Spoilers to Season 4 EP 26. Seriously, guys if you haven't seen it yet, do it soon.
Warning. Takes place in a universe where Twilight is a bitch troll.
The battle with Tirek has taken it's toll on the Ponyville. Both Carousel Boutique, Sugar Cube Corn, Sweet Apple Acres, Rainbow's cloud home, and Fluttershy's cottage were obliterated... after Twilight used them for cover. Yet what does Twight care. Not only does she still have a library, she's got a pimping new castle that she's note sharing. Not if her friends have anything to say about it.
Special cameo appearance from a beloved My Mortal Big Brother character. The two stories are not in the same universe.
Edited by Fantasia Archsage
Chapters (1)
This would be my reaction if it were Twilight
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No. Goodbye.
4428427 No sandwich for you then.
This is why I am glad to have modest and caring Twilight with us. Of course, cannon Twilight I am afraid to see how much room is going to be left in that library after she is done filling it with book after book after book after...
4428427 Freak, should've saw that.
I'm really sorry. 
4428481 No Worries
No body catches every mistake. 
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There are four errors in this sentence, can anyone here list them for me?
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- It's instead of its.
- "liked like"
- Tense change at "shining".
- Comma before "and"?
My turn: How many ways are there to point out errors without being a patronising so-and-so? There's go to be at least one.
4429173 "It's", "liked like", "shining" (tense), and the fact that it would sound better taking out the 'and' leaving the comma or maybe just making it two separate sentences.
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No, there doesn't go to be. I'm the very definition of a patronizing so-and-so.
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I'll be honest, the last one isn't really an error, but stylistic. Two consecutive similes that are describing the same sort of thing? Ech. The walls and floor are made out of the same material.
4431054 Oh right I see. It could've been one sentence having a compound noun under the same (one) description. I think?
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I guess. I'm not lecturing, just being an asshole.
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Lol, it's fine you guys, but this discussion has taken way too much comment space. Just saying.
What............................what happened?
Still, very funny!
4431197 Hm... This fic is entertaining.
That's an excellent question... Suggesting that this Twilight, not Tirek, destroyed the homes... that, or canon!Twilight was vaporized by this Sparkle.
I would have killed Twilight if I was one of her friends!