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The Mystery Fluttershy Fan
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I'll hold off on an up vote until it's a little further along...
...but good start, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
(INB4 'Continue the other ones you rarblsuhg' from commenters. Heh. And yes, he seems to be back!
I clicked there. No fluttershy. downvote. (jk)
Hmm. Interesting. I'm not entirely sure about it yet, but it's certainly interesting. However, the clop seems a bit forced and sudden. I also spotted a few grammar mistakes and sentences that sort of skipped over words, some without proper capitalization, etc. (I'm only counting the ones I saw and noted at first glance, and I don't normally note the mistakes. Maybe it's because I'm exhausted, I don't really know.)
Improper capitalization on these three (I could probably find more if I dug around a bit)
What exactly is this? Is the person thinking?
I have a feeling you meant to put either "You" instead of "Your" or you meant to put another word after "Your".
And that's all I have the mental capacity for typing right now. If I find more I'll either edit this comment or reply to this one as a continuation. Anyway, I hope this was helpful.
4925302 Thank you I have made the changes. My editors I normally go through were busy or didn't follow through with their offer so I got impatient and posted it anyway.
10th downvote! :D
I....don't.,....what???
4925511 Ah. Hey, the author or a story actually replied to one of my comments =D
4926630 Pray tell why you downvoted?
a fic about ponies coming to life from a computer into your lap turning dark? oh this can't end well....
I don't want a pony in my lap. I'd like to have ponies on my lap if that's fine.
Alright, if Fluttershy came out of my screen I wouldn't do this, I mean, I'd guzzle over how cute she is, but I think that cuteness is just that, cute, adorable, like "Awww, I wanna snuggle it!" not have sex with her.
So yeah, I think I'll just have her be my friend, thank you very much.
4966575 Aww would you refuse poor Fluttershy if she wanted you?
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Well, if she wanted me... then I guess I wouldn't deny it... but I mean in the sense that I don't exactly find ponies sexy.
*heart attack* Too...much...cuteness..
I had a clever joke for this but I forgot it immediately. *INSERT FUNNY JOKE HERE*
Hm...
*Puts it in the list to keep track of it.*
I dont like it. I LOVE it!
PLEASE tell me the next chapters coming soon. 
i.imgur.com/tfZQS.jpg
well this was very odd compared to what i usually read and yet i want more lol
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'I don't exactly find ponies sexy.'
uhh.. then why'd you read a clopfic? that's kinda the purpose of it, somethin for people who find ponies sexy to read and likely jerk off too. i mean it's tagged with sex and theres kink spoilers in the description so you can't said you read it on accident. even if you claim you came for the romance tag theres other sfw fics here tagged fluttershy and romance so you read this knowing full well it was a clopfic.
of course all this could just be me misunderstanding what you meant, and if i did somehow misunderstand your pretty strait forward comment then im sorry and you can disregard all this junk, but with how you phrased you comment it sounds like your flat out sayin you dont find ponies sexy which would mean your not into clopfics like this.
5287781 Just because I'm commenting here doesn't mean I actually read the story.
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buuut it still comes back to the same question, WHY are you here? this story was clearly tagged with sex and listed kinks in the description so if you don't like clopfics then you shouldn't even be here in the first place to even be able to comment on it.
More please. Flutters want us. No! She NEEDS us!
-a cultist brony that thinks Fluttershy is a Goddess.
So sad this seems to be dead