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Fluttershy doesn't seem OOC, she probably went away and spoke to Twilight who told of his situation and her motherly instincts kicked in.
3441892 Thanks that's a relief to hear. With her reserved nature I'm always worried of her acting too social way faster than someone like her really would be.
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Think of it like when she first met spike. She was scared of her shadow and basically exploded out of her shell because he was a new species. Kinda the same thing here, but with more confusion and lack of communication.
Maybe something to explain the sudden change such as her seeing Twilight or something.... but that would ruin the current track of not seeing a discussion from their languages side. *contemplates*
You know I would be a little frustrated if I couldn't understand them. He seems to be taking it well though. Hopefully, they can do something about the language barrier here soon... though I have to say he's one lucky S.O.B. He's surrounded by beautiful naked women. What guy wouldn't love to be in his situation.
3442127 True. It will be eventually explained why she did hug him just didn't want people to think she was being to forward if the dialogue wasn't there to help explain it. Like when Eric came across AJ at the river.
3442400 Oh he's getting plenty frustrated by it. In fact I'd say he's just about ready to blow his top again.
My only regret is that I have but one thumb-up to give this story...
3443263 Thank you. I shall take that as the highest of compliments and glad you like it so far.
3443576 Rock on! Great job on breaking the cipher. I posted a link to some googledoc versions of the chapters with the translations in them in the author notes.
Wanted Equis to sound like a possible real language but I'm not smart enough to make one up from scratch. LOL
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Thank you for the translations, things are a lot more clearer now.
The cypher drove me crazy for a few chapters, but holy hell I did it by the 5th! Nice work on that, it was a great puzzle.
I don't because I don't have a sex drive... yet. IDK why, I find no interest in women... and no I'm not gay nor do I hate gays.
Also, I try to stay away from relationships, be a problem in the military... in my opinion. Some people... no a majority of the men and women in the military have families.
Now the cypher is one where, for example, A=C, B=D, etc?
4628433 Yeah it's called a Caesar cipher. The main one is A=E with A=H as a supplement.
All my thumbs up!
Already going native. Stretching it. Not worried about incompatibility with the food(I'd probably get the runs if the food was too rich), diseases, viruses, bacterium, etc, etc. Maybe he thinks he is alien enough to weather it, but what about the others in reaction to bacterium/viruses/etc, etc he is carrying?
I'm mostly hooked for his interactions with AJ(And the others to a point) and the fact you have spoiled me with an Alicorn Applejack in the future.
In a strange place I would expect the others to realize I wasn't from around there and had no way to pay for a meal. Then, I would try a few different things to eat.
No strange confusion/excitement for familiar technologies in a strange locale. The explanation bar has been doubled.
AJ might also something as Flutters, but probably not to strangers. I just see Flutters treating Eric as a lost animal. Which he is.
Congrats! You get my first ever comment on this site.
In all seriousness... Oh wait, WHY does this have to be a specialist wet- dream?!? Hanh? I don't see any jets, EE, or pointy-heads putting stories here!
... You know... Because I haven't started posting mine yet.... and stuff.
(Oh my god! You have no idea how long I've been wanting to post that.)
Now, in all seriousness, you've made an awesome story that I really enjoyed reading. I even hated you for a bit while waiting for the next chapter to get posted...and then the next...but it's all good now.
Except, now that I think about it, you still have one REALLY loose end out there. So is this story going to keep going?
... 'cause I'd like that a lot.
Do they understand him but he doesn't understand them?
6398270 No, at this point in the story neither side understands one another. Any kind of actual communcation between them is done through mainly gestures, body language and inflections in their voices and words.
That was adorable