Two months after the events of Equestria Girls the monsters locked behind the gates of Tartarus find a way into the human world. With the gateway to Equestria locked for another twenty eight moons the only way to help is for Celestia to create reflections of the Elements of Harmony and have Sunset Shimmer give them to her new friends and the recently transferred native Twilight Sparkle. With these elements Twilight and her new friends become the magical Equestria Girls!
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Twilight, you said the words that press "Begin Adventure Button"
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*Uncle Voice* Magic Must Defeat Magic!
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First of all they are taking the common magical girl villain route of gathering enough power to take the world in on shot.
Second if you watched the movie then you would remember that princess Luna said the inhabitants of earth have no defense against magic. So in the words of Jackie Chan adventures Uncle "Magic must defeat magic!"
it's gonna get EPIC
if only I can think of a good enough equestria girls fic to write
This is starting to get good.
Great story would like to see the "Humane Six" or "Mane Six counting Sunset" will be become friends with Twilight. Humane Six is a stupid word, but I use the phrase Mane Six for the ponies.
2894251 You're comparing beings who need complex and expensive tools to do such things with beings who could possibly do the same and more with but a thought. Like everyone else has said: "Magic must defeat magic."
This looks intriguing. I'm going to give it a fav and keep reading.
Just as I got to the end I completely forgot this was about an adventure, I somehow thought it was a Slice of Life. The ending caught me off guard until I remembered
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How about...Main Six?
Nice job so far. Formatting-wise, you're missing a few words pretty much everywhere
, but as far as the story itself, it shows potential. Can't wait for the next chapter. 
what happen next chapter?
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Working on it but I just got Pokémon Y
3344004 Okay I understood some parts, but at near the ending it just got strange for me.
I'm not trying to offend you, if you don't understand what I mean by this. 
Dead? Also how many words u have so far
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No. not dead but I should be qeiting more. but the next chapter is at 2029 words.
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So what's your word count target
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It's not so much a word count target as tell the plot (story) points that I want to.
Must see next chapter!
This is really GOOD! Update soon!!
Hm.
All right; I'll stick around for the ride,
3434603 Now that my friend is a lot of words.
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My mistake, I was looking at the character count
Pretty good! I'll fav if only to support EG! I also saw this on Deviantart a few weeks ago, so it was good.
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Thank you
I can't wait for the next update!
I liked it, but it felt terribly rushed. You really need to slow down the pace... I found it disconcerting how quickly you sped through it and it was a real turn off to a rather interesting story.
You character portrayal was sub-par. The characters could use major improvements in interaction as well.
At best, everything felt forced. Please fix all this and the story would be that much better.
5157410 I, for one, LIKED it, and hope it gets updates!
Do you plan to continue this?
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Yes
6252028 Then pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue!!!