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thesilentpony
Darkness will always end up out lasting the light.
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Went all out with the dictionary on this one, did you?
Oh well, this is prime fetish fuel!
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No discovered a synonym button in my writing program! but i knew all these words and their meanings, i just don't have that great of a memory at recalling them sadly, but i think this came out great
2789683Please tell me where to find a synonym button. That would be very helpful.
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i used Microsoft word 07 right click and it should be near the bottom under look up, now if you don't have it i could probably figure it out if you tell me the type of program
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Yours truly... NecromancerX69
Ps...
We need more wincest/preg or slave/preg fics.
I am going to hell in a hand basket without regrets!
Ps2...
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your comments always bring me delight like no other
I know exactly what I just read
yet
what
2789744Well I'm getting used to writing in gdocs.
This was all kinds of awesome! Thumbs up from me!
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wat
I somehow dread to have read this, but still, it was sick, evil, and mildly disturbing but this has so awesome, fetish heavy and master and slave... Wait, so Shining Armor is still mortal?! Shouldn't Twilight have forced Shining to transcend into an Alicorn by now?
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well she wouldn't want him trying something stupid like trying to escape now would she?
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oh g-docs doesn't have one sadly, that program i've used and never found it, then again i've never looked hard for it
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:D
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i still love you
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Not sure if should be happy for that, or freaked the fuck out.
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what i love all that comment on my stories no matter what they write because at least you cared enough to tell me
plus your post made me laugh
2790663 It was... an odd read, to say the least.
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probably means you weren't expecting it, but tell me, what types of stories do you normally like to read?
I'm glad then
2790676 Crossovers. I have several of those that have been well-received.
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i can see that from your page, but i've never really done one per say, i guess i could figure one out, but it'd be a singularity because i don't tend to go outside of certain universes, and i tend to not enjoy them generally so i don't read them sadly
2790687 Ah.
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He's still basically going to return as a male with morals still, he'd stay with the foal he and Twilight made. And it would prevent him from dying when Twilight or even Celestia chooses to have a ride.
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i'm sorry but i didn't understand what you just wrote
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Best he would be an alicorn for the sake of his youth.
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ohhhhh, okay i see now, but the reason why i didn't was because i liked the idea of him being controlled by twilight and thought of as lesser than her, because if everyone's an alicorn it kinda loses its meaning
This... Was the epitome of master and slave. Dear Morgan Freeman, I'm going to hell in an airliner, and I'm taking over 100 people with me.
i don't get it , all the character are always both happy and sad at the same time?....
also reading this before going to bed greatly effected my dreaming , seems ponies are starting to take a more prevalent roll for characters in my dreams.....
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you can be happy and sad at the same time, and i hope this gave you sweet dreams
2791276 idk , can't remember much of it now , but my dreams are far from what you would call 'sweet'.....
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i die once a night in my dreams or some other horror and i consider that sweet so
2791287 i see
i always escape death , i think too highly of myself for that.....
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well that's good, unlike most i still enjoy the thought of dying, like getting chain sawed to pieces, always makes me warm inside to want to feel lifeless, hehe anyway i hope you enjoyed the story
You could say that I found the fic more sad than sick for the hints of the events that happened so that Twilight ended up doing something like this to her love ones. And I have to wonder about the "happy" feeling at the end. Is it what her eyes and mind see? I think so because I just can imagine that someone as old and strong as Celestia will ever accept happily to be a slave.
And of course I wonder what did she do to herself to become this powerful and corrupted. A mix of Sombra's magic with some Nightmare perhaps?
Even if the story was really twisted it was still a good read although I feel that the happy note at the end felt like a cope out.
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no this was not sombra magic, it was of another thing, twilight has mastered all magic at this point so absorbing magic of another is possible, also i imagine that if celestia has a foal to protect she would do anything to indulge Twilight's madness to protect her foal, and it's not like twilight hurt celestia or anything, plus whatever drove twilight to this madness i'm sure she knows and understands
also yes the hints i have in the story relate to several other stories of never aging, or dying of old age, i imagined that twilight would go mad after losing all her friends and family, from what i've seen in the show she's emotionally unstable meaning handling loss and such would be a hard task for her
also after a year i'd imagine she'd get used to it
2791936 I'm sorry , but are you saying that raping someone both physically and mentally is not the same as hurting someone? So if a poor tortured soul that you personally know and trust, came and raped you then you would understand why he did it and forgive him? I'll like you to research both PTSD and battered wife syndrome and then tell me if someone really can get "used to it" and smile about it without a problem.
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wow i really misworded that if you got that out of what i wrote
the way i take Celestia's personality is that she is very motherly, she would understand the mind of her children, which means she understands twilight's mind, since she now has a foal that she would need to protect, she would do anything to keep it safe from twilight's madness,
what i meant when i said, "also after a year i'd imagine she'd get used to it." i meant that after a year of being with twilight she would understand how twilight worked and be able to use her to get a desired affect to protect her foal and herself.
also PTSD and battered wife syndrome, i know these very well and how they relate, but they do not relate to this story whatsoever, neither Celestia or Shining gave signs of either of these mental disorders
as for the
depending on the situation and the person, if i knew and loved him like a brother which would be the only person i would actually trust to some degree, (which in my case brother is a title, it's earned not given.) if they were my brother then yes i would forgive them because anyone that is of that level to me i understand with an absolution,
and in Celestia's case i imagine it would be the same because Twilight has basically been her foal ever since they met, so yes i believe she would love and want Twilight to be happy even at the cost of her happiness, pleasure and freedom, as would any real mother
The title an d image of this made me think that Celestia had Twilight imprisoned. I must say that I was quite wrong. Still while not really one for insist or rape I thin k the tension and fear were well do ne so good story over all.
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So she is afraid for her baby and herself and yet you say that she still love her and understands her........ yeah now you'er giving me a mix of stockholm syndrome symptoms with the battered wife ones.
Of course we don't see the signs in Celestia or Shining seeing we are only shown the rape scene were at the end we are suppose to feel sorry for the rapist. Now with this what I see is Stockholm syndrome that is no better that the other ones.
I really urge you to find real life cases stories in how a rape survivor feels were in a lot of the time the rapist was a father/ brother/ uncle/ grandfather/ godfather/ cousin/ neighbor/ family friend/ best friend/ priest/ husband/ boyfriend/ someone they trusted. This isn't just a "oh we had a fight and I forgave him" case. That person that you call brother that you understand and trust without a doubt? He might as well shot you in the back and then stab you because if he decided to rape you then he doesn't care about you at all.
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Fine you win
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same place as cadence, which is probably leading Equestria/dead/dying/fighting/on the moon again/ it was never told, i was thinking of making a prequel to this, butttttt idk
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i think i will, but i doubt it would be anything like this.
I wanted to enjoy this, but there were too many missing commas and misused words.
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well if you want to correct them tell me in a message, not in comments
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I didn't write the damn thing; it's not my job to correct your work. I'm just telling you that there are flaws. I could have just down-voted and gone on my way, but people around here keep asking for feedback.
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oh well, thank you, i guess...
Prequel and a sequel, please. You could probably make a rather interesting story about the events that led up to this, and about what happened afterwards...
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i am, but that's a long ways away, i'll post when i'll post it
2884843 Okie Dokie Lokie!
Thoroughly enjoyed....Thanks for your time you mad genius.
Man, this shit was dark, but i loved it, cant wait to see what you do next man.
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thanks