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AdamThePony


Gamer, Anime Fanatic, Casual Fan of Horses and Men. Viewer of various shenanigans. Writer of things that really should come easier to him.

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In this Pokemon Mystery Dungeon-inspired story, I (The Author) recount my adventures in the land of Equestria, juggling blending in with the pony-folk, and finding my way back through any possible means I can find.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 45 )

:heart: Thanks, everypony. I tell ya, writing the 1st chapter was a labor of love, which I had on the back burner for quite a while! Also, as a bit of a preview, expect to see our resident :derpyderp2: making an appearance! :raritywink:

You'll all be happy to know the latest chapter is now up! :pinkiehappy: Enjoy my antics with old Rainbow Dash as she teaches me how to fly! :rainbowdetermined2:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

this is pretty good

If I can get one in before SOPA passes, it'll be a miracle. Keep your fingers crossed.

Chapter 4 is now up, everypony! More antics with Pinkie Pie, ahoy! Only this time, we get to meet her family! :pinkiesmile: Writing this took me just 2 days. That has to be a record for me.:yay:

Alright, fun little story so far, no real problems aside from the occasional spelling flub.
My only question is this: What's with the italics? I mean, both this chapter and the last chapter started in normal font, and then shifted to all italics for the rest of both. It isn't a problem or anything, I'm just kinda curious.

81362 That's very simple; Error in formatting.

...Iambic Pentameter needs not rhyme
'Tis a form of syllabic structuring
If you aren't sure what I'm talking about
This post should illustrate the right meter.

102473 I apologize for incorrect use of the term, then.

OH CELESTIA!!!! This is an amazing story! rated 10/10! Im tracking you.... ;) I have high hopes for this story. I cant wait for another!!! :derpytongue2:

>>harrisonkenwood Thank you. It's a labor of love.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

For some reason, this fiction is on the "Also Liked" Bar, even when I'm on the story itself. Linkception?

Curiosity rising......what is in basement!

251258 I won't directly say, but run a search for Pattycakes.

257918 And thus, you have been trolled good sir. :trollestia:

:yay: Update! And now I wish you could update again soon!

Well, thats ganna suck for ervyone who knows em

:pinkiegasp: OH MY GOSH! This is getting even better! Darn you, cliffhangers. Please update ASAP! :twilightsmile:

264063 Thanks to a lack of internet, I had plenty of time for writing! So there you go! :scootangel:

266433 Thanks, and now you've got me waiting for an epilogue! :fluttercry: Just kidding! :pinkiehappy: I can't wait for the epilogue to come out! Please don't take too long. :twilightsmile:

Ah that best and worst part of any good story, the ending.

BRAVO! :pinkiesmile: It's kind of sad to see it end. :fluttercry: This is a great story and hopefully you make a sequel with him staying in Equestria this time. Great story and I'm happy to have read it. :twilightsmile:

Someone has to draw Adam wearing all of his new gear!
I can't wait for the sequel :pinkiehappy:

270653 Oh, god. Yes. Somebody get on that! Get on that and send it to me!::yay:

That was an amazing story! I'm a little sad that it's over with, and more than a little jealous of Adam the Astute!

Excellent job, you get two thumbs up from me.

I feel like I want to bitch-slap you for how cheesy this was. But sadly I can't. Overly cheesy ? Yes? Entertaining? . . . not bad.

Ok there is a mistake here, you named one of the guards steel sabre, but you later called the guard silver sabre and then you called the same guard steel sabre again, you might want to fix that little mistake and others like it

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Whoops! Thank you for pointing that flub out.

So clean, not a single pony was corrupted in the entire story.:pinkiehappy:
Gotta love a put together story.:twilightsmile:

“I thought about what I did and – WHOA!” I shouted, narrowly avoiding a blast of this enraged reptile's literally ice-cold breath, only for a pony whose coloration reminded me strangely of toothpaste. “And I decided to come back when I heard the roar! Where the hay did this thing come from, anyway?!”

Something seems incomplete here...

the last third(?) of this is in italics



:scootangel: HELPFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

Okay, let's see: Chapter one and my awesometer is already reading dangerously high levels of awesome. I know it's already finished but, I look forward to seeing how this goes.

Near the end, just before they go to Zecora's, you didn't end your italics and all the following text is italicized.

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