in for round 2
I don't think there are many stories around the premise of what the rape victim experiences after their trauma, and even rarer if there is another story about the cmc like this, I hope to see this concept fleshed out to it's full potential (if that is possible) please!
I have wanted this story ever since I read the first one.
When is the next chapter coming out?
I would love to see a new chapter of this! I want to see if the CMC can get a sense of normalcy back. Sure, they have their sisters (and Twilight) to help them, but they've been through so much! Rape isn't something you just "get over", but they have people in their lives that can help them and are. I am interested in how the CMC's deal with therapy and the intervention of their friends and families. Are you planning in include Zecora? Or the Young 6?
Also, though I hate to sound like a nudge, are you planning a follow up to the regular "New Lives"? I would like to see if Bloom, Sweetie and/or Scoots manage to escape (or get rescued). And if their abductors get what they deserve.
Hope to see an update soon.
hope the next ch is coming soon
UP-DATE UP-DATE UP-DATE!
*pokes with a stick* Is it dead?
Nice work. You really show their struggle.
Though, kinda reminds me of a nightmare I had once
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I'm going to go out on a limb and say thats the intention.
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Of course, I just mean captor does a good job at it
So good Please do more the story is so good
Holy shit it's not dead
that chapter was really nice and sweat ^^
Good to see a new chapter. Something I think that could add tension to this story is Sweetie Belle discovering she got pregnant from the rape.
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*Nervously glances away*
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OMG.... Is that really going to happen?
I really like this chapter. I'm glad the story isn't dead. I would like to see where this goes.
Yesss...Suffer farm mare, take joy from the pain, rise stronger, and destroy the weak willed as the final rule of the universe demands.
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...maybe. (Yes.)
Yes, this story has been updated! I loved the discussion between Scoots and Dashie about what happened between Scoots and Rumble. Scoots shouldn't be in a hurry to pursue a romantic relationship with Rumble (although he seems like a good colt). But it's good that she still has a good relationship with her idol/big sister, Dashie. Scoots should have opened up to Twilight, though. But that's her decision, not mine.
I got really misty-eyed with the discussion between Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom. Bloom feels bad for what she did to Sweetie (although she was forced), and Sweetie responds by wondering if Bloom feels the same way about her. Does Sweetie have feelings for Bloom? If so, I hope she will understand that Bloom only sees her as a friend. But at least now, the girls are taking steps toward recovery in their own way. They still have a long road though. So, it's good they have their sisters (and Twilight). I would love to see the Young 6 in this story if possible. Particularly Yona the Yak and Smolder the Dragon, they're my favorites.
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Oh boy... That's going to be interesting.
Thank you for the inspiration.
Are you going to add more to this? I like this series and I'd love to see what you have planned
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I am planning to return to this, yes. I just took a break to work on other projects for a bit.
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Glad to hear it!
Welp, she's pregnant.
Update?
Been a long time for both this and Fluttershy in the basement.
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Yeah, I haven’t had much time to write for a couple of months. That said, I am getting close to finishing the next chapter of this, and Flutters is getting there.
I'm loving this and can't wait for the next chapter!