Waring. This fic contains massive spoilers too EqG and is extremely dark. Rated Teen for gore, death, and overall darkness.
What if Sunset Shimmer didn't try and kill Twilight? What if, just before her plan was about too fail, the remaining five elements fell into her possessions? How much more powerful would she become? Would that power be multiplied once she crossed over?
Join Sunset in this grim-dark alternate ending too Equestria Girls. This story will have two chapters and will be my first grim dark story.
Chapters (2)
3011658 I don't wan't to make it too disgusting. I ratted it based on what my editor thought. I'll ask his option again during part 2, where Sunset enters Equestria.
3011658 I'm the editor and I've been thinking about it on and off all day. What's written so far could most likely pass for teen. I just wanted to be safe since Knighty got stricter with the ratings and such.
3011658 'Gorier' ISNT A WORD!!!!
3016022 It is a word dude.
3018009>>3020330 Sorry about my earlier behavior,I was up at around 3 A.M. and I didn't get any sleep.
gorier IS in fact a word.
3022028>>3020820>>3020330 Boy that escalated quickly. Glad you guys resolved that before I had to intervene.
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Elsewhere in the human equivalent of canterlot: "Shining, sweetie. Where are you!" Cadence called out
"I'm in the kitchen!" Shining called back.
Cadence quickly walked toward the kitchen with a huge smile plasterd on her face.
Twilight and her parents noticed her quicken pace and followed close behind to answer their growing curiosity.
Once in the kitchen they saw Shining preparing a sandwich. In the doing so he had his back toward them.
Cadence took a deep breath, preparing to let loose what she had weighing on her chess. "Shining i'm pregnant" she said with glee in her voice.
Shining froze. Twilight and her parents announced their congrats.
"Shining whats wrong aren't you happy. You're going to be a father." Cadence said a bit nervously. Shining still stood stock still.
"Shining turn around dear, you're starting to scare me" dazzle said with clear worry in her tone.
"A child" Shining said quietly. "I going to be a daddy."
Orion frown, starting to lose his patience "Buck up son, a kid isn't gonna kill you. Just look at me I've got 2 of em'" he said with a smirk.
"Dad, mom, twily, Cadence I..."
A loud snap reverberated throughout the house. Shinings' head did a complete 180 and his body spasm slightly and went limp collapsing to the floor with a thud.
Twilight and Cadence let out a blood curtiling scream while dazzle fainted.
Orion at that point was running down the road at full speed trying to reach his boss's house
"Extend my hours, dock my pay, belittle me in front of my friend and family will ya. Well guess what buddy your time is up!" Orion shouted to the night sky as he ran.
I'm sorry for that but that was on my mind constantly.
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I don't know why Night Light would blame his son's death on his boss, but damn that's dark. The worst part is that it's probobly what happed.
3030885 2 things 1: I wasn't implying that Shining's father blamed his boss for his sons death, I wanted him to think that by the power of spoken word that he could kill anyone by his own will. And secondly I hope that you won't count celestia as inevitable rode kill. Keep in mind that luna may have the power to illuminate the star in the night sky but celestia has the will and power to move them. She can draw power from the many billion of stars and gasses in space. In the end Celestia is a power house and if the god of chaos decided to to conjure up a planet for them to duke it out then Celestia won't have to hold back. Celestia is dare I say it all powerful but limits herself, in combat she's as strong as she needs to be.
3034395 Very true. I'll keep that in mind when writing the final battle. This will be quite the apocalyptic battle. I can already tell this is going to be so fun too write.
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Kill twilight, or better yet kill Celestia!!
If only Antoine(my OC) was there: he would turn into a giant, swallowing up all of materials, except the girls(like a bowser), pick his hammer, boost himself with Dragon Dance, get Flygon wings and tail and defeat her with Hammer and Dragon Claws(with SIZE DOES MATTER music). But this is awesome
I hope the killings get more creative. The Rainbow and Shining kill were fine but the fire balls were a bit.....stock. No offense, I'm just a huge gorehound but if either this
or this
Starting at 1:05
I would be
Tell me, will this story go the DBZ route in terms of fighting and violence, or will it go more like say....Sinister in terms of violence. Oh yeah, everypony is screwed as even before taking the other 5 elements, Sunset was stronger than Discord
3211032 Funny enough, thing are going to get a whole lot DBZ, since once Sunset crosses over, her power will double again will be facing all four princesses, and Discord,surviving elements. Also, I'll try and sample up the kills.
The reason Sunset was holding back was because she didn't wan't to risk destroying the portal. Now however, there will be nothing stopping for unleashing all her demonic power. Hell, the fact she bring her army with her is beyond over kill.
And Yes, the surprising amount of power she displayed in the film inspired me to right this story. Can anyone really say they saw Equestria girls expecting that. This why I loved this show show. It does thing you would never expect shows of it's kind to do.
Exhibit A.
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3211375 I am so tempted to play "Ultimate Showdown of Ultimate Destiny" right now
In any case, DBZ style fighting is awesome especially when it's between equals. A clash of might, skills and brains working over time as bone crashes against bone and energy balls fly 
. Heh, excuse me, I just got the Frieza saga on DVD yesterday and I can say with certainty that Frieza vs Goku was the best battle in DBZ.
start at 3:28:40. The fact that they're both even makes it so much better. Curbstomp battles will not hold a story
3211487 One of my biggest regrets is never seeing that fight all the way though in the 90s. I remember trying desperately to catch the next episode just see what was going to happen next. Maybe I'll watched the uncensored Ki-Version eventually. Freeze is best DBZ villain not counting Brolly.
