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Not really original, and the anthro element put me off.
But it's well-written, with enough descriptions to help picture what happen, and we even got a language barrier, wich is always interresting for characters interractions.
But plot-Wise some things bother me, like :
WTF AJ's doing in the middle of the Everfree taking a bath ? It make absolutely NO sense, I cannot accept that, it's ridiculous to try to force the situation like this. If the MC stumble upon some water ponds inside AJ orchard I'm ok with this. But AJ bathing in the middle of Everfree ? Come on, it's just too derped.
When I see your title, I thought about a really bad pun, here it is:
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Don't burn me on a stake!
Btw must read it.
More....
3329417 Glad you like it so far. Hope to have more chapters typed up soon, free time providing.
3328441 Did someone say Khrushchev?
Actually the phrase comes from the 90's cartoon I Am Weasel. We use it in the maintainer world whenever someone has a bright idea so we can make fun of the image of maintainers being basically a bunch of knuckledraggers. LOL
3328336 Thanks for the opinions and giving my story a shot.
Mainly using the anthro element because it would fit into what I have planned for the story better than straight up ponies or humanized ponies. Also I guess if the readers think that AJ was just in the forest to take a bath then I guess I'm doing the right thing by not telling too much. Not going to ruin anything but she wasn't there skinny dipping, just taking a break on a hot day by stepping into the stream. And I have never stated that the forest that they are in was the Everfree forest, so maybe she thought it was safe enough go into the river.
Figured out half of the cipher:
"Wec fego ra c’el liev!” - "Stay back now ya here!"
"Wec fego! Ra me aevirk c’el!” - "Stay back, I'm warnin yah!"
"EPTINEGO" - Applejack
"Qis vu c’el kampa! Ai navash kix livi!" - "___ __ Y'ah! We ___ get here!"
I didn't even notice you were using a cipher until about 2 more chapters in when I noticed a pattern.
3443576 Will you please share the cypher with me?
What language is that? I was hoping to use it in a fanfic I want to write and I'm dealing with aliens so yea.
Interesting so far. The description of the forest didn't give the feel of the Everfree so I theorized it wasn't...
The language looks like a mix of Russian and French? Or maybe Anglo-Saxon if it were Saxon-Anglo(Saxglo)....
I didn't expect anthro even with it in the tags, but I'm still interested in continuing my read.
This guy survives like a boss! And Anthro AJ, that's it, I'm joining the Air Force.
I'm gonna asume that it means "Timberwolves."
...Poetry... Pure poetry
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But Rangers lead the way