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This is going to be one of the most akward "meet the parents" ever.
You don't know how happy I am that this story is back. Watching Eric get the maids and the guards flustered by walking with a boner in his pants was absolutely hilarious. I also found the threesome with Glizia and Eptinego to be hot, particularly with how Gilzia is just as shameless and dominant as Eric. I'm glad Eric finally cured his 6 months of blue balls via 14 rounds with those two along with a promise to give 28 to Pyre (she did asked for double the pleasure). The breakfast conversation was one of the funniest moments in the story from how Cadence asks about Eric's sex life to Glizia shamelessly revealing the juicy details in front of her family to Cadence and Twilight wanting to see one of their sessions. The cliffhanger ending is great, especially with Eric meeting Queen Harmonia, though I expected an Alicorn rather than an Unicorn. Anyhow, this chapter was amazing and I hope the next one comes soon.
Forgot to add, I found the possible shipping between Big Mac and Twilight to be funny. God knows how AJ would react.
Today is best day. Five of my favorite stories that haven't updated in months/years just all updated within an hour, including this one.
Now, for the note's definition of fun, are we talking the normal civilian kind of fun, the Army/USMC definition of "fun", or the USN Seal's definition?
Also, slightly annoyed at the lack of a warning on the clop. While I have no problem reading stories that contain it in a tasteful way, pun not intended, I still prefer to skip it whenever possible.
Well.... If she really wanted to kill him, she would have had ample time to do so rather than comfort and calm him.
This leads me to think she wants more from him than his life, especially since she knows of his relationships
Please update soon!
5567776 Glad I could make your day, and I apologize for not marking the cloppy parts. I'll go in and change it.
As far as fun you'll just have to wait and see. If you think I was screwing with him before you haven't seen anything yet.
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Eh, it happens. I'm about as annoyed as getting a papercut while taking an exam.
Well, I almost hope you screw with him as much as I screw with one of my characters (from an unposted story that I've been working on for a little over six years now), but I know it won't happen. I doubt you have it in you to do enough things to have your editor declare you, and forever refer to you as, "that evil bastard". I love that compliment
5567808 Maybe
5568010 "Evil Bastard" Is the title I strive for.
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Then you've got a long way to go. And I will watch Eric's fall into near insanity and complete and irreparable despair with glee.
As a side-note, you know you've earned the title when your editor will be having a conversation with mutual friends, with you present, and will only refer to you as "that evil bastard", no matter the context. Ex: "John, David, and that Evil Bastard are going to come with me to that party on Saturday."
This is going to be one most of the update freak out ever.
And that...We will Hear moan for...All...Night...Long...maybe two day.
Oh my god...This is gonna be good...
I'm just glad Eric isn't meeting the Dad. Father's tend to be more "protective" of their baby girls.
5568036 Luckily, we have a lot of story left to go.
5568075 Agreed. if you know the father will cause some chaos. if he know they daughter...not even married yet.
5568075 True, but then again their pater familias is someone who you might not expect.
5568126 Ahh. I see, i bet it gonna cost the cliffhanger.
5568143 Of course it will be a cliffhanger. What kind of story of mine would it be if I didn't?
5568295 I know right?
5568126 Liam Neisson? Jk.
Can't wait for that reveal.
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But seriously we'll find out the answer to lots of questions soon.
At long last, it's here! ... Ok ... calming down and reading ... STANDBY!
30 min. and rereading the chapter a second time later!
1) I have to say that it was worth the wait. I really enjoyed the character interactions in this chapter, especially the breakfast scene. Glad that at least Zopupun Estyv aka Shinning Armor is on Eric's side.
2) Ok. in the span of a few hours he satisfied the needs of 3 mares (In heat no less). Good Job! Please let it be possible for them to have foal's. That way he will have a veryyyy interesting time explaining everything.
3) I am guessing that the Lunar guards have started spreading some interesting rumors in the castle by now. Combine that whit the small bit's of info that they may or may not have heard during the more lively conversations started by Gehluli and we have a recipe for disaster. (PERFECT)
4) The one problem i have whit this chapter is Xamspona.
Ok :
a) You know that he generated "unwillingly" a volatile reaction whit one element just by touching it.
b) Then she discovers that sed elements are something completely unknown and may have some secondary or more purposes .
The logical conclusion is to bring the catalyst that started everything and let it neer the elements UNSUPERVISED just to continue some explanations, what could possibly go wrong.