3211593 The Kai version is sadly not on Youtube, still the Funimation dub is not necessary to enjoy the fight.
Discord: Super Buu
Nightmare Moon: Frieza
Chrysalis: Yakon
Sunset Shimmer: Vegeta
Sombra: Babidi
3211614 what are snips and snails? jeice and burter?
3250069 Nappa and Raditz
3251413 snips is nappa then =P
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Twilight:goku
applejack: piccolo
Spike:krillin
fluttershy:gohan
rainbow dash:tien
scootaloo:chaozu
shining armor:raditz
master roshi: caramel
yamcha: snowflake
nappa: snips
vegeta:sunset shimmer
king kai: luna
cui: snails
dodora: gilda
frieza: trollestia
zarbon: lightning dust
ginyu force: queen chrysalis and changelings
dende:derpy
rapidash twilight: ssj
trunks: cadence
king cold: nightmare moon
android 19: sweetie belle
dr gero: flim
android 18:applebloom
android 17: babs seed
android 16:big mac
cell: rarity
cell jr: opalascense
dabura: sombra
trixie: mr satan
spopovich and yamu: shadow bolts
pui pui: flam
yakon: garble
babidi: Discord
majin vegeta:demon sunset shimmer
buu: pinkie pie
super buu: pinkamena
kid buu: filly pinkie
goten:aloyisius
gotenks: cadelisisus
vegito: sunset sparkle
3211375 didn't Twi say the Elements are stronger on the human side?
3367169 I think it works something like this, or at least this how I originally imagined it. When you bring an element over and harness it's power in the human realm, your own power will become stronger when you get back so long has the elements remained bound to you when crossing worlds.
3367227 I think that Sunset will be strained by this though. Remember how Celestia was unable to permanently trap Discord because she lost her connection to the Elements? Sunset was never connected to begin with so certain attacks will be weaker than she expects
3374677 You could be right about that, but I think she does have a tie to the Element of Magic. Celestia took her under her wing for a reason, and from what I seen from the show, Celestia has a reason for everything. I see Celestia and Sunset has almost an Ankin and Obi-Wan relationship. She tried to groom Sunset, but when she scummed to ambition she passe the mantel to Lightweight who was able to do everything Sunset couldn't. The only difference is Sunset isn't Twilight's mother.
That's Impossible
3374803 She may have a tie to it, but Celestia proves that having a tie with an Element completely falls apart when it finds a new master. Discord broke free because the Elements had new masters, proving to me that when an Element finds a new master the old bearer loses power. Sunset is doomed if she attacks Twilight due to the Elder Wand effect, she'll have to have someone do it for her.
On a different note, when will the net chapter come out?
3375133 I have working on a'lot of stories right now. It's a curse having all these great ideas and having no time to jot them all down. Since this is supposed to be a two chapter fic, I'm going to wait till I have a'lot of free time before I start writing. I haven't abandoned this story, it just not high on my priories list at the moment. However, the fact that their are people out their eagerly awaiting the next chapter is very motivating.
3375133 I'll try and get it done before New Years.
3367227 um..okay?
Continue it or you will taste a brony community's rage. DO IT, OK?
(joking)
3519748 I want the final too be good, so I'm waiting for when I have loads of free time. Writing fics during the school year has been a struggle. I'm either distracted by a video game, working/stressing out over assiments, or too lazy to write. I could start over Thanksgiving break, but the I don't want too rush it like I did the first chapter. I really want an Armageddon feel to this next one.
3519786 Hey, are you me? Because everytime i want to write in my notebook, KH2, Pokemon and Internet say"Anthony! Push my button" and then, the new fimfiction was never ended. The end
Yes! Kill more!!!!!!
3763304 Not the reaction I was expecting but... ok.
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Still... Cadence man
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3763696
Screw Cadence I f*€k!ng hated that alicorn
3519748
Calm down my friend think about Mega ampharos that makes you happy right :)
Makes no sense
Did she summon Fluttershy?
Sunset Shimmer has a huge edge power wise, makes sense, she is using the Elements of Harmony. It's at this point that you want Sunset Shimmer to die in an awesome, DBZ villain style way. I' m not sure which is better, Sunset dying in a long, drawn out battle, knowing she had no chance to win or Sunset dying quickly, getting owned in seconds before she has a chance to react.
This is the quick, curb-stomp death type
This is the slow, beating the opponent in a way that they can fight back, but the villain knows they have no chance in the end
I turn my back for one second and the fic that does an ultra evil badass Shimmer right updates. Why am I the last to know these things.
Oh well...who wants to see Sunset to go down, anypony?
O_O, Aaaaaaaaaa, Running. (Gets the heck out of here).
This should be easy, OMG, (Sees Sunset get the other elements and everything else):
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O_O, Guess I'm running.
damn this waiting
4161793 I know it must suck, but when I do update, the chapter will be all the more better than if I rushed it wild under stress and school.
3030885 could you tell me who makes those surprise ponies pictures? I've been meaning to find out
3091688 screw you man Tia is the bomb
Where the new chapter its been a whole year
?
5170654 Nope, I still have till January 9th. That's when the last update happened. But yeah, this is defiantly on my (to finish list) especially since it only has one chapter left. All I can say is that I'm sorry, but I will try and finish once I have access to an editor. Till, then I'm afraid any attempts to complete the story will come out forced. Since it has been such a long wait, I don't wan't to half-ass the ending.
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I literally took a moment of silence and put my hand to my chest and everything
5748920 Reminds me of the time I first read my Little Dash. Defiantly didn't hold anything back with this one. I'm glad my story could evoke such an emotional response. Don't know when I'll conclude this story, but its on my list for sure. Though bewary...
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