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theponycaptorproject


Not much to say. I love to write, and I write just about every kind of story.

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I'm gonna heed the qarning and not read it but the description alone shows me two options:

She witnesses Fluttershy being raped
Or
She is Raped by Fluttershy

Just respond with a 1 or 2

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Entropy is male. Just ... y'know. Sayin'.

You really need to add the M/M tag in the spoilers.

I may have made a mistake.

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Oh, what kind? The fun kind?

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Mostly the kind where I should've heeded the warnings... :twilightsheepish:

A little dry on the sex scene, could've used more meat and descriptions, maybe details on second wave of clients to make reader feel like time and ponies really passed by. But, still, great story and good touch with Fluttershy at the end! I can feel her love and care! Would love to see more from you.

Comment posted by Rottybops deleted Mar 29th, 2019
Comment posted by Z3T4 deleted Oct 19th, 2018

I dont know if i applause or if i get aply divine justice Entropy/Fluttershy.....Too much to Process

I feel like this is Discord’s New apprentice prologue :pinkiecrazy:

You know, just because Discord was a douchebag, doesn't mean all of his kind are the same. Entropy clearly isn't like Discord but wasn't even given a chance. I like the story, but Fluttershy of all ponies should have given him a chance and easily could have raised him with the help of rest of the mare 6 to beat up Discord if they are fed-up of his presence.

Man, this was a good story! Great job!

Ya know, a sequel to this where Entropy escapes captivity would be pretty cool, but hey, that's just me I suppose.

Everyone here saying he should have gotten away... I want to see him be more brutally fucked.

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