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A strange package was delivered to my house. It was labeled "Pinkie P.A.I., Your New Best Friend" with "Pony Artificial Intelligence" written underneath. What it could mean?

Credit for the image goes to Raikoh.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Well, this is interesting. Kinda like Sweetie Bot, but not Sweetie Bot.

Da hell ok weird but cool so far cant wait to see what's next keep it up

Good first chapter. The introduction was well done, (It was fun to read) as well as a good transfer to the main story, (No whiplash!) and I have a general feeling that someone of sufficient competance is making this story, something that doesn't get passed around as much as it should around here.

The english language gods are pleased by this storys offering, and the only hiccup I got was that our main character accepted this too quickly, but, at the very least he states out loud the peculiar situations existance, something that can't be said for a majority of other fics.

I look forward to future chapters, and am interested by where the story plans to go from this strange point it left off of.

Tl;dr- Good story, better than most on this site, make moar.

Afteredit: I'm feeling extra criticy today :]

:derpytongue2: this is interesting
and for that you gain a fave and a thumbs up :pinkiehappy: and a Pinkie smile

3209811 Your critique is greatly appreciated, thanks. :pinkiehappy:

Where is the infinite thumbs up button?

You know, I was tempted to read this a second time, that's how good this is. It needs more exposure. More people must read this. You, sir, have an interesting premise here, and it needs to get noticed more.

Just brightening up your day with a supporting comment. Hope you don't mind. :twilightsheepish:

3222954 I don't mind at all! It's the appreciative readers like you that keep me motivated to write. Thank you for such an awesome morale boost! :pinkiesmile:

Yeah... because I was a bit worried here, thinking we weren't going to get much Pinkie. Believe me, I'm not against mainly Human fics, but the ponies is why I'm hooked. This chapter... well, it really wasn't much, but at least it built up on the story, so I'll give you points for that.

This is a silly question, but do you mind if I spread the word about this? I'm sure you don't, but there's always a chance of you wanting to remain under the radar for good reasons...or just to be a moody, underground kind of guy. Whatever.

So, what do you say? Want to be advertised to a few people?

Hit the feels for me with the divorce thing.

Anyway, hope things work out.

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I did it. I'm sure he wouldn't mind, because this story needs more publicity. It's that good.

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Still always nice to ask, but alright. Doin' it right now.

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I suppose, but I'd feel honored if someone featured one of my fics on their blog posts, or whatever. :yay:

3244460 It's true that I would be honored to have my story publicized by anyone who thinks it's good enough to do so. Feel free do spread it to whomever you think will appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

Like this story and I hope to see more of Pinkie P.A.I :twilightsmile:
There isn´t much etablished yet so I can´t say much more.

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