Kirby is an unknown phenomenon. His powers confused the inhabitants of Dreamland and foiled the plots of evil masterminds. Over all, he's a super tough, pink puff.
After a warp in Kirby's spaceship, he is rocketed into Equestria, where he must adapt to the strange land and find a way to fix his ship, but not before shenanigans ensue...
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A/N: As Kirby is an enigma, I will be placing it as either 3rd person Kirby, or 1st person for one of the main six. POVs will alternate.
P.S. I'm basing this off of the show "Kirby: Right Back at Ya'!" and "Hoshi No Kaabi"
Chapters (18)
Kirby, Right back at Ya?
KNFSIDGJKAS
I LOVE THAT SHOW!!
What are you talking about this will be great
I'm liking the premise here. This takes place after Right Back at Ya correct? Then your going to need some new powers or some rehashes on the old favorites. May I suggest a few? Conveniently listed around certain Elements of Harmony. For your perusal.
Magic: Beam, Magic, Laser, Mirror, & FLARE BEAM
Honesty: Whip, Fighter, Stone, Hammer, Leaf, & GRAND HAMMER
Kindness: Animal, Parasol, Needle, Ice, Cupid, & SNOW BOWL
Loyalty: Wing, Tornado, Cutter, Wheel, & Jet. (Rainbow doesn't get a super ability. Because her focus is on speed not strength.)
Generosity: Sword, Water, Clean*, Hi-Jump, & ULTRA SWORD
Laughter: Yo-Yo, Bomb, Ninja, Balloon, Fire, & MONSTER FLAME! (Picked a bunch of random skills for Pinkie because come on... It's Pinkie. Though the Yo-Yo one had to be there...)
(Also including a handy link to check out the powers and much more.)
http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_copy_abilities#Exclusive_Copy_Abilities_.28Kirby:_Right_Back_at_Ya.21.29
I really appreciate the feed-back so far guys! I'm glad to see that people still remember that show, because it is my childhood.
I've also got a nice plan for things to happen between Kirby... my only conflict is how I'm supposed to type "poyo" because I'm not exactly sure how that's supposed to be like
I spotted the Looney Tunes reference in the chapter. Good on ya
Kirby sees something new: "Oh boy! Time for more fun!"
Twilight sees something new: "Everypony stay back! It could be dangerous!"
Goddamn ponies.
This is looking out to be great. If I knew anything about the show, I'm sure I would enjoy it ten times more.
Seriously though: Good start. I'm not gonna say 'I demand moar' because in my experience, that just puts pressure on the writer. But I'll admit I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
Thumbs up for doing what I should be doing! (writing)
1571044 I'm glad about that. I thought this would be totally hated for being bad or something.
P.S. Watch the show... seriously... it's one of the main reasons my profile pic is that...
1571055 Puts pressure? Hell, it makes me try harder!
1571071 Well than.
GIVE ME MOAR.
1571088 I actually had this as a separate tab for a week because I couldn't bring myself to finish it. Luckily, after I submitted it, I read over it before realizing it wasn't too bad. I'm still having trouble processing that I actually wrote it
I also am REALLY looking forward to the things Kirby will do, because they were hilariously amazing in the show, and my old story doesn't motivate me as much as this one does.
Being a massive Kirby fan, I love you for this. Thank you so much!
Woohoo! Kirby!
1570592 I watched It in Japanese.
1570696 For Pinkie? Party bomb!
Yay! More massive Kirby fans!
first off:theme songs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=veeFQXWzLKA
or this one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x1M7kJASyoQ
second of all: Kirby!!!! how could i not think of this crossover good thinking
ALL OF MY YES!
Very , Very interesting start.
By the way, if you manage to spot any grammatical errors, tell me. I don't like having bad grammar.
Since we don't have Right Back At Ya! in my country, I watched the Japanese version. Which I recommend actually, it has a lot of cut content and better voice acting.
On another note, if you don't make this work I will kill you. You can't possibly fail, this is too awesome a concept to ruin. But this could be the start of something totally awesome, so do it justice!
