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i was wondering if this be continued.
I got to ask the last chapter hinted a bit that Zecora may have feelings for Mr. Cake and hopefully Mrs. Cake love to see them pull her into a relationship.
This story is continuing the great trend from the last story. I welcome seeing where this goes, and what shenanigans it gets into. Going to repeat that I love how Cup Cake is pushing this along without it feeling forced at all. The mutual mind alterations is still am amazing concept that really helps with the sense of consent and equality.
Loved the scene with the foals, including the lactation bit. It really fits the theme.
And so it begins anew. Still crossing my fingers for Angel doing anal.
I really want to see them invite pinke to join them. And for her to accept. That would be awsome.
Heeeeeeee!!!!! This is so great!!!!!!
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Huh, did it hint at that? I never intended it to.
As it stands right now, Zecora isn't into Mr. Cake. As for Zecora showing up. She likely will, but I'm still not really up for doing anything sexual with her.
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Yeah... I'm not going to be doing that.
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I can assure you that all the potion did was make Carrot Cake, open to considering ideas, and seeing her as a mare.
Zecora said the potion can't bend the mind, only give suggestions. Basically the MOMENT Mr. Cake or Mrs. Cake decided they didn't like feeling/thinking that way, the influence is gone. It stops.
Think of it as if you decided you wanted to act just like Rarity, and found a spell that would let you do so. As long as you wish for the spell to make you act like Rarity, it'll do so. The moment you don't want it to, it stops. No lingering effects, it's just gone. Off like a light switch.
That's the same principle here. Anything you read that happens in this story is because Angel Cake or Cup Cake allowed it to happen. Cup Cake is enjoying her time as being more aggressive, so the potion continues to aid her in that.
Angel Cake is still very unsure about being a mare yes, but she's lived her life as a stallion. However deep down, she's kinda curious, and she does truly want to make Cup Cake happy. So she's collecting herself and slowly testing the waters. I realize someone can argue that her finding stallions attractive goes against this, and while the potion is slightly to blame, despite her protests of not wanting to like stallions, being a mare is slowly growing on her, and so are thoughts of doing 'things' with stallions.
Curiosity can be very powerful.
The nursing scene I just wanted to write. Nothing I can really say there. Some people likely won't like it, but well I wanted it, so it's there. *shrugs*
Errant "the" in there.
Fell into present tense.
whe -> when
A cute continuation. I am loving how you are portraying them, and the changes being in a different body, with different urges, and imposed modifications, cause. Now that they are both female, feminine pronoun ambiguity abounds. It might have been better to write in the first person so you could keep their interactions to "I" and "her."
Please, keep up the lovely story!
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Thank you for the corrections!
And yes the pronoun game here has been rather difficult to do, but well the first story wasn't in first person, so I didn't want to do that for this one.
Guess I can chalk it up to a challenge to myself as a writer. ^^;
I sense trouble brewing. And it ain't just the coffee!
Pinkie should join them, teach Angel the art of a food fetish
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Horses/Ponies don't have chins. Google it.
I know these are cartoon variants of them, but I still can't bring myself to type 'chin' knowing that.
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Pinkie: Hi! It's me Pinkie Pie! *suddenly bedroom eyes and sultry voice* and I made this party just for you.
Angel: *heavy blush* Um I-I need an adult?
Pinkie: *gets closer* You are an adult. *turns off light*
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man I hope you do a full version of that
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Withdrawn.
Huh.
Either way, i look forward to the proceeding chapters.
Fuuuuuck!!!!... I just finished the last fic and now I can’t continue reading till the thing is finished...
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Was that a DBZA quote... you sir or madam have good taste!
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While I know DBZ Abridged has used that line a few times, it wasn't a quote from it in this instance.
That line has been around much longer then DBZ Abridged. :P
Awwww....I wanted Angel to be pounded by a stallion @.@
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In due time. ^_-
I love this story and the one before it. As far as the twins nursing, most people in Europe let their kids nurse into toddler-hood. One of the women on "The View" had an uncle who was breast fed until about this age. He would tell his mother "Latte! Latte!"
Will this unusual gem be continued??
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Eventually.
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Well, eventually is not before Halloween.
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Hate to say it, but it's likely not before next year either.
I barely have to do any work for 'Reader's choices' and even that is slipping in the updates.
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Meh, new year and a new chapter totally works for me!
I really wonder when you are going to update... GIVE ME MOAR NOW
Still watching this space hopeing for an update.
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Fingers crossed, I'm hoping to have one by Valentine's day.
Valentine's? I can live with that!
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Again fingers crossed. Most times I try this something comes up. This might not be any different. :/
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Well, I shall still hold out Hope, one of the most precious things I have in my life!
... if I can find her, that silly cat.
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And I proceeded to get sick, and my computer chair just quit and broke on me, so yeah. I'm going to say the chances of this updating on the day are slim. At this point I'm not sure why my luck hates my writing, but there you go.
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Well, at least I have my cat.
Soon...
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Not...really... (I mean yeah it's coming, but I wouldn't call it "soon")
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... pardon me.
*muffled screaming and cursing*
Better... now, could you please give an estimated time frame?
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I can't. I have no idea. Look man, I am sorry. I know you want to read more, but 90% of the time when I come home from work, I'm too out of it to bother.
There is a contest going on right now that has a submit day in May. My plan is to hopefully have the next chapter of Cake Mix 2 out and a new story (My entry for the contest) out by then, but remember. Many of my stories have gone YEARS now without updates, and that's pretty much been shown to be set in stone.
Only way that'll ever change is if I could work from home or something, but yeah. I can't so... this is the best I can give. :/
I love this so far I hope Zecora joins in as a futa.
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Sorry, not into futa, so won't be doing that :/
I'm also purposely avoiding having Zecora join in on any sexy times. I just don't want to figure out her dialogue for that. >_<
Good to see more of this
To quote from Josh Scorcher's review of Feeling Pinkie Keen...
In the words of Kang the Mad...
Yes! An update!
HAPPY JINGLEMAS TO ALL! AND TO ALL A GOOD NIGHT!
2020 IS SAVED
Wonderful update to this story!
Got to say loving this crazy little world you are building full of magical mishaps