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LucidTech


Tired always.

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When a man finds out that he's a shell of his former self due to a meddling death god, how exactly will he take it? Pokemon Crossover.

Don't mind me, just following the crowd.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 229 )

Its an amazing story keep it up.

“Aww mom.” Sparkler and Derpy said at the same time.

Pretty sure that's supposed to be Sparkler and Dinky.

Silly ponies and Hydra. Everybody knows that stomp and mega kick are NORMAL type moves XD.

The power of editing compels me to fix this injustice to your writing skills! ...but I don't wanna, I'm sick. :ajsleepy:

Had to prove that you could write one too, eh?

lol

Also, in a piece of dialogue like this:

“Aww mom.” Sparkler and Derpy said at the same time.

The period after 'mom' should be a comma. There's a lot of these mistakes riddled throughout.

P.S. You bastard. I was going to use Shedinja. :derpytongue2:

I'm just going out on a limb here and say the move he used was deflect, right?

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You know, I saw that while I was going over it again. I guess I didn't fix it though.

Thanks for the reminder.

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It was his wonder guard kicking in actually.

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You still should. Fimfic needs more Shedinja.

Also, in regards to the error, yes I know. You and Staple should start up a club. Sheesh. ;p

Don't you have already too much unfinished stories? (faved anyway...)

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*too many* and yes, yes I do.

Sory english is my second language :twilightsheepish:

Lord Almighty, what's with the sudden surge of Pokémon crossovers?

quick question: how long 'til the next update. And by the way awesome story, i love shedinja, and five mustaches:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I think you must make mroe....

NOW

That was probably the closest anypony will get to guessing what he is anytime soon.:twilightsheepish:

Dammit Chance, stop whining and pull up your big boy pants.

Chance vs Diamond tiara

Chance is gonna do something Ghosty aint he?

For someone who's just "hopping on a bandwagon",
you've done quite a good job of it!
I look forward to more.

Please make silver spoon look into the hole in his back... PLEASE!

I have to say one thing...
Next time Chance is with DT and SS, all he needs to do is turn around.:pinkiecrazy:

There's been a lot of pokemon crossovers lately. Faving because shedinja.

awsome! :derpytongue2:

if only there are more poke-pony fics like this......

I can't wait for more of this! :raritystarry:

Honestly I always thought that because shedinja was a "shell" it was just the ghost in it operating the shell that did it. (lol ghost in the shell) So the pained cry that shedinja could make would probably be like a banshee's screech

words can't express how happy this story makes me. :pinkiehappy:

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Yes! This is exactly what I was thinking when I read the title.

This looks like fun! Death, I'll keep watching this guy. If you don't mind that is.

If you can belch out chapters this fast, I'm gonna be a happy brony.

Hmm, wonder why none of these pokemon stories have the main character being a first evolution. How cool would it be if they could Evolve in equestria! or something.
Yeah, funny story, look forward to more etc etc :D

What's with all the new pokemon crossovers lately? there's been like 3 in the past 2 weeks.

shedinja is awesome though, so I'll put this one the reading lsit.

I WAS JUST ABOUT TO MAKE AN OLD CHATEAU FIC WITH SHEDINJA.
DAMMIT.

Congratulations. You didn't screw up a Pokémon crossover. +10 internet. I hope it doesn't descend into nothing.

2097389 Imagine if the MC was a Nincada and after evolving, there'd be two of them.

2098135 Would make for either an interesting, or a complicated story XD

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Do it you worthless normal type slug pokemon. We need as many of this stories as we can get.

2092930 So, he is using defensive moves on instinct? :rainbowhuh:

2098217 :rainbowlaugh: ahh... hillarious. Fantastic story like always N64 :twilightsmile: can't wait to see whats in store next

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