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Twilight Sparkle is certain she's going to fail Celestia's test. So certain she casts a spell far beyond her capabilities. In a mysterious twist of fate and magic, Elsa and Twilight switch places. Can they manage to save both worlds in time?
This story is a retelling of the Season 3 Crystal Empire episodes and the movie Frozen.
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Well, I love Frozen so... I suppose I shall check this one out.
that the first start of chapter so if elsa is in pony world then where twilight end up?
Ugg fainting for no reason ending.
Competently written so far, but I am interested to see where you go once you're on your own in terms of setting, dialogue, action, and plot. I shall follow your story to sate my curiosity.
One nitpick I have to pick is your use of 'lavender unicorn' when referring to Twilight. Unless her coloration is of specific importance to the story, feel free to call her Twilight or just use 'she' if you've established her as the subject of the paragraph. Lavender unicorn is distractingly inefficient language. Calling her, specifically, a lavender unicorn is so well-known an example of this that someone wrote a fic parodying the term 'Lavender Unicorn Syndrom.' You only did it once, but it took me right out of the story when it happened.
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4654406 frozen world
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Oohh oooohh gettin gooood
Hmm... I was kinda thinking that maybe it'd be Twilight ending up in Elsa's body and vice versa, but this works great, too. Looking forward to seeing how it goes!
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With the immense amount of magic and dimension traveling Twilight just did--I think it's safe to say she had a very good reasons to faint. And Elsa? ...well, Elsa slipped.
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Nitpick noted. I'll try to steer clear of that in the future.
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Nah. No Freaky Friday in this story.
Interesting, This story has great potential and I hope to see many updates in the future keep up the great work!
If this has Idina singing "I Wasn't Prepared For This" and Tara singing "Let It Go", I'll do a Pinkie Pie and hug you through the computer screen.
This sounds interesting!! Continue please! :D
4699792 .......Equestria Girls just got a little more clever.
I thought Elsa was going to be turned into a pony, and Twilight turned into a human.
well, no they don't twilight can only change human in equestria girls movie like equestria girls: rainbow rock is coming in fall she twilight be change in human againe soon, am i right?
So if Elsa wound up in Equestria and Twilight in Arendelle, then...
WHAT!?! I've gotta see how this turns out! 
are you surpost writing next chapter and find out what happen between twilight and elsa?
We need to see the next chapter soon
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Clear!
*Bzzz Peerreeeeeyyyyyyy*
Liking what I see so far... a little concerned the updates aren't coming. Well I'll track it. Hope this story picks up steam soon!
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Me too
YAY! An update!
You have no idea how much I have been waiting for this to be updated. Good read too!
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"nope".
The first time I read this, I actually thought that was what happened, and that Elsa was just too dazed to notice an anatomy change. But reading it again, I realize
Hooray! A new chapter has been added!
So, Elsa's first encounter with the Mane 6 -- minus Twilight
-- and Spike has had mixed results. Let's hope her meeting with Celestia goes a little better.
Meanwhile, Twilight's intro to the people of Arendelle has been met with fear and hostility, with the exception of Anna. And to top it off, Twilight's out of control spell has begun to freeze Arendelle.
Great stuff, irish_cat! Looking forward to the next one!
Very nice read.
about time i though you noa make anymore chapter but i guess i'm wrong, but anyway be sure you write more chapter soon okay and just tell us when you are going make chapter
More! Now? Please?!
Man, I am so happy this was updated, and I can't wait to read more!
Always glad to see this story get an update. Hoping we'll get some interactions en route to the Crystal Empire. Curious to see how Anna and Twi get along too
wow, i hope elsa will help the crystal empire one way or the other> minwhile i wonder how twilight doing?
Yes! New chapter!
So, the task of protecting the Crystal Empire now falls upon Elsa's shoulders. At least she has her new friends to help back her up.
Awesome job. I'm guessing your next chapter will swing back to Twilight back in Arendelle.
Looking forward to it!
And once again, the Princesses aren't of any use. Then again we wouldn't have the plots to many stories if they had any common sense.
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!
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Well, naturally. It's Twilight's turn.
Looking forward to the next update to see how Twilight is holding up.
The title 'Queen' seems to carry a stigma in Equestria. But I think Elsa will find that out soon enough.
are you gonna make more chapter very soon?
Are you going to continue this story?
It lives!
Glad to see an update on this story.
I'm glad Twilight found a friend in Anna. She definitely needs one, all things considered.
I'll assume that next time, we'll be checking in on Elsa and the ponies, as they head for the Crystal Empire.
Great stuff! Looking forward to more.
Nice to see this up and running again.
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Thanks!
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I'm glad too lol.
That's right. The next chapter we'll be seeing what Elsa is up to.
Thank you!
i forgot this was a thing
what doYay, it's back! I thought it was dead!
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Yes, it is a thing! And will continue to be a thing.
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Good stories never die.
Sooo, when's chapter 5 coming?
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CH 5 will be ready at the end of the month.
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Yay! Btw, Elsa and Luna need a dream chat while Elsa's on the way to the Crystal Empire. Those two have a lot more in common than you'd think. Plus, it'd give Elsa a confidence boost, which she desperately needs ATM.
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August has come and gone, no new chapter. Oyyy.....
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Yeah, sorry about that. I got slammed. I'll try and publish a chapter later on this month.
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Glad to hear. Hope my Luna idea helped!