5) Queen Harmonia enters the scene and knows everything. Screw the fact that he is trespassing on her sanctuary and ominous world ending message at the end. He is dead.
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Let's see what will happen next!
5568547 Glad to hear it.
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Wooo fuck yeah, an update.
Great chapter to come back on. I wonder what kinda things Harmonia and Eric are going to talk about.
Kinda disappoint at the huge sex jump with Gilzia and Etpinego, was looking forward to the detail as with Eric and Pyre in the last chapter. Oh well, there will be more later I hope.
5568883 Finally, took long enough
5569330 Yeah, sorry about that but still not trying to make it a clop story. Although if I get enough inspiration or support I may make a clop side-story for all the scenes that don't go in the main story.
As far as what Eric and Harmonia will talk about? I'm sure there will be quite a few subjects they have to discuss
5568575 Glad you liked the chapter. Always good to hear that my leave of absence didn't affect my writing too much
1. Of course, bros before hos.
2. Really would like for him to have kids if he stays in Equus, but we'll have to see how things play out.
3. Of course, anything I can do to screw with Eric's life the better
4. Yeah I'm sure the Element's mind controlling Eric into activating the rest of them, after attacking him the first time, for what ever nefarious purpose they are being used for was on the top of Xamspona's list. Isn't that right Xam? Yeah that's what I thought.
5. Well let's just say Harmonia's cdn.meme.am/instances/56940105.jpg
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Will a supporting rally of pitchforks and fire torches for the side clop chapters be enough?
5569824 ... okay
*cough* I mean I will not be intimidated by threats.
But in all seriousness it would be something done on the side, like the story pictures, if and when I get time/ inspiration for them.
5567718 You can say that again.
Harmonia: "So what can you tell me about yourself?"
Eric: "I really like having sex with your daughters."
5567753 Glad you enjoyed it.
I always viewed Celestia as being dominant in the bedroom when she wanted something and wasn't afraid to get it. But she also seems like type of mare who would like to be physically dominated and submit to a lover.
God help Eric if he ever gets all three of them together, because I think their needs and competitive nature will be the end for him.
I have plans for Cadance, along with Rarity, to be a major thorn in Eric and his herd's sides when it comes to their relationship.
Harmonia is an alicorn, more on that subject later, but from where Eric was laying in her lap looking up he couldn't see her wings at first.
In the end would like to pair up all of the Mane 6 with someone, dropped a hint on a couple already, but it might prove hard for any of them in the near future to start relationships.
Can anyone say "Shotgun Wedding"?
Good chapter, and a nice bit of teasing in the beginning. Also, I like how you didn't use Faust as the name of Celestia and Luna's mother.
5570275 Glad you liked it, and as much as I like the Fausticorn concept I thought it would have been kind of a cop out for the story if I was going to put so much time into the language and alternate names.
I can imagine Celestia, Eric, and Luna having a sit down with Harmonia. Keep in mind she wants to kill him.
Celestia and Luna: Remember Eric we want mother to like you.
Eric: Got it.
Harmonia: So, Eric, what is your relationship with my daughters?
Eric: We have had lots of sex.
Celestia and Luna: refer to gif.
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5570673 Seems legit
5570370 I agree. I like Fausticorn, but it is a nice change.
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Elements of Harmony=Queen Harmonia
5571754 Yeah a real subtle clue that will be touched on next chapter
I may be a bit late to the party, but I have this to say. Super cheesey chapter, but in the good kind of way. The kind of way that you can't help but smile to.
This being the most cheese of cheese.
So with this I like to bequief upon the the Title of Cheese king. Where it proudly.
And let's hope Eric doesn't get his dick cut off!
5572650 Yeah, but it's good to be cheesy once in a while. Helps ease everyone back into the story.
5572938 don't get me wrong, I love me some chessse. It a vary well done kind of cheese that is enjoyable for all involved.
5572999 No worries just goofing around.
5573385 next time bring some jalapenos and chips!
5573448 As long as you bring something to drink.
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Gonna milk this cheese joke till it's dry.
5573523 LOL milking something cheesy.
5573638 I think I've finally ran the cheese ship aground, twas bound to happen!
Well, it looks likes Eric has got himself into what i would call a massive "OH FUCKING SHIT!" situation.
5591492 Indeed.
5591624 Well, Expect something happen in real life...well, expect me.
5647289 Glad you like it so far, writing romance is not my forte so I hope you continue to enjoy my attempts.
Oh, stopped on the most interesting part...