• Published 10th Oct 2013
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I Are Crew Chief - Amadeus



How would a maintainer react to being thrown on an foreign world? Would he be able to adapt and survive or is he doomed to ultimately fail.

Comments ( 78 )

Dayum its back!

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon?

A scowl on his face as he leaned down to eye level with the two,

Shouldn't there be a "was" somewhere? Either you insert that or connect that sentence to the one before it.

I was pleasantly surprised to see this updated. Nice work

WOooo it's back! Made my day!!! I'm late for work!!!

Worth it!!!

7587800 How would a pair of earth ponies grow wings that quick? I am willing to bet it's the twin pegasi of Flitter and Cloudchaser.

It returns! Curious to see how it progresses. How did Eric's 'abilities' get spread around so quickly? Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.

7588006 Servants gossip. And some of those who were in Canterlot are now in Ponyville.

It's awesome to see this amazing story return. It seems Gilzia and Luna are horny for Eric and have to deal with a missing Duke while Etpinego has to deal with the fact that her new servants want to take over her duties. It also seems that Etpinego is dealing with unwanted suitors given the two pegasi noble mares that wanted to join their herd and/or use Eric's abilities in a stud contract (How the hell did they find out about Eric's abilities). It was also nice to end the chapter with Eric himself rejecting the offer. Thanks for this chapter. Hope the next one comes soon.

7587932 I'm also late starting work because of this chapter. Worth it.

Something to wake up to for a good read!

7587952 :facehoof: How could i have missed that? Oh yeah im a moron.

7588792 It happens to the best of us.

7587615 Yeah it might take me a while but I still plan on finishing this one. :twilightsmile:

7587800 Nope, pegasi not earth ponies (gotta be a better term than that for earth ponies, sounds kind of degrading compared to the other races). Might give them names next chapter or not they're honestly not going to be reoccurring.


7587952 Are they nobility? :rainbowhuh:

7587801 Thanks for the catch I'll look it over. :pinkiehappy:

7587818 Thanks. :twilightsmile: It's hard trying to jump back into a story when you haven't worked on it in a while. :twilightblush:

7587932 Please don't be late on my account.

7588006
7588028 Gossip is a powerful thing :raritywink: plus when the last time we checked in our story it was late summer/early fall and now it is late winter/ early spring so more than enough time for word to get around in certain social circles.

7588071 I know right?

7589658 Part of was wishful thinking on my part. The other half was a twelve hour shift with zero coffee. Still don't know how i made it home.

7588181 Yeah had to go back and review it a couple of times to rejog my memory, but there is a feedback between Eric and the celestial sisters. To where if they're not prepared for the intensity of the emotions or if they're too close it can begin to compound their own feelings if they feel the same way. Heat seasons being paticularly problematic because of this.

It's been about 6 months in the story's timeline since the last chapter so more than enough time for Eric's...talents to be spread amongst the social grapevine. I'm sure Etpinego and the other princesses have had to deal with their fair share of proposals and offers since their coronations by families wishing to enhance their standings.

Hope to have the next one out a little sooner than this one :twilightsheepish:

7588267 I appreciate the joy this brings to people but go to work. :rainbowlaugh:

7589722 Eh I was already there I was just five minutes late getting started on making 75 pounds of pizza dough. :pinkiesmile:

7589670 made it on time, just behind schedule

7590620 True, and I'm not claiming that it is possible in real life just that there are differences between their species.

I think the possibility of a pregnancy is the least of the girls concern. How about knowing that everyone and everything they know will die and the only ones that they will have left is each other, while nice, it didn't stop Luna from going down a dark path. Living forever isn't the problem, it is living with yourself.

7591542 Very thought provoking stuff.

7590620 Plus the creatures on the planet of Equus are a fictional version of creatures based on mythological ones. I think a little artistic licencing with hard science is alright in this case.

But I appreciate you voicing your concerns they'll help me to do better in the future. :twilightsmile:

7589658 Now that you mention it, maybe Silver? Doubtful, but maybe. Then again, Sweet Apple Acres is technically a duchy, being land given to the Apple family...

7591872 True about it being a Duchy never realized that till now :rainbowhuh: Not sure if it's status will change now that Etpinego is a princess? Then again her family still owns and runs the land so maybe not.

I don't believe Silver Spoon is royalty, instead I think her and Diamond Tiara family's wealth comes from business.

7591943 Probably, so maybe new money style nobility like most public land owners in the US.

7591617 I can agree wholeheartedly with you on this and I might delve more into my version of how all of this came to be later on in the story. Don't want to go too much more into my views on it because I don't want to leak any spoilers. :scootangel:

7591955 Yeah, others who know more about the show would have a better insight, but I think that modern Equestria while a monarchy has very strong capitalistic (word? :applejackunsure:) views like a melding of the UK and the USA.

7591809
Sorry, didn't mean to get all gloomy, but it's a serious issue.

7592765 It is and it's definetly something that could get brought up in the story.

7593096
But curious that those nobles went to Applejack to see if Eric was on the market and not himself. I guess we can imagine how the rest of the world views their relationship.

7593114 To the rest of the world Eric is in a relationship with just Etpinego, so they are talking to Eric's leadmare (atleast in their eyes :ajsmug:)

7593128
I meant that they don't consider his feelings and thoughts or opinions in regards to his love life.

7593183 Plan on delving into it a little bit next chapter.

7593368 Hope it continues to meet expectations.

7593371 Thanks


7593585 :twilightsmile:

7595075 Thus far so good, lol... Keep it up!

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