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Dark Enigma


Enigmatic darkness for the perverse.

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Zack Branigan, a socially-awkward, hormonally-stressed out, human teenager, finds a genie's lamp. He could have whatever he wants, but what does he want? It's not like genies are notorious for being tricksters. And it probably doesn't help that the genie's name is Trixie, I mean, The Great and Powerful Trixie. Meh, whatever...

Inspired by a picture on EQD
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Click here for the original image.

(I don't know if I'll put sex scenes in this fic, but I put the sex tag just in case the story goes in that direction.)
(10/01/2013 edit: newly added gore tag.)
Bonus Picture here
(2/9/2014 edit: newly added dark tag)

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 80 )

3225033 That was completely unintentional, I swear.

Hmmm.............. I like this. Keep going. :twilightsmile:

my reactions to clopping:at first i was like :facehoof: then i was like :duck: and at last i was like:trollestia:

3228209 ok you picked or for 400 the question is "who helped faust make the friendship is magic charicters when it was in beta"

3228255 First off, it's Faust. Secondly, Lauren has always loved MLP since the first gen so her pre-beta ponies could be credited on her childhood friends since Faust clearly stated most of the Mane6's adventures are based of her own games she played with her toys when she was young. But if that isn't good enough, it all started when Faust went to Hasbro to pitch her Galaxy Girls idea. Instead of giving her the go ahead, Lisa Licht showed her their latest mlp animation and asked if Faust can do anything with that. This is when the magic begins. Lauren got started on her pitch bible, creating a few early sketches of the Mane6. She brought in past associates Martin Ansolobehere and Paul Rudish to help out. After a few sketches, Hasbro requested more so Lauren then brought in Dave Dunnet and Lynne Naylor to develop the background and imagery of Equestria. The pitch bible was accepted and now we have the wonderful show known as My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. :derpytongue2:

3228326 thx I knew something was wrong with the question...or maby I just worded the entire thing wrong :twilightblush:

3228366 it's cool :pinkiehappy: so did i win the 400 points?

3228382 da now you can open the door
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2
3
And 4
Each has a different prize for you

3228456 the secret door "and"
Holds a moon rock signed by Luna, 5000 bits and a plushie royal guard *gives said items*

See you all next week on Equastian Jeopardy Pro

3233841 no you wait impatient fou
Or nightmare moon will kill you

Really.
That's all it takes to drop him?

It's like a bad anime.

"I wish for you to never harm me."
[Insert second wish]
"I wish for you to never be found again by any being, intelligent or otherwise."

Game, set, and match.

Bitchy genie: 0
Me: 1

3254054 considering he's a social shut in who probably never even seen a gym, yeah, that's all it takes.

3254083
1) she can get someone else to harm you
2)That third wish prevents her from leaving you, so after you make the second wish, she would realize what you've done and destroy you before you even make your third wish.

Inspired by a picture on EQD

Wait, Navitas' Genie pics got on Equestria Daily? :pinkiegasp:
There are 7 genies, as well as Genie Trixie, inspired by the Ask Genie Twilight tumblr blog (which I am writing a fanfic based off of). I didn't think someone would actually use one for the cover art of a story.

Hmm, now I'm interested. Reading this later when I have time.

3257860 I included the source if you wanna check it out yourself.

3257897
So it is... huh.

Well, they came from here. All 7 genies including Genie Trixie.

3257969 I updated the description so people can see it on EQD and the original on DeviantArt.

3258044
Well, that was just the banner with all 7 genies. The link for just Genie Trixie is here. Not to overwork you or anything! :twilightsheepish:

But yeah, I'll look at this story when I have time.

3258096 It's fine. Every artist deserves credit for their work and it isn't fair if others take it from them.

Ok, I know you've gotten kind of far in your story but I have a few suggestions.

1. You might want to stop useing Zack's name so much. It's like you're trying to make it a first person fic without acually making it first person. Or you could change it in to a first person fic.:applejackunsure:
2. Try making multiple chapters into one longer chapter. You don't have to, I just thoght I would give you the suggestion.

Ok thats all I got for now. I might come up with some more later, I don't know. Anyway, keep going. I want to see where this goes.:pinkiehappy:

3258511 Thanks for the feed back. I have noticed I used Zack's name a lot too, but I prefer to read a proper name rather than "I" all the time which is mostly why I made this story third person. I will take your suggestion though and cut back on the amount of times I use his name. Again, thanks for the for the feed back :pinkiehappy:

Didn't Trixie mention that she is radioactive? You should really have made your wishes by now. :trixieshiftright:

Oh Trixie, you so crazy.:rainbowwild:

Yay! Update! But wait... What happened to Zack's arm?

Oh never mind. I understand now. Had to go re-read the last chapter but I got it.:twilightsheepish:

"I wish you couldn't kill me":moustache:

3374131 It's a thought, but Trixie has broken the rules before. She doesn't have to follow her master's wishes.

Nice read, nearly skipped it, for the short length of chapters.
Well, I didn't regret having such a good read in between.

3409109 I'm glad you like it. The small chapter sizes were done intentional. No chapter will reach 1000 words. It's a small challenge I set for myself.

Well... I kinda liked old Zack, I'll be sad to see him go.:ajsleepy:
One request though. Shenanigans :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3431761 Don't worry, I have all kinds of plans for new Zack. I mean Trixie does. A person doesn't simply change over night. Even though they have set in their minds that they have changed. My ex-girlfriend taught me that.

well that didn't work out as planned now did it?:rainbowwild:

So when are we going to get to her djinnification?

3493513 In due time, possibly next chapter if you don't want spoilers. And if you don't care about spoilers, then it will be the next chapter. 'Nuff said. :moustache:

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