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That was one sexy chapter. Congratulations, it seems that Eric will become more popular with the mares. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Awesome chapter. Just awesome
I suppose I can be satisfied with a half a clop scene even though we've waited for so long. Nice job though gave me a painful boner reading it and I love this story.
4785240 Well let's just hope he doesn't become a breeding stud.
4785453 Thanks
4785466 Thanks, even though clop wasn't in the original plans for this story. As far as more scenes like in this chapter all I have to say is patience.
I was waiting for a magic cockblock, but it never happened.
Human: 1
Magic: 1
Humanity shall win magic, you ain't got nutin!
Well, that certainly got my heart beating
Hopefully he'll get his turn in a soon to be written chapter.
4785765 I can see why you might say that. But Eric has a long fight ahead of him before he can claim complete victory.
Because a long waited challenge shall make an appearance soon.
4785927 queen cockblock ruler of the blue balls? Oh lawd help him.
4785915 Well Pyre's in heat, which means Gilzia is in more than likely in heat as well. So taking the bond shared between them and if Etpinego may or may not be in heat as well in to consideration. It might be fairly soon.
Or I might just continue to be a dick to him.
4785942 Yup, and I'm sure that all this new love is bound to attract certain individuals who may or not have been introduced yet
Definitely enjoyable! I personally enjoy your story because it isn't clop, but once in 20+ chapters is forgivable, especially of this quality. I can't wait for Eric to meet (and engage) an adversary of some kind, though...
4786106 Chrissy?! My Queen makes an appearance... unfortunate she's gonna be a bad guy.
4786165 I will neither confirm nor deny if the Changeling Queen will or will not be making an appearance in this story, nor will I say, if she does, will she be either a help or a hinderance to Eric.
4786178 be gentle, she's a good person who makes the hard decisions.
4786041 You'll probably somehow make him miss it and go blueball for a year. Perhaps when their mother is thrown into the mix, they'll forget about the heat for long enough for it to blow over.
4786228 LOL really? Well I guess it's a good thing that this chapter is listed as unedited. Good find though I'll make that correction.
4786208 All good ideas. Still up in the air if Mom is going to make a physical appearance or not. Because if she does certain other things will have to happen that may be too early in the story to reveal.
Either way I love fucking with Eric's lovelife.
4786200 Agreed, if Chryssy is to be included in this story. That is exactly what she would be doing. Just what reason would she have that would involve Eric?
4786357 The phallic kind. Wink, wink, nudge, nudge.
4786141 Yeah wasn't planning on their being any romance in this story when I began it, much less clop, but I'm going to try and keep it out of the story unless it adds to the plot. He, he, he...plot
As far as adversaries there will be more on that to come...maybe
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4786409 that got me killed on BF4, but it was worth it.
And you said this would not turn into a clopfic...
Well done, though. Your story seems to have been leading up to this over the last few chapters.
4786563 Yeah it wasn't my original intent and for that I apologize to my readers, but the story has matured from my original ideas and taken a form that I didn't see from the beginning.
If it does make too many readers upset that these isolated scenes are in here now then I will place them in a separate story as "stand-alone" chapters. Otherwise I would like to keep them to a minimum, only having it in here if it adds to the actual plot, and clearly marked for those who do not wish to read them.
One for three!
4786298 No that was a TERRIBLE idea
4787882 how so?
4786165 a new competitor has arrived
4789232 dont think our human friend could handle all that sexy being tossed his way.
4789232 maybe, maybe not, or maybe she's already made an appearance
4789320 Probably not, but I have an idea regarding Chrysalis, if I use her, that I would really like to use I just have to find a way to do it. If I can she'll throw one hell of a monkey wrench into our little herd.
4789357 I think she'd be a great addition. A more human in thought female would be great, especially the sarcastic kind.
4789418 True, but keeping her in character would mean she would be conflicting with everyone already in the herd. Which, in turn, would mean she wouldn't be included "freely" into it. This would make a great source of conflict in the story but I'll have to tread lightly on how I go about it.
Being as you seem like a Chrysalis aficionado maybe I can shoot some original ideas that I had regarding her to see if they sound like something she would do.
4789591 Chrissy is my favorite charter on the show, by all means I'd love to be able to help.
Don't involve Chrysalis to much ya know. The story is great as it is. Making it an all out clop war between mares might ruin it.
4805751 Despite the scene in this chapter still not planning this to be a "clop" story. Just decided to add the scene because it helped expand on some of the differences between human and pony relationship norms. Otherwise I would have just grazed over the scene entirely. So don't expect steamy sex scenes between Eric and the other herdmembers every time they get in an intimate situation. Might save those for a side story full of one-shots
As far as Chrysalis and her introduction being part of an inevitable "clop war" between her and the other members of the herd, I will confirm that that will never be the case of this story. Mainly because I don't see Eric betraying his herdmates for some sweet sexy Changeling Queen booty. And the fact that she would only be able to try and seduce him so far, because as soon as she touches him any disquise she would have would disappear reverting her back to her "true" form.
However I'm still not sure if I can realistically introduce/ expand on her being in the story as it currently stands. I originally had an idea for her when I started thinking up the major plot points of this story that would have been a major arc in the story, but not sure if I can still do it now that the herd has been established and it looks like Queen Harmonia might be making an appearance sooner than I may have liked. So I may have to heavily revise it or cut it out completely. Pity if I did though, because it will make the story about 100k words shorter. On the other hand I may have to keep it anyways because of certain events that have already happened.
4866528 Yeah, all of the chapters prior to Chapter 18 haven't been edited and more than likely have some errors. Especially in sentence structure. Been meaning to go through them again or get someone to look them over, but just been too busy to go through them all.
But thanks for pointing those out and hope you continue to enjoy the story if you continue to read it.
4880686 Atleast I can take solace in the fact that people view my mistakes as epic
4903756 No one ever claimed that she was the egghead of the group.
4908136 Can't wait to see Chap 24 gonna to be.
i like it all the same
5104550 It gets better?
ALL HAIL AMADEUS
5127193 Glad you like it so far. Now I just have to find the time to finish the *next* chapter.
*Edit*
5202855 You can have electronics out in a tranist flight unless the systems in the back are up, and if you don't have the clearance to be there when they are (aka maintenance) you are isolated to less sensitive parts of the plane for the duration of the flight like the crew rest seats in the back or the cockpit. Then again most maintainers would rather catch up on their sleep than worry about what aircrew is doing.
*pokes story with a stick*
Hey... how's it going? New chapter soon? Just curious.
Hope life is treating you well.
5269085 Yeah, still alive... I think Anyways, I have to apologize to everyone about the delay on the next chapter. Currently working on it and trying to have it done within the next week.
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