Page generated in 0.033 seconds
Total duration
789 users online
766,167 hits today, 2,658,435 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Kind of a bittersweet moment, reading the author's note.
Wait... It over? Oh wait.
img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire2/d591f9c43fcc6836406d399ece821b561320976529_full.jpg
So many year when i read this. Now it gonna give more edge to next one. Heh. Better get more coffee.
P.S. You really awesome author.
Yay! This made my week!
More please!!!
Good job fella. Can't wait for the next part.
6620249 I reiterated;
... since you ignored this paragraph the first time.
Edit: Damn, forgot to open the relevant chapter. Oh well, as the author you will still get a comment alert even if the reply alert is broken.
I havent read this fic yet, but why are the names weird?
now the waiting begins anew
This chapter was great. I really liked how far Eric has come ever since he came to Equestria.
6650067 the author developed his own language.
Sad and happy. Sad this story is over. Happy there's another part to it.
can't wait for the next one.
great story and very detailed bravo to you sir! was the p-27design based on the curtiss xp-55 ascender or the northrop xp-56 black bullet because they are similartypes of aircraft i was just wondering. but well done on your fine story!
6649650 I know it was a little bittersweet writing it, but don't worry there will be more.
6649721 Thanks, I'm glad that you've liked it and look forward to seeing you in the next part.
6649729 Typing up the next part right now.
6649845 Thanks
6650011 Is a valid point and going through making changes along with some other minor ones. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
6650067
6650494 Like Railroad Brony stated I created my own language for this story. I wanted my story to have a bit of realism to it on what it would be like if someone actually did go to an alien world. I don't think they would be speaking the King's English which means that their names wouldn't be in english as well. The best example I have is like how in Japan the nation is called Nippon by the Japanese and if you met a girl named Sakura you wouldn't call her Cherry Blossom. Different names same meaning.
6650412 Thanks, have a lot more growth planned for him and the other characters. Along with some pretty hard challenges.
6650106 Hope it's not too long for you.
6650708 Can't wait to write it.
6651797 Woo hoo!
6650618 Don't worry the end won't truly be anytime soon. Have a total of 4-5 arcs planned for this story.
6650783 The XP-27 is made up of a lot of elements from different airplane designs, including the XP-55 and XP-56. The best visual I can give you is a delta-winged Kyushu J7W covered in canvas. Would have liked to have the picture of it done in time for the chapter but didn't want to hold off the chapter until then. So whenever I get done with it I'll post it at the end of this chapter.
6651431 Indeed
6651833 Such a relief.
Loving this story but I feel like I should mention something that has been irking me ever since all the girls became Alicorns. Eric and all their friends and families are still mortal. Are they really going to be comfortable knowing that everyone that they ever have known ever will know and all the people they love and care about will die? I know that they are not invincible but immortality can be really harrowing when you're alone. True they have each other but what about their families and loved ones?
Also I've never understood why Equestria simply doesn't take over the world. They already control the sun and the moon. Force the rest to fall into line and accept their ideals. It never made any sense to me.
Also will the girls rule provinces or certain aspects of Equestria? Twilight rules ponyville and the concept of Friendship, what about the others?
6651829 i would rather wait for a good fic then then get a crapy one ya know?
6654689 True quality is always the foremost thought in my mind when writing, but wait too long and people begin to lose interest.
6654569 The aspects of them being immortal now will come up in future arcs.
I don't think Equestria really has any desire to expand their borders further than they already are. They may have in the past when establishing the country post-Unification and after Celestia and Luna's victory over Discord, but since then it seems that all of their needs are met with the land they already have, Also the royal sisters, well Celestia really since Luna was banished for the past thousand years, don't really seem to want to be seen as conquerors. Still I will say that there are those who don't agree with what is going on in Equestria.
The way I see it is that the new government will be settled like this: Celestia and Luna are the heads of state and the absolute authority figures over all the land, directly below them are the Princesses who, in addition to their alicorn roles, oversee different sections of government like the US President's cabinet members with each ruling over a section of Equestria, below that the land is broken up between the local nobles like Prince Blueblood who rules over the province of Canterlot and the nearby surrounding areas a making up the membership of the Houses of the Noble Congregation, then you have the mayors of each individual towns like Mayor Mare.
So to simplify. Queens rule over the country, Princesses rule over the different states, Nobles rule over the counties, and Elected officials rule over the towns.
6655310 Hmmm. While I can understand their intent and while peace is a noble goal, it is not a means to an end. Then again that is my human preconception and I can't know what the mindsets for an alien race are.
Looking forward to the rest.
6655258 or like me forget what the ponys names are and just get uber confused
YAY! It flew! And no one died in the process! Woo Hoo! Loving the story! Keep it up I'm going to now start on part two... I hope its just as good as part one....
press out way Out = our
Last chapter of part 1
7593368
As of the conclusion of this chapter, he hasn't landed yet... ;]