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Great take on story. It's has the same premise as the original, but it comes with new twists and conflicts to keep things interesting
Alright. I liked the last one, so lets see what you got for this one.
And if 2930170 likes it... Well.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Huh. If 2930170 has endorsed it, must give it a shot.
This is really intriguing. I will have to unfav then fav again so I can click the email update option.
Yea. He, or should I say she, is sooo 'screwed'.
...Well, at least Skyla doesn't seem to be using the spell for the jerkass reasons her 'mother' did. Still, does the spell REQUIRE the mare to be nearly in estrus to use?
Okay... That happened... Again?
To quote Castor from TRON Legacy: 'This is going to be quite a ride'
Oh yes~ I am loving the implications of this set-up.
I'm banking on our wayward protagonist becoming pregoo with Lumy's foals~
C'mon, succumb to the heat!
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Yep, as they say: HERE WE GO AGAIN!
This is looking great so far, I shall track!
Also, is Luminare an earth pony? Because I haven't noticed any mention of him having wings or a horn.
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Crap, he's a unicorn. I should probably go make a slight alteration to the story to signify that
Looking pretty good so far. I enjoyed the original, and seeing as you've got TS's endorsement, I'm gonna keep an eye out for future chapters.
2930730 While you're at it, fix the broken link/image in the author's notes.
The original was a good fic, and I'm curious as to how this one will turn out.
Hey, grats on getting featured
And here we go again.
Knowing the ending to the original Royal Duties, I'm genuinely curious to see how this will end.
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I didn't actually link to anything.
2931131 Well, there's a colon at the end of the first sentence in the author's notes. I thought you were trying to put an image or a link in.
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I did originally, but thought better of it. I'm a bit afraid the guy will tell me to pull the character. ^^;
2931148 Did you ask for permission to use the likeness?
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No, this is a clop fic so I'm a bit hesitant to ask. I just really liked the design. If it comes down to it and they tell me to pull it, I will but I'd rather just play it low.
Sense Twisted Spectrum approves I guess I must read it. But in the meantime I'm just not in the mood, I'll review later.
Is their going to be an actual thought out story, or will the story be there just to make the clop make sense?
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As of now there isn't any clop. I'm more focused on the story and characters.
I hope he doesn't choose to stay because I'm sure Cadance will figure things out immediately.
Whelp, this is definitely well written. That and TwistedSpectrum's seal of approval earns an auto thumbs up.
2931409 that's actually good to hear, atm it's so hot right here I don't think I could handle a full fledged clop scene. Anyways I'm going to give this it shot now, Lets see what you got!
The Ring. The creepy mother &@$&$@& girl in the well. That was my first thought when reading Twisted Spectrum's, so your inclusion of it just gave yourself an instant like;) time to read more.
So far It seems Cadence has genes that make the owner want to turn into a human. Pretty good chapter, I can see why Twisted likes it. So how did whats-her-name know that he had the weekend off?
Wouldn't Shining immediately figure out something's wrong if our guy didn't make her use her magic?
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I've thought of that. :P
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She didn't, it was just a coincidence.
I really liked this chapter! I loved Cadence's son, he felt real and not just a side character. Good job so far!
I KNEW a continuation of this was going to be made MUWAHAHAHAHAHA
I like this theme even more with the focus on story over clop. Totally following it now.
NICE XD
I do so hope that Skyla/or the human character decide to just abandon their old life or something like that. (Also, I don't like the idea of Skyla being fucked while...she's not there. Skyla seems really nice and...yeah the previous story had reasons. I hope everything works out fine though.)
I keep reading the title as "Royal Duties: Interhorse".
Um....I'm still cautious about this. I love all the characters so far and they are portrayed well, but unlike the other story, I don't want the human to remain as a pony, nor Skyla to remain as a human. Skyla has a lot of things in her world that she loves and cares for.
I know this is your story, but I'm still nervous is all. (Will Skyla meet the real Cadance by the way?)
2932069 By the way Skyla's personality was portrayed, it seems that the human won't stay in Equestria, unless something happens in which both Skyla and him stay in Equestria, but I feel that might be too much of a cop-out.
Why do I have a feeling that, if she doesn't find out the human's name, she'll try to make a more masculine version of Skyla, only able to come up with a name like Skyrim.
This is where you just walk away, this sentence is classic 'All you have to do is .... but what will really happen is a whole bunch of shit!'
More chapters please. This looks great, very different from others unofficial-official sequels that are just really bad or nonsense.
I saw parts of another line and the reference but i couldn't pass up completing the song
And soon you’ll be walking cross the floor
Put one foot in front of the other
And soon you’ll be walking out the door
Oh boy wouldn't he want to walk out the door as well. No sorry i mean oh Girl
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I hope to get at least one chapter out a week. My schedule is pretty hectic though, so please bear with me.
I cant wait when he/she meet "cadance". "She" will be probably pissed off because of all of this(and who else expect cadance to be "pernament" pregnant?)
Follow up on royal duties? This will be good
whats the update schedule on this fic of goodness? suffice it to say, I need moar.
She just forgot to mention that her definition of "around" is "in bed with my lover".
It's a classic mistake, happens to everyone. Why just last week...