It has been eighty years since Twilight came to Ponyville. She has grown old and her days of adventures have long since past. She has lost a lot. But on the day before the Summer Sun Festival, she likes to pause and reflect. Who knows if she'll be able to do this again.
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A beautiful story!
Good bit of story, just two cases I'm not sure you meant it-
"Sweet Apple" rather than "Sweat Apple", and "feat" rather than "feet", right? :)
i second that emotion
May Celestia give her blessings. I love your story from top to toe. However numerous the spelling errors seem, you story... may your story grow to be a classic never to be forgotten.
GOD DAMNIT MY ROOM IS NOW FLOODED YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARD!
Manly tears were shed over this story. 'Nuff said.
static1.fjcdn.com/thumbnails/comments/here+ya+go+lt+3+_56979d2a5ed17836be729c898ea0474a.gif I think this is appropriate
so sad, but so good.
G-Good story. It gave me a good cry.
You only truly die when no-one remembers you anymore. Well, Twilight decided that she and her friends would be remembered as long as there was a pony civilisation. A simple enough wish for a mare who did so much for everypony in Equestria.
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Sometimes, its the simple things that matter most. People just don't realize that.
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To be honest, I was tearing up while I wrote this story. And as long as I made you cry, then I did my job! There where some other things I had planned to put in this story. Like the fate of DT and SS. Also, I had planned on having Spike rush over to the library as soon as he found out. However, I felt this was good enough. Oh, also there would have been a secret Big Mac and Twilight flashback, but I also decided against that.
Well, he's hoping that you read my works in the future.
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Oh, I most definitely will. Once again, great job.
The feels... I can't breathe... I love you, you splendid bastard
2118666 I will.good story, here are sad ponies for the sad story.
wow i gotta give you mad props: that was beautiful! not only that but everything just flowed perfectly and ended on a fitting bittersweet note. A story well written!
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Glad you enjoyed it. My next story, whichever one I do, won't be so sad. I think
This, was pretty good. I don't read a lot of fanfic, and this is the first in a while, and it was a good one to pick up with. A bit sad, but well written. Also for whatever reason I was hoping "Tears in Rain" would pop in, though I guess the general theme of that did
Good work, mate!
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Never heard of 'Tears in the Rain'. Oh well. Glad you enjoyed this story.
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Well I am looking for a beta if you are interested.
I am crying really hard right now. Wonderful job, you magnificent author!
*sniff*... THE FEELS!
This is a nice story, but you might want to make another proofreading pass. Among other things, you've consistently used "Sweat" instead of "Sweet" for all things apple-related (sweating is what you do after exercise, and isn't very appetizing).
If you want, I can proofread it for you, but that would involve mailing hardcopy back to you (I'm of the "use red ink on a printout" school). Having a friend who's local to you proofread it might be more convenient for you.
I still certainly enjoyed the story, and I've added "thousand year change" to the to-read queue as well.
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I have said this before: I cried while writing this story.
This is a very sad tear-jerker.
I didn't cry, but it made me sneeze. Well Done.
Urrrrkk! My heart! Stop tugging on those strings, I need them!
You heartless, sad making bastard....
That story was so beautiful... And heart wrenching....
How did I suffer through t without a heart attack?
Wow, you predicted the real reason she almost closed the Boutique well over 2 years ago! Spooky...
ok for some time Im going trough people I follow to read things I have missed before.
I had found you trough your main story "thousand year change "
I know this is older.
Now I would probably do few things differently and focus on few other things. Still ending had so much feelings that I cried. And that managed only two other pony things before - some scenes from Fallout: Equestria and SFM Remembrance by Argodaemon... well done
Have to admit that gramatical and spelling errors nagged me but still it is worthy of my fav.
PS: please finish Thousand Year Change. If you decide to make a hardcover print I would definitely buy it.
It took me long enough to get around to reading this, but I'm glad I finally did. I fully agree with the lesson being taught by this story: so long as we remember, they're still alive.
Straight into my Top Faves Short List, this goes!
7896913 glad you liked it
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I feel like, to make it apt, you need to publish this as a hardcopy. I would sell the world for this kind of stuff on my bookcase.