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It is ALWAYS Beer O'clock!
Thank you so much for this chapter.
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You see Ivan, when title weird, people attention is grab!
6611171 Drinking Rum in the morning doesn't make you an alcoholic it makes you a Pirate!
Somewhat contradictory.
Was expecting racism to come up somewhere in that one sided talk, not sure how I feel with it not coming up.
I don't trust the captain...he's planning something...
Here have this...
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You know what to do...
6611824 ARR!
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dat update doe
It been hell for me. now it time for me, TO HUG YOU!
6611171 As the great Alan Jackson and Jimmy Buffett say, "It's five 'oclock somewhere"
6611622 And thank you guys for having so much patience with me.
6611634 Damn beat me to it.
6611642 It's my own freaky abomination. Physically they look very similar to humans but in addition to the normal horns and wings they have fur on their bodies, tails, and pony ears ontop of their head. I guess on the anthro scale you could say they're like a 4.5.
Here's a pic how Applejack appears in the story:
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And here's a pic of Gilzia and Eric from around the end of Chapter 13:
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6611739 Da!
6611956 Thanks for pointing it out , I'll give it a look over and see if it can be revised a little.
6611959 I thought about racism coming up, but kind of screwed the pooch on that with Rarity saying that in Equestria they don't really care about what they look like when it comes to falling in love. So I went more with social classes and how the others perceive the alicorns as god-like beings interacting romantically with mortals.
6612115 Maybe I guess we'll have to wait and see.
6614242 I like it either way, they're both a good source of conflict.
6614208 Be real careful posting NSFW stuff on this site. Permabans are just around the corner - There's kiddies here! Apparently.
6614208 It makes no sense for their hands to retain the protective shell on the last joint and their feet to loose it. Their hands are evolved/designed for fine manipulation and don't need something that will interfere with that, their feet are evolved/designed to support their weight on hard/rough surfaces and absorb impacts with the same and do need that extra protection. It makes no sense in terms of evolution OR intelligent design to have keratin covers on hands but not feet! Keratin on both, believable. Keratin on neither, believable. Feet but not hands? Sure. Hands but not feet? Completely illogical from every conceivable perspective. The hand thing doesn't even serve any purpose in your story! It's like the only reason it's there is to be pointless and irritating to readers!
And why did they suddenly start talking about hooves in chapter twenty when they don't have any and hadn't made a single mention of them prior to that? They don't have hooves so they don't have any reason to use that canon(hooved pony) ponyism. It again makes no sense. Just like if humans referred to their hands as talons, or their feet as paws.
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Yeah, that is humanized. What you are describing there is a variation of humanized not a variation of anthro. Take a real human being with a severe case of Hypertrichosis, put a headband with horse ears on his head and stick the base of a prop tail in the back of his pants and you get your version of an 'anthro' Earth Pony... that ain't anthro.
6611956 Not really.
This is referring to the previous part of the paragraph:
talking about why he didn't go to the market the day before, not the current situation. Remember this is taking place at 7AM. The previous day he scouted the hunting site in the pm, then got back too late to go grocery shopping... at a farmer's market.
6614828 Thanks for the advice will do.
6615408 And I agree with you to a certain degree, but when I was coming up with ideas for this story I was wanting the ponies to be a fictional offshoot on the evolutionary tree from prehistoric horses. Where, with the meddling of a certain alicorn queen, they retained their multiple digits and gained bipedalism as they evolved instead of remaining quadrupeds and evolving one toe. So in the end it didn't seem right for them to have hooves on one set of limbs and not the other. Still I wanted them to retain some kind of connection to their equine kin so I went with the hard sheaths covering the distal phalanx of each finger and toe like many multi-toed quadrupeds have.
However, I was concerned on whether my interpretation would be considered anthro or not. So I posed the question in a couple of groups and was told that it was kind of a grey area being as they do resemble humans a lot, but that it was best to label it as anthro because they still retained the fur, ears, and other features unique to the different races that made them definitely not human.
Man I love the story but I wood like it if there were more chapter!!!!!!!
6631679 Lucky for you the last chapter of arc one should be up in the next few days and the first chapter of the next arc hopefully shortly after that.
I love the story thus far, Only on chapter 26, got a few more to go but I'm enjoying it.