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I only have one thing to say about this story...
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3343128 Thanks for the review and glad you like it so far. I already have the next two chapters written and should have them typed and the next two after that written sometime tomorrow.
3344751 Good...good... I eagerly await them...
And if you don't mind me asking, what is your method for coming up with the "foreign" language?
3344764 My way of doing the Equis language without telling spoilers is using a cipher system on normal English.
3344789 Ah, I see. That's better than most of what I've read on this site. I enjoy stories where Equestrians speak a different language then that of the human, but too many authors just smash their keyboards in order to make a language.
Anyways, I see great potential for this story so far, as long as you keep up the good quality...
3344812. Well I hope I don't let my readers down.
Glowing red eyes? But I thought they were green last night.
That AJ seems "helpless" is a little disconcerting, buuuuuuuuuuuuuutt since this is POV from the stranger...
And no drawl or twang(even if it is an unknown language) make me sad Southerner. The fact that the accent is amounting to Anchorman English(Or Avatar English) is making me cringe a bit. I need to wait, don't I?
Why are you writing this in equis?
Seriously? You gave her the larger thicker nails of unguligrade anthro on her hands but gave her the human feet of an plantigrade anthro? What kind of Frankenstein-ian anthro abomination are you trying to make here? The feet are always the least human part of an anthro and you're making it the most?! I have officially no clue what the fuck Applejack is supposed to be here, because she is sounding like a humanized pony with funky fingernails.
So he's currently a magical void? Lethal to constructs (things that have magic but don't actually generate any) but probably safe (mostly) to creatures that actually do make magic or are magic. Wonder if this ability will keep in effect until the "void" is filled or if it is just an innate ability humans have... Just idle speculation. No need to tell me, I'll let the story do it.