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3941127 Maybe. Still not sure if they'll be happy and still together in the end, but as it stands right now he is currently in a herd with the princesses he just didn't know about it and doesn't know if he wants to continue to be in it. He feels something for them but it's still uncertain if it's real feelings or just a side effect of the bond. Hope to delve more into it as story progresses but don't intend this to be the main story plot, just a side plotline to help develop the characters and expand the world I'm trying to create.
Then you have the wild card of Applejack that will need to be considered. He could join in a monogamous relationship with her, she could join the royal herd with Celestia's approval, or he could not start anything with her at all. Instead choosing to keep her as a friend. Then there's also the option of the princesses not allowing Applejack to join the herd either. I'll have to mull over it for a little bit or see what the readers want to see, but in the end I'll make my decision and will have to deal with it.
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Y'know, he should really have some say about being in a herd. Even if he accepts what everyone else seems to take for granted (that he is), I'd expect him to make a point that nobody asked his permission.
3941295 Oh I'm sure it'll get brought up if his reaction to RD was any indication
Huzzah! my favorite crew chief has returned.
Being included in a herd without knowing it? That was a dick move. And what about that ball?
3941411 Hopefully all will be explained in the next chapter, and then I can get that pesky Ball out of the way. Just had to do this prior to it.
3941379 Glad you continue to enjoy it.
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That is ok. Finishing the current objectives to move on to the others is something good to do at the moment.
3941492 Yeah, I'm just impatient is all.
He mentions that he doesn't want to put someone else through that pain. There's also the fact HE may not want to go through that pain himself. If he were to suddenly disappear, he then has to deal with the pain of loss as well. Just a point that should have been made as a counter to Rainbow's "you should let them decide" because he has the last say on if he is willing to go through that pain.
I absolutely f****** hate cliffhangers.
Very good.
That is all i have to say, other than good chapter.
3941791 Yeah I probably should have, but his personality is that he worries more about the other person's suffering instead of his own. Figured it would go well with his protectiveness. Either way hope for him and the princesses to have a long talk about this very soon (aka: the next chapter), because there's some questions about this whole herd thing and bond that needs to be addressed before we can move on.
3942300 I know me to, but I felt the need to seperate this chapter because Eric needed to basically find advice to help him kind of come to terms with things. Just who would of thought of Rainbow Dash as a fountain of sage-like wisdom.
3942378 As exciting as that sounds I've never really done sex scenes before, so don't know how well they would come out. Also not trying to make this a clop story. The most I'm going in this story is softcore whenever those scenes might arrive, but mainly going to try and stick to some semblance of a plot here. Both types
3942590 Was hoping someone would catch that.
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How could some one not!? I mean it's a classic line!! And a freaking hilarious one at that!! Now just imagine anthro ponies as the amozonnesses. With Molestia as their leader. I might pay for that...
3942711 Lucky for you it was kind of done in "The Scent" series by Distorted Flare.
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I know that... I have said series in my favs....
3942813 It is a good series.
DUDE!!! YOU DUCKED I UP MAN!!!!
He ducked up hard....
I want to say that this is one of the most original stories I've seen for some time in the site. I find the anthro and Eric's need to comunicate in alien languages to be refreshing, kinda like the Avatar movie. I also find how his liberal side regarding the attractive mares of the planet clashes with his duties and need to return home. This is a great story and I hope that the next chapter arrives soon.
3975222 Glad you like it. Really trying not to follow any set mold with this one. Just using my experience as a maintainer to help liven the story up some, and wanted to do one of a military personnel who wasn't the usual Spec-ops/ fighter pilot mold. All the while trying to remain as realistic as I can in a world of talking magical ponies.
Finishing up on writing the next chapter and then should be sending off to the proofreader either today or tomorrow. It's going to be a long one because I have a lot of loose ends that need to be tied up before moving on to the next part.
Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
This is getting.......
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I think what you can do right know, punch yourself in the face as hard as you can for being a complete ifiot then go to the princesses and apologise
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I totally agree with this guy! What the flying fuck is your problem!
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Problems, plural. And I, for one, believe them valid.
For starters, he's right about potentially being whisked away at a moment's notice. Then there's the thing about wanting to return to his own world - which is equally as valid. And while he may not mention it, instead choosing to make it about them, it's very much about him as well - how would you feel if you started building a life, only to have it yanked from under you yet again, this time separating you from beings you very, very much cared about? I'd say that'd be painful as fuck, and I can understand him not wanting to inflict this on anyone, least of it himself. (and the only glaring issue here would be the fact that he seems to be avoiding giving this last thought recognition)
Second problem - the problem of consent. If their behavior is being influenced by their link, who is to say they're of the right mind to consent? Maybe it works well enough in Equestria, like this, but this is where his ideals will clash - and I'd say, as long as he's part of the issue, his ideals have to be taken into account, don't you think? I mean, he's not supposed to be a sex toy, right? He gets a say in it, too.
And third, while possibly the least pressing but ever-present even if the other two issues get resolved? He's an Air Force airman. He swore an oath, so him being obligated to exhaust the list of possible ways back home is basically a foregone conclusion, unless he decides to go AWOL. It's not about the military, it's about how he views himself - and after more than a decade, it's decidedly a big part of his self-image, for better or worse. Even if he's considered dead in his world, he really isn't - not in his mind, and that's all that matters. When viewed in this light, the first two points become moot considerations for the most part, because the only way he can safely fail this one is through there just not being a way for him to return alive and in one piece.