Why... The eternal question with even more eternal answers. This one question can be used to question anything and everything. It's an endless endeavor that is most likely fruitless, but nopony knows for sure for how does one reach the end of endless? We can always learn more, but to what extent? And will it even make us happy? Will it make us happy to know everything? What happens then? Where do we go from there? I can tell you... nowhere. We will never reach that point, because we can always ask one fundamental question--why. This is the story of a soul's struggle with the eternal question. And it all starts at the moon, among the void where nothing exists but everything is questioned.
Editing done by newbiedoodle
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Ooh, very, very nice. I saw some errors here and there, and some parts could be rephrased, but as-is... 9/10. I'm eager to hear more.
If you want a helping hand/hoof/limb-end structure, shoot me a PM. I'd be glad to help.
I should mention that I am an editor. I literally find errors for a living and, as such, am very sensitive to them. You wrote a story that so enthralled me that I was able to ignore them. No mean feat is it, to get me to ignore an error so I can keep reading the story.
4616911 You'd just do that for somepony? Whoa,
well I was maybe wondering if you could lend me a hoof with the story I am currently writing, as I do make mistakes, and I don't always use correct literature..?
4688703 I do it for stories I think need/deserve/can be saved by it. I'll take a look.
Holy hells that sounds haughty. Eh, the point it across does pass, so care I shan't.
4688711 wow, you reply fast - I'm impressed
4688722 I try my best.