• Member Since 3rd Dec, 2012
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OfficialGearshed


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Rarity went about her daily work as usual, snacking on her new favorite treat, a special gem treat that Spike made for her birthday. After she sets up her new dress line, strange things began to happen... Including the appearance of an otherworldly artifact.

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Hey great story so far I only saw one spelling error. It was during the earthquake and u said acrocc, not across. Thumbs up, but it definitely souls like its hinting on a dark magical box that reproduces like a parasprite... Lol hope I didn't say anything wrong. Good story, keep up the good work!:moustache:

#Willliam w2 Thanks for the imput. Fimfiction has been having some problems with saving stuff recently and from the looks of it, a couple of my corrections wern't ever saved. Oops...

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