1573552 Sir, yes, sir!
I want to make this work as much as the next guy, believe me.
1573698 encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTynnG_SNVn_KoHyuewRh-7faIE59In6Vv-USOzQv6mT0GinDc7kg please more
1573845 Not if I die from kitty-induced diabeetus first.
Coolio! #14 on what's hot, 31:0 like to dislike... That means I actually did something right!
imageshack.us/a/img33/5764/likethischapter.jpg and just like it was your childhood it is also mine, and gosh dang i love that show
yay! HURRY UP
1576156 Okie-Dokie-Lokie! I mean, it's not like I'm typing the next chapter right now or something...
C'mon man! Write this thing!
...I mean, If that's all right with you.
But, seriously. This story is great. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
1576188 Will do, sir.
P.S. You're the 999th person to view one of my stories
Heyoooo munomana YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON EVER to think of a crossover with kirby!
Kirby is soooo awsome, let us all bow down to kirby and munomana for giving us this fic.
Kirby may be an enigma, but he's predictiable once you get to know him.
He's also the equivalent of a toddler, has an interest in anything he hasn't seen before, has a short attention span, and has been shown to speak in english once or twice. However, he's only called out two names in the anime.
Bun
and Meta Knight(Which he pronounced as "Meh-Na", it was adorable.
1579413 I know, that's how I'm gonna write him XD
I mean you only know his personality... I've watched that all through my childhood
1580809 Go ahead and do it! I'm not holding you back.
btw. He's not gonna be controlled around. I'll just be going to his POV every now and then where he will be in control of himself. He'll be in his own control for the majority of the fic.
Kirby gonna eat all the apples!
AND HOW DARE RAINBOWDASH KICK SOMETHING THAT CUTE
This is great!
Although, I want to see everyone will react when Kirby swallows something.
Keep going!
1581183 I'm aching to write about Kirby in the morning... I'm really dying to do it... literally.
Rainbow Dash will get punished in the future... I promise...
1581197 I used to be like you... and I still am because I really want to write that part....
I just wish they had watermelon patches in Ponyville.
Kirby's gonna be all like, "Dem apples..."
Oh, Dash, you're always 'hit first, ask later'...
Well, karma is going to get you for hurting Kirby!
1581380 When you're a huge kirby fan since you were 4, you find the time to write a Kirby story.
The cool part is that I get to practically create the cliches that future Kirby crossovers might have... if they decide to even go the same way...
And he'll be eating a LOT of apples...
Popular stories section?
1581419 Isn't that a little... harsh? It's not like he ate King DeDeDe after he hammered him down a couple hundred foot chasm.
My prediction is that the first major monster will smack Dash so hard she does exactly what she did to Kirby. May I suggest an Enemy with the Mirror Power?
1581462 Sounds cool, but I want to start out with maybe a monster where he will get a simple ability from like the first games/episodes in the spirit of start to finish.
I don't wanna start with a giant windmill firing freaking mirror stars at ponies out of nowhere. I gotta add a backstory and reason and Idea.
Thanks for the idea though
1581486
Hmm, well the three most basic powers in Kirby are, Fire, Sword, and if I'm recalling right Beam. So one of those three would work. But, remember that in the show Kirby could gain powers simply by inhaling certain objects. Cook from a Frying Pan, Hammer from a Mallet. That kind of stuff. I honestly think he'd snag sleep in the next chapter by inhaling Granny Smith's Sleeping Cap.
It's a rather useless power but, it's good for demonstrative purposes.
1581504 Good point. When It comes to enemies, I'll start with simple powers. When it comes to everyday life, I'll mix it up.
Thanks a lot for the input!
1581562
Your very welcome. Kirby is one of my all time favorite characters and the show never got the attention it deserved. So keep on trucking and if you need some ideas for what regular objects give powers remember that there's two powers that could be useful during the introductions. Clean (From inhaling a Broom.) & Cook (From inhaling a Cooking Implement.)
Is that a Kirby fic I spy?
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Can't wait to see him devour a frying pan
1581208
Like what? Kirby swallows Rainbow and he gets the ability to fly?