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Lord Despair


I am hate, I am fear, I am sorrow, I am DESPAIR!!!!!!!!

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JBL

Dammit, it's I'm not i'm. When will people learn. :facehoof: As soon as I saw that being repeated multiple times I just stopped reading. Clean up your work.

2803342 Thanks for the heads up. I'll get to work right on it.

JBL

2803357 Let me know when you're done. It seems interesting, but things like that just pisses me off.

2803363 Okey, I went back and edited my mistakes. Pleas let me know if you spot any errors. Thanks!

,,,Post apocalypse scenario and mlp? :pinkiegasp: I shall enjoy this very much!:pinkiehappy:

A chupacabra, that's new. I'm liking this story so far. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Subtle fallout references shalt not pass me uncommented on. :moustache:

Ten cool points for blowing up a Manticore!:pinkiehappy:

Minus two for wounding yourself. :trollestia:

Uh, M67 fragmentation grenades have a five second fuse (or as we soldiers say, three second give or take two), not ten. Other than that, the story has my attention but is not far enough along for me to have a solid opinion on it.

2822006 Thanks for mentioning that, I wen't back and corrected my mistake .

2822693
No problem. Glad I could help :twilightsmile:

Damn, Isaiah got hit at the leg again. That's twice in two days! That's some bad luck right there.

How often do you update, this is amazing!:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::trollestia:

I used to be a soldier like you then I took a manticore bone to the knee.:rainbowwild:

Well, seeing there's a sex tag...I'm wondering whose the lucky mare. :moustache:

2834692 Just wait and see. It just might be a variety of mares...

Dat sheath part... :trollestia:

Last Of Us type of story?

2837950 No not really. The environment is just like that in The Last of Us, but the infection is different. I'm just waiting for a good opportunity for the explanation of the infection.

2829536 Isaiah isn't a soldier. : \

"Fucking pice of shit!"

its supposed to be piece but if pice is a word I don't care this story is awesome

I used to be a survivor like you but then my schlong was shown to a talking pony in the hospital while giving me a sponge bath................................................................................. well that pretty much sums it up

2917884
Mind telling me which part of the chapter has the mistake so I can fix it?

2959756

it was around in the first 2 to 3 but I haven't read the story in a long time :derpytongue2:

Ummm, 12:00pm is noon:facehoof:.

Might need a bit of editing.

2960703
lol, thanks for pointing that out! I went back and changed my mistake.

a few errors in spacing your words and grammar, but nice content all the same. :pinkiehappy:

2961105
Yeah... I kinda rushed through it to get some content out. (Bad idea)
I'll go over it again and correct my mistakes when I have the opportunity.
Thanks for pointing that out!

............................DIS IS SUM GUOOD SHIEET:moustache:

you want some constructive criticism hows this for constructive criticism this story is good wright faster so i can read more of your awesome work :pinkiehappy:

With all this discussion of meteors, I think that they would be an excellent way to kill a pony. :raritywink:

Holy shit, dude is fucking strong! He broke a door and a wall in one charge...with a busted leg!

Remind me not to mess with this guy.

Comment posted by OldManJebediah deleted Aug 2nd, 2013

2978297I got that idea from a childhood memory of mine.
My dad's friend got really drunk one night at our house. The man was a big guy; he weighed about 220lbs. From what I remember, he got his foot caught on something on the floor, tripped and slammed into the door and breaking it. The wall faired better than door though; there was only a small hole from the man's head. Till this day, I still don't know how he managed to demolished the door so easily.

2978848 He should play football. :twilightsmile:

2978848
Breaking down doors isn't as hard as people think, when you know what you're doing. One well-placed kick on the door's weak spot, and it'll open easily. Of course, this all depends on the kind of door, which way it opens, how strong the frame is and a few other factors.

Two examples of how not to breach a door:
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And when he (Isaiah) breached the door, I saw this:
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it will forever haunt me that my name has been mentioned in this story

2999224
I'm assuming that your name is Isaiah?

Well this has been an interesting chapter. I wonder what that figure was that he saw. If it was just his mind or something else. Though now he has a potential bargaining chip in regards to those solar panels. With all the magical things they have you'd think they'd have some way to magically turn sunlight into electricity. Heck, maybe they can improve the efficiency of that solar panel tech with magic!

awesome dude.:pinkiehappy::yay:

3003244 All of his everything is "magic resistant" to the point of immunity, although the idea of solar panels that small powering a city would be cool.

That last line is what anybody living in an apocalypse would think, heheh.

I don't understand Best Pony's little fit at the end there, is she afraid of losing the one being who can explain how most of the stuff there?

It's spelled "Shining Armor." I cringed every time i saw it spelled "Shinning".

3003584
Huh, you're right. I'll go back and correct my mistake. Thank you for pointing that out!

3003605 You are very welcome. Enjoying the story so far, keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy:

3003610
Thanks! At least I didn't misspell it as 'Shitting Armor'.

3003649:rainbowlaugh: That would be hilarious. I couldn't take this chapter seriously if you did, but it would've also made my day.

I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

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