It's been 7 years since this war ended. No one won, and few survived. I just cant get over the fact that I lived and everyone I knew, and loved... is dead. What really gets under my skin is that one man did this. How can one human do this? All I remember before the bombs went off is that his name was really strange, but familiar somehow. I think it was "Disford". At this point I don't care, I stop caring a long time ago. But what I do care about is finding him, and making him pay. I'll make him scream like the pig he is..... AND NO ONE WILL STOP ME!
Hey guys and welcome. Please know that this is my first story so please if any one wants to share their opinions and throw in ideas to help me please go ahead.
Chapters (15)
I can trll this story will be good. Continue my good man.
( I want to be like Jacob )
this story could be better if grammar was fixed
I'd like to see what happens next.
I know the grammars not epic but I do my best. I'll try to fix it and do better next time.
When he will be teleported to equestria will he still be all bloody?
sorry for my grammar :3
Sounds good except for one thing; just by reading the description I can tell it's going to be dreadful. The description has many spelling errors in it and the chapter isn't even capitalized. That alone would turn me away from even trying to read it. Please fix it
this fic massages me the right way
More pweze.
I liked the gay wise crack, that was good.
Yea, I can dig it this fic just makes you feel epic after reading!
Love it!!! :D
Need more like pinky suffering from crack withdrawal
I love this story it's a little short but that's ok
I'll try to make the next one longer.
I'm really liking this story!
This is sweet! Keep up the good work!
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Fuck each other for food I approve
XD XD XD
hahaha i love it this chater keep up the good work
Hey, can I be your editor/prereader? I honestly looove the story, it's just the spelling and grammar makes me cringe...
Actually, no I'm good. Later this week I will go over both the grammar and spelling in every chapter and fix it as best as I can. I really want do my stories by myself, but thank you for the offer. Also next chapters coming out ether this week or some where around next week along with a new story.
DisFord is so screwed
Hey boys and girls. I'm going to be taking a little break from this story and start working on a new story called HATE VS PONIES. But don't worry, It will only be a day or two.
another very good chapter, and i can't wait to read more.
action good
DISFORD WILL BURN !
Jxuchxjfysjfufkdhvyx.... Keep up the good work! That is all.
I'm always glad to see this kind of HiE stories, I'm fucking tired of the goodie two shoes who always gets one of the mane 6 and lives happily ever after, so thanks for writing this.
Jacob will tear everyone apart
limb from limb
have a merry christmas
i did enjoy this chapter and i can't wait to read the next chapter.
wait hes not going to rip trixies spine out or swear until her ears start to bleed? i think our friend is getting soft
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Soft?
Trust me, he's only getting started with Trixie.
I'm a bit saddened that Trixie is being treated like this. She wasn't that evil. But I still am enjoying this story very much! Merry Christmas and keep up the good work!
Imagine... A world where everyone wants to kill you.
Disford is gonna have fun.
3679918 That profile pic is the most innocently malicious picture of all profile pictures.
3688222 one could say that. I just find it adorable
I got to tell you this. The story I have no problem with, it's great and refreshing
The grammar, spelling and fucked up disposition?
Awful. Ya need an editor
I am really enjoying the story so far!
I also love how he wields Emily.
Rip a ponies horn off, doesn't feel a thing.. Pony gets cold, he suddenly cares.
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That was new... I saw some feels there XD Keep up the good work!
pls write moar!
I think a "THERE IS NO GOD!" scream from one of them would be appropriate for this situation, but what you wrote is fine too
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...He might need a bit of therapy...or a lot.
maybe we could use her in some way shes always wanted to do something to twilight maybe if she works for us or with us we would let her have twilight to deal with as she wants
Still story kinda seems rushed a little bit.
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Yeah I know, I'll slow down on the next chapter.
Eat her.
Eat Trixie, I mean. There'll be no more need for her when you have all of her blood in easily accessible containers!